Poem - From Loveable Deb to Egoistic Shlok

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was you that got me hooked

From the very first scene I watched

It was the autowala romance

That changed my days by chance


Never thought I'd come across

An actor that could send my loyalties for a toss

It was always Salman khan

That made my heart flutter like a chiffon


Without shame I confess

One look at you and my heart fails to repress

For my brain knows there's no defence

Cause none can deny the presence


You can be Charming, grieving or romantic

All without being over dramatic

Who needs dialogues for emoting

When it's the eyes that does all the talking

Your screen presence alone is enough

To give all the leading men's ego a scruff

I know I'm not alone when I say

Your future looks bright as a summers day

You emote in such an effortless manner

You sure don't need a big banner

SRK, RK please beware

Cause, when he decides, you will not have a prayer

From loveable Dev to Egoistic Shlok

You have made the transition such a shock

Yet you seem so un faced by it all

Looking cool, handsome and tall

Stay happy, stay blessed

Even gods will be impressed

With all you have achieved

Some may feel a bit peeved

Your leaps and bounds ahead the rest

Don't take your eye off the quest


Even my hubby, my life my Navi

Doesn't know your real name is Avi

It's Shlok, that he sometimes calls me

For he knows a mere mention can make me smile & agree

Specially when we don't see eye to eye

All this does makes me feel kinda shy

Don't feel bad when I say he's my only guy

But hope to meet you at least once before I die










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jibber-jabber thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow...👏
very well written dear
Aishaa3 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😳 last line is evry1s wish😉
beautiful poem👍🏼 keep writng😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful poem Anu (hope its ok if I call you Anu) 😊
why don't you send this to Avi too ...such a lovely one !! Keep writing such poems...😊
I too remember the 1st scene (the durga pooja scene where he asks to reveal her feelings)
that i watched, its that sizzling chemistry between Avi-Shrenu that got me hooked.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: neetika_17

wow...👏

very well written dear

Thank you Neetika
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu123.

So nice.. Well done 👏

From one anu to another anu...thank you so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aishaa3

😳 last line is evry1s wish😉
beautiful poem👍🏼 keep writng😎


I know. Hope ur s will come true before mine,
Thank you for the comment. Few more on your way.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful poem dear.
Very well written.
Read it on twitter as well was shared by Avimaniacs.
Thx for sharing here.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loving this thanks im mad about Avinash everything that concern him is special to me as a fan
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u are an poet..😆avi's love has made u a poet...wah!! kya baat hai
this is 2nd one right...

loved it...

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