SanskritiS thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its my first OS.
Swaron OS
It was raining continuously from morning. Somewhere in the city a beautiful woman was sitting beside window watching the raindrops on the mirror humming some melody. She was remembering her beautiful memories attached with rains.

Flashback
Sharon and Swayam were completing their work in the college for the upcoming event. It was evening when they finished their work. Clear blue sky has changed its color to grayish-black. They were walking hand in hand on the road.
Sharon (looked above) : it will rain today.
As she completed her sentence it has started raining.
Swayam: Lets look for a shelter soon or else we would get drenched in rain.
He started finding a shelter n soon found a big tree shed. As he turned he didn't found Sharon behind. He called out for her name but no response came. He made his way into the rains.
Sharon was dancing on the road madly not caring about the world around her
Swayam was mesmerized by the beauty dancing in front of his eyes. His steps involuntarily forwarded towards Sharon. As soon as he reached to her he caught her by her waist n started dancing. There was no music around n they were moving gracefully to the sounds of their heartbeats mixed with the sound of rain drops. It was their first dance in the rain.

Present
A smile crept on Sharon's face as she remembered their dance in the rain. She felt a hand on her shoulders. It was Swayam standing behind her.
Swayam : Remembering old memories?
Sharon: hmmm
Swayam: Let us enjoy the rain

The two souls completely in love with each other walked into the rain creating new memories.

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_Deepika_ thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW..will unres tomo dear😳
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Hey Dear...
Thanx for the beautiful OS😊
Awww..its like a dream...SWARON...passionate..cute..they can change the mood in fraction of seconds..
And they can force the viewer to change moods accordingly..
Beautiful OS dear..lovely 1st attempt ...
I am still lost in the SWARON dreamland...
Thanx for adding fuel to my imaginations...
Loved this line...
Swayam was mesmerized by the beauty dancing in front of his eyes. His steps involuntarily forwarded towards Sharon. As soon as he reached to her he caught her by her waist n started dancing. There was no music around n they were moving gracefully to the sounds of their heartbeats mixed with the sound of rain drops. It was their first dance in the rain.
Loved the OS dearEmbarrassed...lovely concept...SWARON 1st rain dance..dreamy
Thanks for the link..means a lot😊
Luv
Deep
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
pehlanasha. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow, It was so beautiful!! I love imagining SwaRon in rains!!😳😊

Love the title RAINS!! But but but if you dare to give such a short one from next time, i will make sure to eat you alive and yes i loved it because i believe in quality and not quantity but still i am greedy about SwaRon! 😳

Well it was very good for the first times!!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey sastina...I hope m ri8 in ur name...
Toh u were saying its ur first os really but it doesn't look like bcoz u wrote it so beautifully...k I was thinking k ager tu ff orss likhti toh kitna maja aata...(toh dil pe leke ek ss, ff likhhi daal yaar.)..bbut why it was so chota...arhhh isse thoda bada likhti toh... 😡 ...
But dear sachhi u should write on swaron more n more n give us a pleasure to read n get lost ourselves in swaron world
SanskritiS thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Can someone send Pms on my behalf
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It is indeed a beautifull os.
Its ur first write up? really but u did an amazing job.Pls write more such stuffs on swaron n pls a bit longer n pm me too..:)
Suni1986 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey it was wonderful os yar
sharon remembering her beauiful memory with him in rain

sharon dancing in rain like small child who get happy whn receive lollypop
nd swayam lost in her beuty n dance with each other

i love d os small, cute n simple
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was amazing one u r first one os is pretty good. Please write more on Swaron . Thanx for writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful and flowing as a river, it touches your heart. So well penned down, with so much love... Thanks so much for the splendid OS
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
i olways wished a rain sequence lyk dis..thank u so much for writng,m happy to read dis

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