TR OS - INCOMPLETE WITHOUT YOU

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Posted: 11 years ago
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"Taani! Mera shirt kaha hai?" shouted rey in a hurry to go to his office, and this was the 5th time today he forgot that his wife went to her maayka after one year of their married life. She went to her maayka 3 days back and at an average of 10 times a day he would have called her. Still he calls her for something or the other, then realizes.

He was so pissed off from the past 3 days as none of his work at home was going right, everything he is searching and everywhere, how badly he wished taani was with him.

Rey became sad, he was missing her. Though their marriage was not their wish, neither they believed in arranged marriage; maybe he has fallen for her to such an extent that, tears rolled in his eyes.

He opened the wardrobe and his red shirt was nowhere to be seen, he pulled out one shirt and all his shirts and pants fell down, and due to that force taani's silk sarees also slipped down the shelf and rey was really pissed off now.

A feeble thud was heard as soon as her sarees fell down and it was a diary.

He opened the diary, and rose petals were there on the first page, which flew away due to the breeze from the fan.

"a new beginning"

Was written on the first page of the diary, he smiled reading those words and flipped the page and there was a beautiful pic of their marriage pinned to it,

Rey then sat down on the bed; he was in his pyjamas and started to read the diary. He tried his level best not to, but he could not stop his curiosity

The first incidence was their first night in which both decided that, they will divorce each other once they will find the love of their life as this marriage was not on their wish.

But little did they know that destiny has decided them together, his eyes brimmed up reading the first night incident and his phone buzzed

PA: sir, aap office nahi aa rahe?

R: no, me aaj leave pe hu!

He cut the call and wore a T shirt.

He sat down reading everything in her diary, she has written her heart out and confessed also that she has fallen for him in the diary only; she also added that if she gets divorced, she would not be able to live anymore.

Rey's phone beeped a message, it was from taani.

T: rey, there is a strike of auto and buses tomorrow. Do you mind picking me up at the railway station?

He read the message and smiled how sweet she is. He simply replied a "sure"

He opened the front page and took out the marriage photograph. He kissed it and

R: you are mine forever now! I love you taani!

Rey was thinking deeply on how to confess his love to taani! He was standing at the window and he saw two people carrying a big large mirror.

R: mrs. Taani reyaansh singhania, get ready for the surprise!!!

Rey drove off to the railway station next morning and taani was looking simply perfect in her pink saree. Rey was looking at her intensely. Her hair was open and her hands were jingling with bangles. She was simply a fairy to watch!

She sat in the front seat beside rey after keeping the luggage in the passenger seat,

T: chaley!?

R: haan (after coming out of his trance)

While driving, rey was checking out taani but taani was looking out of the window.

R: taani, should I say something? I am happy today!

T: why rey?

R: I have finally met the love of my life!

Taani was taken aback.

T: what???

R: yea taani and she is at our home, tumse milwane ke liye leke aaya!

She was controlling her best! Water may spill out at any moment from her eyes, she was silent the whole journey but he cursed himself for hurting her.

Rey took taani to the guest room door,

R: taani, wo andar hi hai. Jaao na!

Her hands were shivering to open the knob of the door. She gained some courage and entered the room, the lights were off, she switched on the lights and found a mirror in front of her, and she turned to search for that girl. She turned around and she could only see mirrors 360 degrees around her.

Then it clicked her that the girl was herself

She clamped her mouth and knelt down crying happily. After few minutes she rushed out finding rey at the balcony, hearing her bangles sound, rey turned around and looked at her with his hands in his pockets. Taani rushed into his arms and rey responded as soon as she hugged him.

She hid her face in his neck and he fondled her hair lovingly. She gripped him more tightly and

R: taani, I am sorry! Bohot darr gayi na!

She pulled out from the hug and started to hit him on his chest with her tiny hands.

R: ouch ouch! Taani, ruko!!! Arey, wait!!!

And held her hands and saw her face, her pure, innocent and cute pouted wet face. Rey held her face in his palms and kissed her nose cutely.

T: koi tareeka hai kisiko surprise karne ka? Koi aur hoti toh heart attack aa jaata!

Rey hugged her around her waist tightly

R: heart attack kaise aata? Tumhara heart toh mere paas hai!

Taani was shivering in his embrace and dropped her head down to hide her blush.

R: I love you taani!

Taani looked up and flung her arms around his neck and hugged him tightly.

Rey rubbed his stubble on her neck and shoulder, she pulled out from the hug and was about to run but he held her pallu.

R: bohot thak gayi hogi! Chalo tumhe nehelwata hu!!!

T: kya? Koi zarurat nahi!

R: zarurat hai baby!!! And I know that!!!

T: rey! no!

Within a fraction of second, she was in his arms and he headed towards the wash and giving a deaf ear to her pleadings!

The rest you know!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
wow lovely os
loved it
very beautifully written
taarey were just so cute 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES

unres
awesome i liked the mirror part a lot
innovative idea
mostly liked this lines

Then it clicked her that the girl was herself

She clamped her mouth and knelt down crying happily. After few minutes she rushed out finding rey at the balcony, hearing her bangles sound, rey turned around and looked at her with his hands in his pockets. Taani rushed into his arms and rey responded as soon as she hugged him.

She hid her face in his neck and he fondled her hair lovingly. She gripped him more tightly and

R: taani, I am sorry! Bohot darr gayi na!

She pulled out from the hug and started to hit him on his chest with her tiny hands.

R: ouch ouch! Taani, ruko!!! Arey, wait!!!

And held her hands and saw her face, her pure, innocent and cute pouted wet face. Rey held her face in his palms and kissed her nose cutely.

T: koi tareeka hai kisiko surprise karne ka? Koi aur hoti toh heart attack aa jaata!

Rey hugged her around her waist tightly

R: heart attack kaise aata? Tumhara heart toh mere paas hai!

awesome hima truly loved it adored it...felt complete after reading it.



Edited by taani.priya1997 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome yaar
really kya idea lagaya rey ne apni dil ki baat btane k liye.luvd d os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aayyye hayyeee...
Shooo shweet
Nice idea of professing his love...
Was left in awe😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww again itna sweet os
luv it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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itna romantic os , omg!!!!!! too loving m in lov wth this taarey , they loved eachother sooo, much , fantastic job shona
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8

yrrr firstly tell

meee kr aapka dimag

mere ko ek din k liye mil sakta

hai ??????????????

yrrr i am very very amazed that

how can u write like this dear

i really really loved this os to

the core of my heart yarrr

just fabulous

literally i m imagining me

at the place of taani

i mean what a way to

propose yarrr love this os

btw let mee ask one thing

how can u get this idea dear

r u proposed by sumone

like this huhhh!!! pls tell mee

n btw awesomeee

os dear keep writing

n take care

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS
Luved d confession of rey
Nice selection of taani's saree
Thanx for d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was so cute
Keep writing more

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