Alvida : A KriYaansh Oneshot

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

emtional but awesome os...their emotions were described beautifully...

thanks 4 the pm...

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

kaafi confusing n wired tha ye OS

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

sad OS...

padun kya??? 🤔
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padh hi liya...

and will i sound stupid...

agr me bolu k i was feeling emotional as well as i was smiling...🤔

firstly i was like k what r u doing...

i mean ye kya likha hai iss ladaki ne...😆

but jese jese i kept reading...

i dont know it was refreshing...

and that last part...

"Main use apani aadat daal raha tha"...damnnn...

so i guess i loved it...🤔

Edited by ..Roop.. - 11 years ago

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

and which song is this...??

mere speakers kharab hain... :(

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Angel

@Endurance

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Khuda hai ,hum khuda se mohabat karte hain magar hum uske saath nahin magar uski bandagi se lataluk bhi nahe ...

Khuda ko hum baandh kar nahe rakh sakte na hee uski bandagi ko hum khud se khatam kar sakte hain ...

Rey ka Khuda and uski Bandagi towards Kria ...

The biggest sacrifice is to sacrifice urself for the one u love...

He just did that ...

Dee i disagree its not illogical ,i think its just Pure Human Fear and its pretty very much Logical ...

Kuch khone ke dar se hum us cheex ko hasil bhi nahe kar paate ...

A Beautiful OS

So mat jaana parte parte..🤣

Edited by Endurance - 11 years ago

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Wow!!!!
I still dnt understand how u said it to b a sad ending!!!
Cz for me its a happy continuation!!! In dis u always have a chance to continue from where u left!!!
After all d confession!!! He let her go!!! Having full faith on his love!!!
D place he has in her heart!!!
N all dis tym...for two days...he had been wid her all d tym!!!
Gave her his chain...as a rememberence dat she is his...n can b wid him wenever she feels lyk it!!!!
She is his!!!!
N wen all of d gang asked him bout it...he simply answered dat he was making her habituated of his presence around her!!!
So dat she takes minimum tym to return to him!!!
I love it!!!!! Seriously!!!!
Its awesome!!!!
N dii...i hope i can call u dat...so i was saying...ya...it surely was logical...having d basic human fear of losing n dats y going away from d thing v love as early as possible to have d minimal pain!!!!
Bt dat only increases d pain!!! N here rey is making her to come back to him!!!

Bore ho gaye to sry!!! *kaan pakad k* 😊