*SwaRon OS- Your Each Breath Counts* (PMs by -spongy-) - Page 3

This is the first work i read from you dii... nd it was amazing
i loved the concept...sharon's efforts for getting back swayam was beautifully described...
shayaris ke bare me kuch bolne ki zarurat h kya 😆 As always ur shayaris were superb
Loved the scene when sharon started crying and went out her heart
then swayam respond to her was so emotional dii 😭
cooking date was amazing
swayam was smiling and laughing too 😆
that scene brought a smile on my face.
loved the ending starting middle-way 😆
in short i loved the full OS
love u dii 🤗

nice!!! Beautiful concept!!!

what a concept yaar u r such a brilliant writter keep writting

Such an amazing OS. Very heart touching

wow 👏