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Posted: 11 years ago

ok guyys like everyone even i hope u people like my post...

part 1

story starts from when kalpana exepts raghav's love for her and the day when party got over sammy has gone to drop paakhi back home as ordered by great RAGHAV SINGHANA...

scene::::::: 1 _singhania mansion (raghav's room)

raghav explains kalpana reason of him being so arrogant and rude to others hs past how badly he wanted to take revenge from kapoor's as the kapoors' had snatched away his childhood from himm(quit emotional speech)

raghav: actually i was rude to u because maine tumhe bataya tha na jo bhi mere kareeb aata hai vo mujhse chin jata hai . kalpi promise me chahe kuch bhi ho jaye tum mujhe chod kar kabhi nahi jaogi promise me please... vada karo

kalpi: haan sir mein vaada karti chahe kuch bhi ho jaye mein aap ko chod kar nahi jaoongi.

they hugged each other passionately until kalpi's phone started ringing it was her aayee on the call they broke the hug and kalpi answered the call..

kalpi: haan aay kya hua.

kamla: kalpi beta kitni der ho gayee hai tu abhee tak ghar nahi aai hai raat bhi bahaut ho gayi hai mein tere baba ko bhej rahi hoon laane ke liye theek hai.

kalpi: nahi nahi aay sab dheek hai mein samaan sametne mein raghav sir ki madad kar rahi thi mein bbas niksl rahi huun.

kamla : par beta sun to ...

but kalpana had already disconected the call

kalpi: sir pehle hi bahaut der ho gaayi hai mujhe lagta hai ki mujhe chalna chahiye...

raghav : ache samate kitni jaldi beet jate hain na... saying this he pulled kalpi bi her waist 😉

kalpi: sir aap ye kya kar rahe hain chodiye hame chalna chahie.

raghav : ab toh jaldi hi acche samaye jo kabhi khatam na hoon vo start hone wale haen

to which kalpi blushed😳.

scene:::::::::2 _ragav's car

they reached the chawl

kalpi: sir bye good night.

raghav: kalpi this night will never be good u know why because u will not be there with me.

kalpi:😳 sirrr bye haanth chodiye bye bye.

raghav : good night officee time se aana.

😃

ok guys first part gets to end

PRECAP:

what awaits kalpana and raghav?

will kamla baii get to know about her daughter?

well lets see what destiny has planned in part 2..

please if u want to read the next part press like button and please leave your valuable comments and pleaseignore grametical mistakes and spelling errors...

Edited by iiiiiiiiiiiii - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome Update 👏👏

PM please when Part 2 is out...loved it :)

P.S Put ur Title as OS/SS Ragna Unite so that members can know :)

Edited by Komal1004 - 11 years ago

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Foram

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Posted: 11 years ago

hey nice update... do continue

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leelu

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice beginning awaiting the next part

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chahat4u

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Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very well written. I loved the way you made Kalpana handle the whole situation of her Aai getting worried, she didn't lie completely, but told her half truth. just as I wanted her to handle in the serial too.

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Good...👍🏼

Please continue soon...😊

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iiiiiiiiiiiii

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Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

thanks for encoraging me with ur sweet comments i hope u will like the second part also.

part::::::::: 2

kalpi comesinside her house and sees her aay really tensed

kamla: kahan reh gaye thi kalpi beta tu pata hai mein kitni pareshan ho gayee thi aur tu mera phone kyon nahi utha rahi thi.

kalpi: vo...vo aay bahaut shor tha isliye phone sunayee nahi diya isliye aur bade logon ki party thi na isliye der tak chali.

kamla: kalpi beta itni der raat ho gayee akele aane mein tujhe darr nahin laga.

kalpi POV: darr kaise lagta jab raghav sir mere saath hain.

kamla: kuch bol na beta.

kalpi: haan aay lekin mujhe darr kaise lagta pakhi bhi to mere saath thi.

FLASHBACK:

kamla: pakhi beta vo... kalpi abhi tak ghar nahi aai tu bhi uske saath hai na

pakhi: nahin kamla maa vo.. main to kabki party se nikal gaii lagta hai kalpi ko koi kaam aa gaya hoga lekin mien to raste mein hoon aur ghar pahunchne wali huun bye kamla maa.

kamla: bye pakhi beta.

FLASHBACK ENDS

vitthal: thik hai kalpi beta jake soo jao kal office bhi toh jaana hai jaao.

kamla: dekha vitthal aaj isne hamse jhuth bhi bola.

vitthal: ho gi uski koii majburi kamla kya itna bhi bharosa nahin apni kalpi pe tujhe kamla.

kalpi is in washroom thinking about that why did kamla ask so many queshtions does she has a doubt on me devaa help me send me an angel to clarify my doubts and at that instant there was a call on her phone seeing the caller kalpi blushed😳( i hope u have guessed who it was and for those who dint get it. it was the great RAGHAV SINGHANIA)

kalpi: han sir kya hua

raghav: kalpi kya karr rahi ho

kalpi:( kalpi did not want to tell him about her condition so she just told him) kuch bhi nahin bas sone jaa rahi thi.

raghav: kalpi tum mujh se kya chupa rahi ho batao.

kalpi: ku...kuch bhi nahin sir.

raghav: kyon mujh se jhooth bol rahi ho bataoo kalpi tumhe mujh par vishvas hai na

kalpi: haan

ragha: to batao kalpi.

kalpi: sir vo... vo mujhe lagta hai aay ko mujh par shak ho gaya hai.(she was crying badly) maine...maine pehli baar aay se jhuth bola ab.. aap hi bataiye ki mein kya karoon?

raghav POV: ek jhooth bolne par yeh itna roo rahi hai kitni bholi hai meri kalpi iske kuch inn andajon par mera pyaar aur gehra ho jaata hai.

raghav: kya aisa jhooth bol diya ki ganga yamuna saath mein behne lageen.

kalpi: sir aap ko magak soojh raha hai.

raghav: (controlling his laugher ) accha sorry ab toh batao aur please rona band karo.

kalpi: tells him how kamla was asking so many questions and how she told about pakhi.

raghav: koi baat nahin chintaa mat karo sab thik ho jayega.

kalpi: theek hai ab main rakhti hoon

raghav: kalpi please phone matt rakhna mein tumhaari aavaj sunte sunte soo jaunga.

kalpi (blushes) 😳 thik hai sir bye.

kalpi comes out of restroom where kamala and vitthal were waiting

vitthal: kalpi beta m..mujhe a..aur teri aay kotujhse kuch baat karni hai

kalpi POV: he devaa kya baat hai ab ap hi bacha lena.

rahavPOV: he bhagwaan kalpi ko bacha lena mein uske aankhon mein aansu nahi dekh sakta hun...please

suddenly kamla gets a call on her phone pakhi tells how daadi fell down from the stairs

kamla : kya???? mein aa rahi hun.

raghavPOV: he bhagwaan kya museebat aa gayi kamla maa bahaut tension mein hain?

kalpi: kya huaa aay ?

kamla: vo...vo pakhi ka phone aaya tha dadi gir gayeen hai. lekin kalpi itni jaldi pakhi tujhe chod kar chali bhi gayee. kamla asked in angry tone😡

kalpi😭

raghavPOV: kalpi himmat raho..

kamla and vitthal leave kalpi picks up the phone

kalpi: (crying) 😭 dekha raghav sir maine bola tha na he devaa ab to mein gayee.

raghav: kalpi kuch nahiin hoga aur ab jake soo jao raat jyaada ho gayee hai aur mujhe office deer se aane wale loog pasand nahin hain.

kalpi: smiling 😊 theek hai sir.

kalpi slept rememembers the nice moments which she spent with haim...

NEXT MORNING

KALPI leaves for office raghav is waiting for kalpi on the bus stand.

kalpi: sir aap yahan.

raghav: kalpi koii sawaal mat puucho bas car mein aa jao

kalpi gets into the car they were heading for office when kalpi noticed that they were not going to office

kalpi: sir ye office ka raasta nahin hai

raghav: pataa hai.

kalpi: hum kahaan jaa rahen hai sir.

raghav: kalpi suprise naam ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai.

😃

end of part 2 guts

PRECAP:

WHERE IS RAGHAV TAKING KALPI?

WHAT AWAITS KALPI AT HOME?

WHAT DEASINY HAS PALNNED FOR RAGNA?

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Priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Please do the honours of continuing this lovely update!!

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ssna

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice update dear plz plz continue soon

N if possible pm me when u update

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iiiiiiiiiiiii

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Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

thanx for alll ur comeents!!!!! i am feeling honoured to update this part... all credit goes to u alll...

part::::::3

singhania chawl:

kalpi:good morning aai(hugs kamala from behind)

kamala: kya hua beta aaj kafi khush lag rahi hai????

kalpi: kuch hua nahi aai lekin abb ho jaega agar mein office time pe nahi pahuchungi (nothing happened but it will happen if i don't reach office on time)

kalpi POV:i know if i don't reach on time my akdoo,naughty boss will go mad... (thinking she starts smiling 😊...)

pakiya: kalpu whaat r u doing so long don't u know i have to go to my job???

kalpi: (coming out of the washroom) u got job dada sounds great today is such agood day...by the way dada what job is it??

vatthal: rajkumari dont u know ur dada he has only one job _

kalpi & kamal (together): searching for job...

pakiya: how funny looks like whole family has desided to take revenge agains't this poor,innocent creature...

kalpi: poor creature haan dada i know how poor & innocent are u actully u know dada...(suddenly her phone starts ringing)

dad: fight with me later first attend ur phone... gooo...

kalpi: i will teach u a lesson later dada (kalpi sees the caller name and smiles)

kalpi: (coming out of the house) haan raghav boliye...

raghav: kalpi kitna derrr lagatii hooo listen i am on my way and i will pick u up... ouch...phewww

kalpi: kya huaa raghav aap thiik toh hain naaa???