Arakshi FF - Forever with You - Last chapter and Epilogue 07/05

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Buddhi Titli &her Buddha ACP were so sweet but I missed ACP Arjun& his Maai

Arjun's words at the end was the insite to their coming lifes together but then there's sumthing that's holding Arjun back right?

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

sorry ritu.i knw i am late very much...

bt cnt help.too mch caught up in work

loved the way u wrote this small attempt of arjun to make sakshi smile so beautifully...

he knws her inside out nd knws well whn to press which buttons...to trigger her off... 😃

ur writing it beautifully,

i ws thinking sakshi's mom and arjun's maai is the most imp character of this story

why dont u provide us with a face for her...it'll help us to imagine dat cute flashbacks...

consider this...

continue soon nd pardon me for a late comment

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: PoohLover
res yoohooo :D

Rituuu rituuu am sooo sooo happy you updated 🥳

I looove the effort arjun put on just to make his title smile and live again like she used to 😃 😃

I really hope all misunderstanding about why arjun left 6 years back is cleared and we get to see mooore of the cuuute friendship 😳 😳

Awesome blossom updateee rituuu rituuu ⭐️

Thank you sooo much and biiig biiig hugs 🤗 🤗

Bhaaaraaateee🤗🤗🤗

loveee you for the super super colourful comment..i love it very muchh! ❤️

Originally posted by: NainaSM
superbbb 👏magical again 😳... do continue soon 👍🏼

Thank youuu Naina🤗

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
nice update
man i want that freshly baked cake right now 😃 i use to make them so often and trust me the
smell of the fresh bake is absolutely heaven
so arjun did brought smile back on sakshi's sorry titlee's face but what when he goes back
and still doesn't know what made him go away from her 😕 was he in love with her
but didn't knew her feelings
rain drops on ur face is so soothing and refreshing that it does bring smile on ur face 😊
thanks for pm

Thank you soo much Shefali🤗

hahaa i know, i bake cakes now and then and its absolutely heaven! i had baked brownies just before (or after? cant remember 😕) this update and it turned out so perfect

Originally posted by: Humzy
wow awsm update
loved it
very beautifully written how do u do it
every update
gets better and better
it is fabulous
continue soon

Thanks a lot Humairaa🤗

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai
Awesome awesome awesome.
Another magica from u.
Loved it sooo much.
But why Arjun left??
Cze he fall in love with his titli??
Plz con soon..

Thank you sooo much Easha🤗

Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...
Superb
Amazing update
but arjun ko kis baat ka fear hai is he committed with some1 or family pressure etc

Thank youuu Maha🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: anitasharma
Awesome update
continue soon

Thank you Anita🤗

Originally posted by: kunchu
I loved the way how u turned a very small event to an update
nothing OTT, but too natural
And the end was just beautiful
good job Rita
waiting for the next

Thank you sooo much Helna🤗

It really means a lottt 😳

Originally posted by: skrafty
Awesome update
loved it
Beautiful
Loved the way Arjun tried to make Sakshi smile
And finally he succeeded
Good job dear
Continue soon

Thank youuu Shravanii🤗

Originally posted by: Areesha566
Cute part

Thank youuu🤗

Originally posted by: manurocks
awesome update yaar...really...!!!!!
pls keep writing ...
the way arjun understands her...is simply amazing...!!!!!!!!!
thank u sooo much for the pm...!!!!!!!

Thank youuu so much🤗

Originally posted by: sakshiarjun
I felt like crying...😭
The update was so so good... U just nail each emotions perfectly...❤️
The way Arjun is trying to make his Titli smile was adorable...
Why was his head warning against doing this??
Sakshi is trying hard to smile..and completely believes that he will not leave her again...
She is trying to live again...
But...
The mysteries remain unsolved ...Hope u will clear it soon...
Love u sweetheart...
P.S:My name is Meenu...

Awww Meenu...thank you sooo much! your comments mean a lot to me🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: shreya09
Rituuu 🤗 🤗
another lovely part
loved Arjun's cute & sweet efforts for bringing the old Sakshi back
very nice writing yaar
Superb 👍🏼

Thanks a lottt for the comments Shreya🤗

P.S - I know you wrote this in the "Between the pages.." comment but i am replying here - it's totally okay that you will be commenting late yaaar..dont say sorry for it😃 a lot of people dont come on IF anymore with the show ending and life getting busyyy ..so i completely understand😊

Love youu for reading my stories though😳 It means a lot!

Originally posted by: Rehana25
Arjun try hard to drag out sakshi for her sorrow
Making her favourite cake and make her happy
Nice effort only true friend can do it
But I am still missing connection
And something not feel good in Arjun behaviour
Like sakshi like him trust him but is Arjun feeling also same
Or he just friend of her
Because when the truth comes it might be hurt more
See what comes out
Continue soon dear

Ahhh thanks a lottt Rehana🤗 It means a lottt..and glad you liked it😳

Originally posted by: VindhyaMounika
wow wala update...
just awesome...
Keep it up Arjun...
Keep it u Ritu...
Thanks for PM...

Thank youu Vindhya🤗

Originally posted by: misakiscarlet
love their frindship
how arjun tried to make his titli smile...
sakshi trusts him and believes...hope arjun never leaves again
and biggest hope that we come to know y and how arjun left sakshi 6 years back sooon
true friendship is really important in life...thnx for giving such a wonderfulll update di
contd. soon
thnx for pm

Thank youuu Aradhya🤗 It means a lot😳

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97
beautiful update.

Thanks a lot Pariii🤗

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Awesome update...

Beautifully written...👏👏👏
Loved the Arjun was trying to make Sakshi smile...😃😃😃
But Why Arjun left is still a mystery???😕😕😕

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Thank youuu Sneha🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: vivy58
wow!!!
wonderfulll again...
that BUDDHI TITLI wala part is funny and too cute...
love arjun's effortes to make her smile...
awsome ... supereb...brilliant...
enjoy each and every part of update...
con.soon...
thanx for pm...
love u...

Thanks a lott Gausiya🤗 means a lot😳

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwsssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Beautiful...
Awww... Bidhi Titli... that was sooo... cute
Loved Arjun's efforts to make her smile to bring her back...
Cont sooon
Thanks for PM

Thanks a lot Nikita🤗

Originally posted by: Anjali.Mital
And...yet another beautiful update is here...

Thank you Ritu... 🤗

Love you...

Aww thank youuu Anjalii🤗 That means a lot😳

Originally posted by: anu91
wow!!!arjun want to bring his old titli back...
hope there misunderstanding will clear soon...
waiting for him to open up y he left her 6 years back...
do update soon...
thanks for PM...

Thanks a lottt for the comment Anuuu🤗

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
Buddhi Titli &her Buddha ACP were so sweet but I missed ACP Arjun& his Maai
Arjun's words at the end was the insite to their coming lifes together but then there's sumthing that's holding Arjun back right?

Heyloo Farheen🤗

dont worry - next one will have a flashback hehe😃

to answer your question - yes there is something that is holding it back, but wont be revealing it so soon he he😉

Thanks a lot for the comment!🤗

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth
sorry ritu.i knw i am late very much...
bt cnt help.too mch caught up in work
loved the way u wrote this small attempt of arjun to make sakshi smile so beautifully...

he knws her inside out nd knws well whn to press which buttons...to trigger her off... 😃

ur writing it beautifully,
i ws thinking sakshi's mom and arjun's maai is the most imp character of this story
why dont u provide us with a face for her...it'll help us to imagine dat cute flashbacks...
consider this...

continue soon nd pardon me for a late comment

Hey Aisha🤗

that's totally okay..i completely understand! sooo dont say sorry😊

thank you sooo sooo much for the comment! and ahh i might do that - i actually have an image of her when i imagine her in my story - as in the actor who comes in my mind😳

thanks for the suggestion - am going to put her image up if everyone else is up for it too😃

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Heylooo! I am backkk😆 (again) lol

So first of all, thanks a lot for the comments - really appreciate them😳

Secondly, I know all of you want to know what is holding back Arjun and what happened in the past... I will be revealing that with time😉

Thirdlyyy... since Aisha requested, I wanted to ask - would you like to associate a face with Maai's character? Or would you rather let the imaginations rule?😃 I would post up the photo of the actor I have always imagined as Sakshi's mother if most of you request it so do let me know in your comment 😃

Soo one last thing about this update (I know I speak too much🤪) - this one has more of Arjun's bond with his Maai, so a little less Arakshi scenes - hope u enjoy it nevertheless😳

No that's it...won't be speaking anymore😆

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Hope it didn't get tooo emotional! Please do leave your comments😳

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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@Arakshiya_58

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

yippeee ...me first ...
awsome...amazing...
supereb update di...
such a lovely and cute it is...
relation between three of them its wonderfull...
arjun and maai's bond is so nice...
love that rain drop part of little cute arakshi...
and then paper boat which carry their wishes...its mindblowing...
tell me how can u create magic each and every time...magic girl...
plz plz con.soon...

Edited by vivy58 - 11 years ago

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#129

wonderful update Ritu (like all the time) 👍🏼
very very very nicely written
the rain... the dream paper boats... the bonding Maai,Arjun,Titli shared... Beautiful 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
superb writing Rituuu 🤗
waiting for more 😳