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gabrielle14

@gabrielle14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Dear Neoti,

Brilliant OS👏👏👏👏👏👏. Couldn't stop reading. Every expression was so clearly detailed.Why Is Paro going away? .Nice touch of bringing in the bus trip and connecting to their childhood trip. Awesome. Please update.

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awwwwwww

@awwwwwww

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

awesome ,please update soon

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Khuarv

@Khuarv

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

A beautiful os and very well written. The inability of Rudra to express his true emotions was beautiful described thru your writing . Eagerly waiting for the second part.

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Vishkanya

@Vishkanya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

You write very beautifully. This was lovely.

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

It's wonderful 👏 👏 👏

It's been seven months and now Parvati has left for birpur.

He wanted to stop her but words didn't leave her mouth and I think it's the three words "Don't leave me", she wanted to listen from Rudra, she too don't want to leave him , his home.

Eagerly waiting for the part 2

Update soon

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niyoti

@niyoti

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

MINE.

I love you bas. This was so amazing and totally worth the wait!

Also, Thank you for updating on Monday! Really!

I dunno if you did that on my request or you found this time suitable... But I am soo glad that I am the first to comment on this brilliant piece of writing Niyo!

This was so Rudra!

The thoughts. The idiotic realization at the end.

All of it.

Beautiful yaar!

I have a goofy smile on my face and I am in office right now.

Also, my favoritest part was how natural Rudra's reaction was of pushing her away as soon as he thought she had power over him. Typical Oont-Banna.

And also, how instant was his NEED to tell his wife about the new found realization. Again, TYPICAL OONT-BANNA.

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binimoti

@binimoti

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

This was fabulous, i loved every corner of it. It was beautiful.

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GUNJAN

@gunji

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

OHH finally the update I was waiting for...
u r truly gifted to be able to describe so beautifully dear...totally in love with your work👏

u r going to continue with this story ...right??...waiting for the next update😊

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zanayaforever

@zanayaforever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Niyo 🤗 ..that was beautiful..
So paro went on a self- proclaimed holiday..i hope dey will show something like dis onscreen.a small break will do wonders for their relationship...
part 2 was even lovelier dan part 1 👍🏼