Arakshi FF - Forever with You - Last chapter and Epilogue 07/05

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Starting from the tittle I loved it
beautiful thought in simple yet elegant words
Loved it Ritu
Loved the way Arjun Mai Titli used to bond
N I sure the soul of Mai shud be happy too
but what is it that Arjun is holding back
very eager to know
n yes a face is just to think
imagination doesnt need a pic
but would love to see whom u imagined as Mai

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Beautifully written
Magical as always...
Cont sooon
thanks for PM

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

wow awsm update

very beautifully written

the flashback was very lovely

loved it

continue soon

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sweetpari4u97

@sweetpari4u97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

wonderful update.

loved arjun bond with his maai.

cont soon.

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Arjun &his Maai.

They are just too adorable. I can just go on &on reading about them,their lovely conversations&here you gave me a full update of their's.

Ye lo

"kuch jagah aise hai jaha se jaane ke baad bhi, waha se judi hui yadein bohot athe hai..." One such place that Arjun has is his Maai's place wherein he can feel her even after she's no more in this materialistic world😃

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

nice update
the whole update was on arjun 😊 but still missed sakshi but then titlee was there so it was ok
so arjun's biggest dream of becoming police officer came true
arjun's bond with her maai was such a unique bond those paper boats wala episode was so cute
it reminded me of my childhood guess every kid does make those paper boats and float them in water
thanks for pm but still why arjun left is not clear i mean everything was so good and the bond he had with maai then what happend that made him go away that too leaving titlee behind alone who is maai's life her only thing left 😭
want more of arjun titlee in next part

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Vindhya Mounika Patnaik

@VindhyaMounika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

That is really awesome update ritu...

I fell in love with every sentence and every expression..

creating a magical word using words in the correct way is really great..

u are gifted with this skill..

skill of crafting a imaginary new world with roots from real..

I still remember me and my siblings making boats on rainy day...

paper boats really carries dreams and wishes... Which can be fulfilled and also be thrashed...

thanks for pm..

please do continue soon..

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

It was utterly purely so cute!
i loved this update to bits nd letters...evrything just seemed a perfect dream come true...
not everyone has such a person in their life..
Arjun ws really lucky enough to have Maai.

even i beleive this line..."Everything is true if u believe in it!"
Beleive in ur dreams and they'll come true!
continue soon ritu...
eagerly waiting for Between the Pages Update!