Alvida : A KriYaansh Oneshot

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Posted: 11 years ago
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So on before hand I warn you people !!

This is a sad OS . In the End KriYaansh won't be together. Infact the whole OS about how they go apart . So do not expect a part where I will unite them and all.

Thanks to Qubool Hai. Instead of clicking on Jodha-Akbar I clicked on Qubool hai and then came across this song and yeah I regret I am knowing this song this late.

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Trust. She is feared to trust again. Long back she accepted the loneliness in her life. She knows. He is her biggest strength and he is her biggest weakness. Even death seems less fearful before the thought of loosing him. And thus she choose.

Leave him forever. Never come back. Never look back. Never go back. Never LOVEback.

And with that she decided to leave in 2 days after her performance. She decided to give a proper Good bye to everyone!!

Trust. He is striving hard to gain it . He long back left his loneliness back. He wanted her presence. Her. He knows, she is his biggest strength and she is his biggest weakness. He can even face death with so much dare if she is with him. Such is the strength he got with her. And thus he Choose.

Never leave her alone, AGAIN. Just be with her. Have her in arms forever. Never let her go. LOVE her unconditionally.

With that he decided he will make her his forever. He still remember's her words.

" Mera yaha koi apna nahi hai , isiliye meri maasi ne mujhe adopt kiya. Aur mai unke saath US mei rehti hun "

Apna. Hoga Kriya . Hamesha keliye banunga

He was determined . Today is the day of performance. And after that he will propose her. Infront of everyone. He will own her with all Pride . He grinned wide thinking about it.

" Rey mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai " he is actually shocked to see her in the boys green room. He looked around and saw all the boys staring at him. He looked at swayam .

" Guys !! hum kuch meetha khaake aate hai performance ke pehle?? " he tried to take everyone away.

" Uski zaroorat nahi Swayam " she smiled simply at him. Rey frowned at her seeing her walk to him looking ONLY at him.

" Mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai , kya meri baat khatam hone tak wait karenge?? " she asked placing a hand on his cheek. He looked at her shocked. She is never a girl who came this close to him in front of everyone. But knowing she is waiting for his answer he nodded.

" Rani Laxmi bhai " she stated with a straight face confusing him more.

" Your Fighter , I couldn't hold her anymore. Pata nahi kab, but she is lost long back in the flow. I am tired of fighting. With you, with the fate and with myself. With every cell of my body. Every part of my heart and mind. I love you. And let's part away right here. "

" Kriya " he was shaken with her words , fear started filling in him. Never in life he feared this much.

"Shhh!! Poora karne do meri baat. " she placed a finger on his lips and loving caressed his hair.

"Cry how much you want. Mai yahi hun, par promise me to not cry when I leave. Mai pal pal darke nahi jee sakti Rey. Aap mereliye bohut important ho. But still I just can't trust myself. Poori life maine fight kiya hai , kisi na kisi cheez ko leke. Mujhe pata hai aap bhi mujhse pyaar karte ho. Par meri khud pe trust na hone ki wajah se mai aapko baar baar nahi kho sakti. Mar mar ke jee nahi sakti "

" Kriya !! "

" Rey please "

"No!! Tum meri baat suno. Trust tum khud pe nahi karti . Par mujhpe toh karti hona. Then trust me Kriya , Mai tumpe bohut trust karta hun , and I will never let you go . Whatever happens. Par mai tumhe jaane nahi de sakta. I love you Kriya. Hum saath rahenge . Hamesha. Infact mai tumhe performance ke baad poochne wala tha. Hum legally bhi saath banjayenge. But I can't live alone Kriya. Aur agar meri life mei wo space koi fill kar sakta hai toh wo tum ho . Please don't do this to US Kriya. "

" I know Rey. Ab humare beech aisa koi reason bhi nahi ki hum alag hojaye. Par , par mujhe dar lag raha hai Rey. Saath rehne se dar lagta hai ki fir se akeli na ban jaun. And iss wajah se na mai khush reh paungi , naa hi aap. Maine akela rehna seekhliya. Ab firse kabhi seekhna padega toh mai kar nahi paungi. Pata nahi kal kya hoga. Par kuch ho isse pehle mai humare raste alag karna chahti hun. "

" Par Kriya "

"Shhh " and with that she leaned in and kissed him with all the love she had. He held her close and kissed back . That moment he cried. He broke down. In her arms. Not because of loosing her. Because he will now let her live alone.

After few minutes he pulled back. Removing his chain he put it on her neck.

" I will let you go "

"Rey ye kya bol raha hai "Swayam and vicky spoke together but stopped see him signal through his palm.

" But promise me. Ki tum ye chain kabhi nahi nikalogi. And jis din tumhe akele rehne se darr lagne lagega uss din wapas mere paas aaogi . Bina do baar soche. Promise me Kriya. The moment being alone scares you will head back to me. " He cupped her face knowing her well. Running from self is what she does the best. He want's to see his chain reminding her more of him every day how will she run away from herself. And from HIM. Of-course she is being stupid. But he wants her happy. And she will never be if she keeps fearing about them going apart. Even if it meant her loosing her total trust on herself and return back trusting him and only him, he will let that happen.

" Now you should go and get ready!! We are gonna rock. " he kissed her forehead not giving her a chance to say anything. And the determined look in his eyes barely let her say something. Nodding her head she walked away.

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She sat on the stool , her hands between her knees slightly moving to and fro head hanging down. He had ordered everyone to leave her alone as she wanted and help him in packing her stuff. Last two days were still confusing to her. He was with her every second. He woke her up caressing her cheeks holding her tight in his arms and rocking her to sleep. She is lost in her thoughts when she felt him.

He cupped her face and lifted it up and she looked at him standing in front of her. With that hearty smile. He adjusted her hair a bit and placed a clip in her hair.

" Never stop wearing these . I love you in those . Okay ?? " he said lovingly.She had nothing to say but simply nod her head.

"It's time you go !! Mai airport nahi aaunga. Swayam chod dega tujhe . Okay?? Let's make it easy okay?? " he made her stand and she looked at him blank. Why is he so confident that she will be back when she is not herself sure. All she knows is she will kill her to death being alone.

And her thoughts were interrupted by his smooth lips on hers and she kissed him back with all love. She could sense him smile.

It's been a day she left. That whole day he was in her room locked up . Then next day when he came out Sharon was quick on her toes.

" Rey!! Mujhe abhi bhi samajh nahi aaraha hai . Why did you let her go when it hurts you so much?? Rey tum aakhir "

" I am not hurt Sharon. Infact mei uska room theek kar raha tha . That's it " He walked to the couch .

"Simmi thoda coffee mil sakta hai?? "

"Rey !! Stop being like this dude. Aisa act mat karo jaise kuch hua hi nahi . Mujhe kuch samjh nahi aaraha hai . Usse jaane deta hai aur upar se do din uska poora khayal rakhta hai aakhir karna kya chahta hai tu?? " Vicky barked totally pissed off .


"Bas usse meri aadat daal raha tha " he smiled and grabbed the remote . He is sure she will be back. Because he knew. He is her weakness. 😊

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Don't look at me like that please?? Isme koi logic nahi . Kuch bhi nahi!! One of the most plotless oneshot?? I don't know. I felt like typing and hence I penned it down.

Reviews please??

Kindly can I actually know your feelings other than awesome OS and nice OS? Please?? Gaali bhi chalega!! Please let me know what you feel . Agar acha nahi laga toh I beg you to type " I didn't like it . The way you wrote , the way you plotted or whatever. Jo bhi likho , par let me know your thoughts . 😊

Deetha😃



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bluelashes thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lesh^_^
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Hey Deetha didu its Aroma i hope.u remember
Agar nyi still.no worry

Okay u said it is plotless os
No its not
It is one of best os till.now
Every emotion every thing just perfect
The way Rey let her go
But still confident that she will.b back
Because he is her weekness
And then those two days he cared for her
That was so cute
Thats why i.luv kr
For me.they r chracter of fairy tail
Nd this saperation.is begining of new.journy
I love it didu
Aroma
Edited by bluelashes - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brrr.. See thats why I HATE Sad, Open ending wale OS. Though I myself have written so many of this kind! 🤣 🤣 LOL.

Still...Deeethaaa Meri behenn! Yaar! This OS, I tell you I was sitting with my paining heart all the time, Waiting for end as I knew it was a Sad ending...But when end came! I was smiling.

That one dialogue, Dammit! "Mai usse apni aadat daal raha tha" How caaannn youuu??


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That line made me smile so wide, And it hurted too, idk why :P


But yes, I Hate you! 😎 I won't say this OS was Mind blowing, Super Awesome,Wagera wagera.. I won't say this OS touched my heart. Basss.. 😎
Edited by SuckerPunch. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow awesome
I totally loved it
agirlhasnoname. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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And Stop watching QH 😛
Cieli.Santi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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diii...i love u for this..

i was so thinking to read something like this for ages..

it was so perfect..i love works like this..

the way u wrote really made me cry..but its sad ending but still happy ending in my sense..

just just loved this so much..

nd the song god i so love this song nd u used it...

dii this is really a beautiful OS..

and one of my fav work of yours..i love u for this truly..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Are you sure this was JUST a sad OS? I don't believe you. There was so much more to it jaan. <3 I love the way its been put up, so yeah its been penned down perfectly. Ine can connect all through the OS SO DAMN MUCH. Too good girlie. I really don't feel like throwing chappal. Seriously. 😆
Others, if u wanna throw tomatoes, kindly squash them first. :P

-Ashy. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SuckerPunch.

And Stop watching QH 😛


Okay !!😆 I rarely watch !! Once in 3-4 months? 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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deetha...i m cursing myself for not being near u...i really want to come nd hug u tight nd just relax there...
it was not awesome brilliant nd mindblowing...it was a serene work...it seems as if..sm experience..
i loved it...to the core..usually on parting os..i hv cravings for next part..but this tym m satisfied..
u were too good...u hv crossed the milestone...beyond perfection...this particular work of urs...
i bow...
PS : pls ise jaldi apni gallery me daal de so dat me jb chahe padh saku...
PPS: that line "use meri aadat dal rha tha"...killed me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I don't know what to say.
it is not at all plotless.
It's perfect.
Their emotions were potrayed with so much ease.
Mai usse apni aadat daal raha tha
O god this line.
It's one of the best os.
I love it.

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