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Posted: 11 years ago
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I want to delete all kalika scenes any damn scene that includes her. 😡

Secondly - I loved all Samud scenes. I think when cv's are out of our country they think out of the box warna all they know is kitchen politics. 🤢

Did anyone notice that after coming back from the floweriest and not finding Kumud, Saras kept the flowers on the bench ? I would like to make an addition to that. I felt that abrupt and shocking realisation of kumud that the girl flirting with saras was herself not in behaviour , was not portrayed as it should have been. As she herself was in anger and her ego was hurt because saras did not listen and believe her about how she was suspicious about that girl's nature. So yeah ... Here you go 😳

Kumud turned and found no Saras , completely unaware that he had gone to buy her flowers she blew up in anger. "How , could he ?!" She got herself up and stomped her right foot. "He doesn't inform and simply abandons me out here ... !!!! Why should I inform before I leave ?" She rose up and marched her way to the nearest curb and makes a turn.
Saras returns to the bridge only to find a bench without his lady love.
He keeps the flower on the bench itself and makes his way towards the rim of. The bridge and search for Kumud from the highest point he knew. He finds a grey coat woman- the coat was so similar to that which kumud wore, her hair open and long - as long as Kumud's. The way she walked - Kumud could be easily misidentified if this girl had to compete with her in a crowd of hundreds.
He searches for a landmark near that woman - The London Eye ! He makes a run for it.

Kumud returns to the bench after going circles around the city and exclaims - " Oh god ! I started from here !" Tiered as she was she decides to sit sometime and later go on her Kabir Ko Bachao Mission.
She sits down and happens to find a bouquet. It had a note attached . Having no better work she makes her mind to play cupid and read the lovers note ! She thought to herself - Just if Saras would have given this to me , i would have readily melted in his arms , but no ! He is more interested in believing that ordeal ! The note said -

Sorry Kumud ! Please don't be angry , with me - you know I can't be doing that. So why be , alone ..??
- Your's and Only Yours Maithi Ka Ladoo
P.S : You look cuter when angry ! 😳

Awww !!!!! Thats so nice of you Saras ! - Kumud exclaims turning to her right only to feel the air making her feel its presence !" Oh God ! In all this I forgot that ... We are sepe -- epeera--ted !!!! Tears rolled down her cheek on her latest realisation ! She sprung to her feet, forgetting her tierness , she frantically starts searching the streets of London for Saras.

On the other hand Saras follows that girl and later when he actually saw her, his face shrunk... The rest the same ! Cause i loved the way it is.

Loosing your own on a foreign land is very creepy feeling. I know how it feels ! 😭 I myself had got separated from my family in Istanbul. I was tear- shock-fear struck !!!!! Then dad finds me ! :) what a relief ! This episode felt and meant a lot to me. Cause it feels the same. You get desperate to find your own , and I could trust none ..! Anyways , ...

What do you guys have to stay.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woah its really lamba ! Sorry subu - writting from phone - could not add colours !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pia.. I really loved the SaMud scene:)

I liked your rewriting also but the real was also very good:)

The next episode will be a sweet one with a tight hug!

Really looking forward :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rabz_GR

Pia.. I really loved the SaMud scene:)

I liked your rewriting also but the real was also very good:)

The next episode will be a sweet one with a tight hug!

Really looking forward :)



Me too - nothing was missing !! Except that scen where she finds the bouquet - that would have added charm. 😃 par koi nahi ! I loved it the way it is. P.S deleting all the kalika scenes. I am pretending that nothing such ever happened. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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U've said it all my dear 👏

though i hated the danny khalika situation, but would hv appreciated if the min she accused danny... he should have given her a tight slap 😡

rest wt really happened can be looked into later 😈


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gul.S_Ef



U've said it all my dear👏

though i hated the danny khalika situation, but would hv appreciated if the min she accused danny... he should have given her a tight slap😡

rest wt really happened can be looked into later😈






Awww , thank you 😳 . Why just a slap ?! Actually , its enough for our Kalika 😆 always saying and doing rubbish sort of things. Bas abhi yehi bacha tha dekhno ko. 😭 what else should I say. Ausa ghatia scene dekhkar mooh he band ho gaya. Such a cheat !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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if u delete gumika chaall...den

i lyked samud part😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ginya


if u delete gumika chaall...den

i lyked samud part😃



I deleted that long back ginya ! Me too - love them !

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