MG SS: BLACK COAT BARRISTERS - CHAPTER 11 - UPDATED PG 62 - 28TH MAY - Page 8

nice update...
finally we got to see maan's reaction...
loved it

I'm so in love with this story!!! <3

Interesting update. You are not lacking anywhere.Keep on writing and you will find increasing number of readers.

Originally posted by: suyoha

hey please dont finish this so soon please continue i like it,its a new concept and the chemistry between maan and geet is superb i would like to know how it shapes in future

Thank you so much for reading and liking this story. I have few more new concept s in mind my, will start them once I finish at least two of my stories among 4 ongoing FF. I am yet to decide the future plot for this story so the delay in updates. Keep reading and commenting.

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Im loving whats happening hehehe

Me too ..😳Thanks for reading.

Originally posted by: Doracake

this FF is really awesome. Cant wait for the next update

Thank you so much. I didn't expect this concept would get so much love. Keep reading and commenting.

Originally posted by: idunno

IT was hilerious and witty love word of exchange between maan and geet.

Thank you! Indeed they are funny. It's a combination of witty Maan & saucy geet.

Originally posted by: LM1991

Rose, Don't end the story. Its very nice. Hats off to Meera to get to see Maan's reaction to Geet's beauty!!

LM

LM, actually in the beginning I planned to make it as OS. But later I thought to make very short story about 4 or 5 parts max as i wasn't sure about how story moves forward. Thanks for reading and commenting. It's really feels good to read positive comments.

Originally posted by: mirror1521

nice part...loving the way its moving .

now maan having a mystry gal is altogether a new thing...n yash realised tht it could b geet...umm...n this geet flirting n challenge thing ws awsm...loved diit too core...n i liked the most ws geets negotiation wid her babaji...shes such a cutie pie meera k flirting lessons hv worked out well...n now is the time for jealousy session ...jst awsm... n the last blow...geet getting scarred of maans anger...lovedd the part

Thank you so much! Yeah I find geet's and babajee's bond hilarious coz I myself have that bond with my godji. Keep reading and commenting.

Originally posted by: .suzuka.

Lovely part both r so cute<3 hehe i m loving it pls dont end it.. And Update next part soon...

Thank you so much for reading dear. Well it all depends on the response whether to end or not to end this fiction.

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

ohh thats awesome loved it

Thank you ..😳

Originally posted by: sugivarun

Fantastic dear amazing story, i just love your writings, and making me more curious to know about story ahead ur a gr8 writer, i didnt notice before just come across your OS 's and read all your fictions...its amazing. probably readers didnt read the story i think, according tome whoemever read ur fiction will go FIDA..please dont stop your writings, as i said its amazing :-)

Feels so good to read positive comments first thing in the morning. Thanks for reading them. Glad to know you think me of as a great writer, but dear I am still nowhere near to great and yet to learn lot of things. Please do recommend this story to your friends too.

Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-

amazing update. maaneet flirting with each other, and geet started it so geet is maan's mystery girl according to yash!!!!!! eagerly waiting for next part for meera's next strategy and maan's reaction to that!!!!! pls don't end it soo soon , i want to read it more!!!!!!

Thank you! I am still yet to decide how to take this story forward. Please keep reading. I will try my best to make it more enjoyable.

Originally posted by: friend_lee2006

It's supet duper hit

Wow! 😃"Super-Duper-Hit" short comment yet dynamite meaning. Thanks a lot.

Originally posted by: dolly10

Awesome update

Thank you!😆

Originally posted by: bhakbhartifan

Really good story.. loved the interaction..

Thank you!😃

Originally posted by: CuteTommy

Rose it is an awesome update...Never feel low with the responses... may be it hav not reached many readers now...but it is one of the awesome stories i hav ever come across... u hav a superb writing skill which is a boon... so keep it up n entertain us continuously...if u hav thought of a longer story ... pls dont cut short it... we r loving it so much... n we like to read it in its full form..Pls. dont disappoint us...waiting for ur next part...

Thank you CT, I am swooning by your praising. Actually in the beginning I planned to make it as OS. But later I thought to make very short story about 4 or 5 parts max as i wasn't sure about how story moves forward. Will try my best to entertain you all. Thanks for reading and commenting. It's really feels good to read positive comments

Originally posted by: _CookieMonster_

Awesme part seems like maan is already fida on her loved it pls update next soon can't wait

and drop da idea of ending it soon..we are loving it..its really superb..u write so well<3

Thanks Cookie!😳 Yes ma'm..roger that! I won't end it so soon! Keep reading and commenting.

Originally posted by: _BlackPearl_

Wow ... Meera plays her card smartly !!!

So Maan's Mystery Girl is Geet, both having feelings for each other. Again Mr J playing its role. Awesome chapter. Hey don't be disappointed with the response, you are really doing a great job. This concept is fresh one in GF.

Thank you so much! I have few more new concepts banked on MG. Will start them once I complete at least two FF among 4 ongoing stories.

Originally posted by: shrutizlyf

Its actually hillarious and in one word..

AWESOME!!!! Well till now /i never evr read stories where Maan is anything else but a businessman.. I just din like to see him in any other avatars! But darling..your concept just hooked me down..:) Its awesome,witty,funny and simp[ly brilliant!!! Great job gal.. KIP IT UP!!

Thank you so much for reading my ff. Glad to know my story is entertaining you all. I was so bored of seeing maan only as business man. MaanGeet are my inspiration who can brings out the best in me.

Originally posted by: -Mithuna-

i am really enjoying this story especially geet & meera talk maan said he can control geet's tongue wah..meera kya kya idea de rahi hai get ko

Thank you !😳 Glad to know you like my story. Keep reading

Originally posted by: -Orchid-

Awesome update waiting for next part update other stories pls

Thank you!😆 I already did! Check it out babe!

Originally posted by: _lehar_

Nice part...loved it...this geet is really cute...she is bribing her babaji with halwa and all...maan was angry on for taking off her coat and leaving her hair open

Thank you for reading! Of course! He is..why not! Only he has the right to see geet like that. Coz he is the one who have patent rights on geet.. LOL

Originally posted by: EpicGHSPforever

Omg it was full of subtle seduction Meera's plan is working great . Geet getting bold is working on her favor and doubling effects on Maan

He is so J I wonder if a guy approaches Geet now then what will happen Superb update coffee house meeting is going AWESOME

Thank you so much! He is super J. Wait and watch what happens when someone dare to touch her..

Originally posted by: carmela.cruz

Hey plz don't end it so soon after a long time i have come across such a fun ff to read just yesterday. Wnna know more of this maan and geet

Thank you so much for reading. If you would like to read other works of mine, please check out the link in my signature.

Originally posted by: EpicGHSPforever

Don't end abruptly please

Guess not so soon!😆

Originally posted by: punam2712

DONT END IT SO SOON WANT TO SEE THEM CLASH IN THE COURT TOO AND IS IT TRUE THAT MAAN'S MYSTERY GIRL IS GEET WANT TO KNOW HIS POV TOO AND WHY IS HE SO ANGRY

Thank you 😳Punam! Keep reading to know maan's pov too.

Originally posted by: shalinisaran89

omg...loving it...

OMG! I am loving it too..Thanks for reading...😛

Originally posted by: Vidhi24

Too good dear, geet's bribing to godji was hilarious sachi I was smiling all the way, geet trying to flirt was so admirable, and maan's responses were really appreciable, wish he considers dating rather than just one night stand, waiting for you to continue...Just wish don't end it soon well abhi to maza ane laga tha, inti jaldi climax nahi chahiye... please please pretty please

Thank you and glad that I am able to pull off some witty funny lines in this story. Keep reading...

Originally posted by: _SnowFlakes_

Fantastic story ..I really loved the concept ..Finished reading all 3 parts together ..really loved it a lot ..So geet is maan's mystry girl coz of whom maan is changed frm 8 mnths ..seems liked meera's idea brought geet trouble ..maan seems angry on her ..waiting for nxt nw

Thank you! Yes this geet have that kind of effect on maan to which herself don't know what her one smile can do to him.

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

nice update...finally we got to see maan's reaction...loved it

Thank you. You have only seen his reaction. It's just start...keep reading to know his actions too!

Originally posted by: vibhashekhar

I'm so in love with this story!!! <3

Me too! Thank you...

Much Love

ROSE

bechari geet...meera k chakkar mein phans gayi...

All the parts were too good

when r u gonna update this one ?

part 3
excellent dear...
this is damn hilarious and lovely...
am so enjoying this...
Geet is so funny...
the way she answered back Maan was so hilarious...
in fact the people in the hut too were enjoying this banter...
wow very witty...
Geet's bribing Babaji was too funny...
and Yash seems to have cleared the doubts...
so Maan is really interested in Geet...
cont soon dear...