A zaya os| Will you?

Aaaw that was do cute! Write another pleasse!

Originally posted by: Emaani.95

<font size="3">Yes! You are on a roll today😃</font>

<font size="3">I did read your other OS as well but didn't like it much.😕Sorry dear but am just being honest😳</font>

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<font size="3">But This one is surely a nice piece of work! I loved how you wrote it😊</font>

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<font size="3">Do write more 👍🏼</font>

Arre it is completely fine.. i appereciate honest criticism.. thank you :-P for appreciating this one and critisizing the other.. i will surely try and improve my writing.. thank you :-)

Originally posted by: Tamihna

Aaaw that was do cute! Write another pleasse!

thank you :-)

wow it's wonderful, after so many days read something refreshing

cute one.i also though he was going to propose for marriage.last part was really sweet.keep writing.

Lovely OS Dear!Pls do write more on Zaya & pm Me!& Pls can U send Me a friend request?

Will you...write us another? 😳

I don't know how I missed this! probably I was on vacation when you posted it. Just came across it and this gave me such a sweet mushy feeling😳. It gave me a feeling of dejavu as if I was watching 2-states,ZaYa of your story resemble Arjun and Aliya and their comfy chemistry😉