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Sanika

@Legilimens

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

removed cause I read it again and it sucked.
I had written it about two years ago..or three for hinny in a fanfic site.
sorry for the inconvinence.

Edited by arshipotterfan - 11 years ago

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Emaani.95

@Emaani.95

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Yes! You are on a roll today 😃

I did read your other OS as well but didn't like it much. 😕Sorry dear but am just being honest 😳

But This one is surely a nice piece of work! I loved how you wrote it 😊

Do write more 👍🏼

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Tamihna

@Tamihna

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aaaw that was do cute! Write another pleasse!

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Sanika

@Legilimens

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Emaani.95
Yes! You are on a roll today😃
I did read your other OS as well but didn't like it much.😕Sorry dear but am just being honest😳


But This one is surely a nice piece of work! I loved how you wrote it😊


Do write more 👍🏼

Arre it is completely fine.. i appereciate honest criticism.. thank you :-P for appreciating this one and critisizing the other.. i will surely try and improve my writing.. thank you :-)

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Sanika

@Legilimens

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tamihna
Aaaw that was do cute! Write another pleasse!

thank you :-)

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

wow it's wonderful, after so many days read something refreshing

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mridula

@-Minion-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

cute one.i also though he was going to propose for marriage.last part was really sweet.keep writing.

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Lovely OS Dear!Pls do write more on Zaya & pm Me!& Pls can U send Me a friend request?

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Divya

@hakunamatata

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Will you...write us another? 😳

Will you..never stop writing 😉

Will you...accept my compliment that this was a utterly butterly by far one of the cutest ZaYa OS 😃

Especially the final "Definitely" it means sooo much 😳⭐️

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Neha

@Neha07

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I don't know how I missed this! probably I was on vacation when you posted it. Just came across it and this gave me such a sweet mushy feeling😳. It gave me a feeling of dejavu as if I was watching 2-states,ZaYa of your story resemble Arjun and Aliya and their comfy chemistry😉

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