DID ANYONE NOTICED????

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Posted: 11 years ago
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DID ANYONE NOTICED...
HE CLOSED THE EYES FIRST
she followed next
LIPS TOUCHED THE HANDS
N SIGH OF PARUD HEARTS WAS HEARD WORLDWIDE

yes he was the first to submit,,,not to the power of his need
but to the magnetism of his love for this girl
thats how they will be
she will be the JACK
n he will be the MALE JILL
who will come tumbling after

SHE WAS NO LESS THE THE CULPRIT
SHE REGISTERED THE EHSAAS FIRST
N WAS MUCH MORE BOLD TO SUBMIT TO HER CRIME

IT WAS THE BEAUTY OF THE MOMENT
WHEN SHE SLIDED BACK HER HAND
AS IF HINTING HIM TO MOVE ON
N CLAIM WHAT WAS HIS FROM THE CENTURIES
SINCE THE LOVE WAS DESCRIBED

"do labz the ek baat thi
woh din sau saal ka
sau saal ki ek raat thi"

THEY SPEND THE AGES OF LOVE OF SHIV N PARVATI
IN THOSE FEW MOMENTS OF STOLEN PLEASURE
N UNTOUCHED KISS

IT WAS THE CRIME OF EYES WHICH OPENED THEIR SHUTTERS
N THE MOMENT WAS LOST TO THE
SENSIBILITIES OF HESITATION MORE PRIME
OTHERWISE IF THE EYES WOULD HAVE REMAINED CLOSED
IN THE MOMENT WHEN HAND HAS STOPPED BEING THE WALL
THEN RUDR WOULD HAVE FOLLOWED HIS BOLD PARO
INTO REALMS OF ECSTASY UNDESCRIBED
JUST LIKE MOTI OF HIS DUPATTA


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Navyya thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am glad that Paro removed her hand & Rudra could have gone all the way but he did not ... He stopped... Wonder why ???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I find it really a beautiful Poetry.. Just sooo Sweet every word was superbly suiting well...<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely post
Loved the scene so much ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That's a nice observation.😊

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