OS' After ishita leave' thank you note pg 33 dec 5

--HANISA-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#1





Part 2 page 2

part 3 page 3

part 4 pg 5

part 5 pg 7

part 6 pg 9

part 7 pg 10

part 8 pg 12

part 9 pg 14 suhagraat

Part 10 pg 17 engagemnet

Part 11 pg 19 ishita pregnant

Part 12 pg 23 twins for ishra

Part 13 pg 28 ishita birthday

Part 14 last part pg 30 twins borns

For this forum my first story on ishra hope you will like it .I will try to do my best for you guys love it .I never do any prediction here but what I thought for next ep that happen . So I'm trying to do what's inmy mind . We know ishita will leave there I will from there 😊 .


While ishita is leaving she was with tears looking forward raman to stop her or to say he beleave her to stand in her side . But he did not do anything to stop her nor said he trust her nothing .she leave there with lots of pain n hurt too . Raman who was still not able understand clearly what was really happen he was hurt too for not being at her side . He saw what was in her eyes when she was looking at him for his support he feel bad but he is helpless too.

At Iyers

They all was angry on ballas behavier n there bad bad words using on ishita . Even the slap which simi did . Ishita was not talking she is still in shocked what ever happen with her only tears was dropping down .

At night raman was not able to sleep thinking how can his mother n simi could thing that ishita can go so down .
To himself ...mein kyun uska saat nihin diya jab mein janta hu ke woh kabhi aisa nahin karsakti aisi uwrat nahin hein . Woh jansi rani .
Why I did not take her side when I know she is will never do such a thing she is not that type od woman .she is jansi rani .

Ishita to herself ... mein janti hu ke amari chaadi to ek samjota hein .lekine meine hamesha tomhara saat dida tomhari madad ki .ar ajj jab muje sabse ziada tumhari zarurat ti to tum mein mu per dya .mujpar yakine nahin tah . itna hin samja hein aap ne muje .
I know our wed is just compromise but I always be in your side n help you .but today when I needed your side the most you turn you face you don't trust me . You know only a little .

Next day
Raman ..mah I'm going
Toshi... have your breakfast first putar .
Ram... no I'm not ungry if ruhi is ready I will drop her ruhi ruhi .
Mr balla ... I will go n drop her you go putar .
Ram... thx papa I'm going
Toshi... why you let him go without eating .
Balla...can't you see he don't want to talk n I know if he would sit you will start with the prob .

In raman office in his cabin

Mihir ... why raman you did not stop her or take her side she is your wife why .

Ram ... what you me to stop her then simi will think I'm just taking my wife side n if I take simi side she will think I'm with my sis I'm so helpless where to go I don't know .

Mihir ... you could at least stop her she was waiting for you to say some thing don't forget how she save us n you have said she is a good wife a good mother a good daughter in law n now when she need your help you let her alone it not good for a husband .

Ram... I know I saw her eyes who was just waiting for me to stop her but what you want me to let her stay in that house where she has lost her respect no I can't do that even if she would cont to stay in our house you think mah or simi will let her in peace .

Mih... I know bhabi very well if she has accuse parmeet he must misbehave with her she is not that person whom will put a blame n that too such accusation n a bro in law .

Ram... I have full trust on her mihir I know her very well parmeet has done all this n how he act like an innocent person in front of fam .

Mihir ... what will you do now .

Ram ... I need some proof against parmeet I want my wife to get her respect back n I will not let any other man put their bad eyes on my wife again .

Mih... for this I'm always be there to help me n n think we should start it now .

Ram... I want you to arrange security for ishita I know parmeet will may try again his bad intention on her so make sure she should always guard near her .what why r u smiling with this .

Mih...I'm just watching you raman you have really change she has change you raman so much care.N love for bhahi ...

Raman feel uncomfortable n... bakwas bane kardo ab kame kare .


In the afternoon

Mujie ishima ke pase janahein . I want to go to my ishima

Nahin tum ab wahan nahin jahogi woh bi tumey uskirah banadegi . No you will not go ther she will make you become like her .

Dadi muje jana hai please simi bouwa se kahiyena muje jane do .dadi let me go tell to simi fuiw to let me go .
mummiji hume ruhi ko us awrat ke pass nahin bajna chahiye use ralat rasta dikadegi .mumiji we should not let ruhi go to that woman she will teach her bad way .

Raman who hears all this .

Ruhi you go inside I will bring you later to your ishima ok .

ok papa .

Bai what is this you will sent ruhi to that carectless woman .

simi he shout don't forget if you are here it because of my wife ok .

Yes that why she put her eye on him because she brought us here prameet should accept what she want hei na .

Putar listen we know prameet will not do such a cheep thing r .

what mah ishita can do it you think she is so cheep to do something like this that too her bro in law .

Who knows this madrasen peoples what type person they are .

Mah if you have forget then let me tell you these madrasen peoples r my fam too I'm there son in law .

See mumiji what she did to bhai she can't see us like a happy family .shagun is better nice she has taken an outsider but she want her bro in law so cheep .

Simi he shout with a loud voice n was about to raise his hand on her .don't forget she is my wife whom you r talking n she is not like shagun think before you said something like this again . I will forget if yohur my sis did u get me . n what you think prameet have for woman will trap him every time in dubai n now here just thibk of it ruhi come let go to out beta .

At iyer house

Ishu what happen did they call you n accuse you again I will not let them to say what they want on ishu u just relax .

Amma I'm just thinking of ruhi I now she will wanted to be with me but I know they will not let her .

Ahka I'm sure jiju will sent her here .

Han ishita raman bhaiya is not bad he will bring ruhi to you .

What not bad han ,why he did not stop her then n why he stay silent when they were accusing her .

will you stop this now please he will not let our ishu like this i have trust in him .

you wanted to marry her with panjab , even after i said no but you wanted to do what you like .

Oh ho we must give raman a chance to explain why he was quite n he just came from a trip n all this has happen .

No way he is a man who can't see nothing than this family .may be that my shagun has gone who knows .

Amma why you r saying like this on him it my fault I should have told him before I'm sure he would do something .

bala ... Ishu amma is right even I'm shocked when raman didi not stop you from leaving the house what type of husband is this we know your wed is was just for rubi but you r his wife right .

vandu ... Ah ishu bala is right you r his wife he should think of this n at least said he has trust on you but no he stay like a dum .

Aka please I don't want to hear nothing on them now I'm just worried for ruhi if I'm not near her she Will be sad .

It not your job only to thing on ruhi but there too you r my daughter you will have to listen to me .

If you like it n want me to cont let me know thx if you will read it .😊



.




Edited by pretty_h - 10 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

191

Views

167.8k

Users

36

Likes

837

Frequent Posters

DivianTanz_Divz thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Nice one dear. Very cutely written.

Something like this might happen in the show also.
--HANISA-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Thx for your comment n seeing it nice
princy48 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#4
heya nyc strt..its gr8👍🏼..luv t read it further..

(jus a suggestion: do work on editing..t make it evn gr8r😊)
Nichuss thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#5
iyers frustration may happen in yhm tooo
-cyndu- thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Nice one! N hey continue soon.. :)
--HANISA-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Thank you all of you n for engourage me to cont n for liking it I will cont it for sure thx a lots
--HANISA-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#8
Thx a lot for suporting me to cont this os I'm so happy you likes it 😊.


In the car


Tring tring han bolo mihir .
Woh I wanted to tell you I have put a dectetive after parmeet he will give us al his info even his mob I have put in record .
Thx mihir if you were not with me I don't know how to handle this situation .
Don't say thx to me you r my bro so no thx n I'm doing for my babhi for you n ruhi ok bye will met tomorrow .
Ok bye .
Papa why ishima has gone at her mothrr place n dadi is not letting me to meet her I'm so sad 😕.
I promise you I will drop you to your ishima because she too will be sad without you hein na . So now will go n have our dinner and your ice cream what say .
Yes papa let's go .

When raman was buying ice cream he saw prameet with the same lady he saw before too .
Arey papa prameet fuow n she is ishima sect .
You know her .
Yes I saw her once in ishima clinic when I was going for intev .
Raman to himself ... she is the same lady which I saw him other day .
Papa why he is holding her hand .you know papa he hold ishima hand too .
Have you saw him hold your ishima hand .
He take there pic .
You will not say if we saw him ok promise
Ruhi promise let go home now papa may I call ishima .
Ok you can talk now .

Hello ishima how r you .
Im fine mera bacha n you r you fine .
Yes but I missing a lot 😭 when you will come in our place .
I don't know why you don't come to me . I'm missing you too mera bacha 😭
Dad,y does not want to come to you . Raman who was doing sign 😊 to ruhi for him to talk with ishita .
Hello ishita .
She cut the phone without talking . Raman was sad 😕 .
Let's go .

At ashok at

You still r angry on me .
Want you want me do your puja han 😡
Where were you when I call you with another lady you were drunk . I don't know whom to call n I don't know anybody then 😲I call raman wthat wrong in it han 😡 .
One because of you he got the contract n I will be work with him 😡
Since you came in my life I'm just losing 😲 .
You know it was mh fault to beleave on you that you will marry me 😕.
You let me tell you clear now forget about maried I will not marry you got it how can I marry a woman who can leave her kids her laws n her husband just to have money 😡.
😲 What you said I leave all this for you ashok to be with you .you used to say you love me n will marry me .it yoh who told me to leave raman n my family now yoh are changing it you know I love you n want to be with you 😡enough don't think I'm raman I'm a fool like him or I'm blind ok n one thing you don't love yiu just need this wealth money that all you don't even love your kids I make you used your kids against him n you are doing it first was ruhi now adi when you know very well raman has never do wrong on his kids even adi is like you love money but ruhi is like her dad .
Ashok please stop you are nit in your sense that why yoh are talkinng like this .
Adi who has hear n see all what happen n shocked too 😲 .

Ruhi was sleeping with raman 🥱 n raman was missing ishita he look at the cauch n imagine ishita there 😊 he was happy n ishita you came back I was just thinking of you n then nobody was there 😕.he was don't know what was happening to him😳 he saw her everywhere she used to be .near her suitcase the almari when she used to brush her hair .he was feeling sad n has tears too 😭😭
Out side was raining
He went near the window n he got the flashback when he saw her first time ,when she act has his wife , he was did the bandage in her hand the first rain scene when he hold her hand , the second rain when he said I love you , whse she save him on the deal ,with that green dress n when she was sewing the button where first time he was lost in her beauty 😳.n then when she was watching him to support her . All that with tears 😭.

Ishita also was in the same situation remember there first night of wed how raman was , when he was making her ready in school , put the flower in her hair , when they dance on holi , n how he talk to subo mother , when he praise her in tamil n say thank you , he made adi to say sorry to her , when he gift her the dress of his fav coler n when he said you were looking pretty in green dress n the sewing button 😭 .
Raman I accept we don't have anything but even we use to fight , have a talk n sometimes we laught too even if it was just for ruhi but we were like a couple as a good parents . When you praise me I feel happy😊 even I know it is fake but I feel that god has given me a complet fam I'm complete now .but I make a mistake for thinking that I'm a complete woman I'm a fool to think raman kumar may change 😭. She also was near the window .

Ishita I know I has been very rude to you sometime n shout or get angry too but one thing I would to say this room don't look like a room which we used to shared it even not has a couple but we shared lots of thing here your laughing I can here it your voice when you say ravan kumar when you make me realize my mistake our fight your smile yes ishita I'm missing them . But I promise you . You will be back here with all respect n with dinity 😊.

Both was holding there mobile to call or sent a smg .
Raman say I want to hear your voice he call her . She has a smile 😊 to see him call her .but she cut the phone .

Never mind ishita you cut my call that shown you too r not sleeping just like me but I will talk to you want to hear your voice nobody said ravan kumar today want to hear it from you 😊.

Next day raman wear green suit ishita fav coler .n ishita wear a blue saree which is raman fav coker .

Raman know it time for ishita leave n he keave too .

Both came out at the same time n see each ever with there fav coler .

She go without say a word . Raman call her but she con walking .
Ishita please listen to me I want to talk with you .
She leave in her car .

Prameet saw raman from the balcony . He did not see if raman trying to talk to ishita n think raman may talk rud with her again n was happy has his plan to seperat them is working them he will get ishita n even if shd accuse him nobody will trust her he has a smile 😵😊.

In office

Call ishita talk to her like you used to talk but I want to hear her voice you will not let her know I'm near ok .
Ok as you wish mere bai .

Tring tring
Hello bhabi
Ah mihir bolu
App kaisse ho bhabi . How r you bahi
Mein tik houn kyun . I'm fine why
Bhabi muje laga ke ap mujse naraz hein ..bhai I thought you r angry with me .
Mein naraz kyun ..me angry why .
Woh meine nahin mila ap se baat karne kelye .. woh I could not meet u have a talk.
Bhabi I know you did not do any thing which prameet said , I beleave u n Im with you even if raman like it or not .

Mihir I don't have courage now I'm lost I thought that simi is like my sis I will save her , but nobody beleave me they all think I'm such a woman , I agree I make a mistake I did not said it to raman first but I did nog wanted to creat a problem between sis n bro just because of me .

I know bhabi but why you did not told me when I came to ask you if you were ok .

Mumiji told me to not say n when I talk to raman at night I feel relax even I did not told him but the way he was talking to me I forget my pain n he was not here if I would told him he wojld leave his work n he could have prob there so I thought when he will come I will told him but .

Bhabi I ask aunty she told me you r ok n I said to raman too .

For me mihir the most hurt I got it when raman beleave of all that msgs .I forgot my mob there . that show he don't trust me I was just waiting for him to say I beleave her she can't do this but no i was wrong thinking he may know me . I told you my mob was in chaging right 😕.

Yes you told me .

Mihir I'm broken now don't want anything n I'm missing my daughter😭 which I know they will not brought her to me .she is my life n I lost her too .
Mihir don't ever do like this with trisha if you love some one learn to trust too , I kknow my relation with raman has no love just a compromise that why he dont trust me but I havd trust on him he love his fam too n now I don't have any expectation from him . Bye mihir a patient is waiting for me n thx I feel better after talking to you you r a good man don't become like your bro .

Bye bhahi I wil be always there for you .

Raman was with tears😭. On heaing her voice n he could feel her pain .

Thx mihir to make me hear her voice she always suffer because of me first I broke her engement , her perents weent in jail , because of me you n mehika r separeted n now this . N she always care for me my fam my daughter .what I give her in return just pain only . I don't mind if she will not forgive me because I'm the one whom she is angry 😭 .
I will find from the mob service section to know when was sent this smg thx again .n I will not let her without her ruhi if she will be with her she will get her life again I'm sure .

Wait a minit raman why you wera this coler of suit you never wear this coler that suit .

Raman feel embaress 😳 n leave .

Raman I would say it good this has happen n you both r separeted now you both will realize the love you have for each ever .I. will have to make you both realize it for that I will have ask for help that to from my mehika 😊 .

I stop here if like it press like button n leave yohr comments n let me know if I should cont ig or not thx 😊







pooja_shineStar thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#9
this is awesome :)
plz doo continue sooon! :)
--HANISA-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Thx I will cont it I'm happy you like it 😊

Related Topics

Ye Hai Mohabbatein thumbnail

Posted by: thefarfetcher · 1 years ago

There's something bittersweet about finding a fandom when it seems dead and buried, but that's how things seem to have worked out this time. I...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".