JODHA AUR AKBAR WAQT SE AGE MAHABAAT KI DAASTAAN - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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story is really fantastic. Its really awesome. Please continue soon
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This story is going great😊 So Supriya will have to go back in time...Subroto too will enter... Only if we know what happened then, when she died... What was the situation...How Jalal felt... I think you will reveal slowly😊 Waiting for the next update... Do update soon...
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CHAPTER 5

Sunrotot met Supriya on the coffee shop he tried his best to keep his reaction normal . Supriya came and Huged her he also gave him a tight Hug they sat on a Table And their conversation begins _

Supriya- Where were you I called you throughout the day but You did not pic up my calls. Why?

Subrotot- Actually I was busy at work and so I could not take your calls. How was your day?

Supriya- You Know what happened, and she told how she met Mrs Kureshi what she found from there .

Subrotot- Why you went to meet her? Is she also a part of your project?

Supriya- Actually Subrotot I wanted to tell you something. Subrotot gave her a eager look actually Subroto when I went to fatayepur sikri the palace of jodha bai In the evening I was taking pictures and I heard this voice who was telling me that everything will change in three days. Subrotot looked at her at thought to gave it a last try he hold her hand and said - maybe it has happened because jalauddin mahamad Akbar has became an obsession to you. It is your childhood dream right .

Supriya- Smiled- I also thought so but I had a daubt , so I went to Mrs kureshi and she gave me a dairy which completely changed my perception of Akbar. She told about what she read so far in the dairy and the story she heard from mrs kureshi .

Subrotot- This Akbar he did not had the trust on his wife that she could not sleep with anybody else, People say that Akbar had a great judgment power when it comes to people , this was his judgment . He did not vse faith in his own wife , wow what a king, Subrotot waited to see Supriya's reaction . She replied- Akbar was after all a human being he was not god, and he also may be have made mistakes . Anyway enough about 16th century , let's get back to the present time . Subroto I think after going back from delhi we should meet kaku kakima ( Uncle, aunty) to talk about the marriage preparations I hope , we can manage.

Subroto- Could not take it anymore he suddenly look into her eyes and says don't go to fatahye pur sikri please, for me . Supriya was shocked to see this kind of behavior she looked at Subrotot with love

Supriya- Subrto you know this has been my dream. You always supported me I just have to spent the day after tomorrow their and then I will go back to Kolkata with you , and also I have findout about that voice is it just my imagination? Pease Subroto don't behave like this /. It looks like I am going far away from you. Sunrotot could not take it anymore he said lets go back.

Supriya- Why what happened? Are you ok? She was worried about Subroto . Subroto replied yes I am just feeling a bit tired want to take rest .

Supriya- ok then lets go . Subroto drops Supriya to mrs Kureshi's house .see you then after tomorrow.

Subrot- gave a very painfull look to her and said ok good bye . And he lives from there .

16TH Centuary 6th January 1568 - Jalal Finally met sekh salim chisti shaba , jalal was very much eager to talk to him- Salim chisti shab met him and told him to take rest and also told him that they will talk after sometime as they gone through a long journey and Jalal and Rukayiya should take rest . After a while in the evening Jalal went to Sekh Slim Chisti he saw jalal's face and he knew that he was worried he told Jalal that he can speak his heat out jalal wanted to hear this he waited for a moment and then he started.

Jalal- aap to jante hai ke hum yaha kyu aye hai . humare dil me bilkul bhi sukun nahi hai . Kuchi dino me aisa bahat kuch ho gaya hai jis wajaye se hu bahat takleef me hai( You know well why I am here. I do not have peace in my heart , In few days lot of things have happened and I am very upset because of that) .

Sekh- Sehensha hum jante hai. Kis tarha aap ke aur jodha begam ke bich larai hui , kis tarah wo amer ke liye rawana hui aur aap ko ye fikr de gayi hai ke wo zinda bhi hai ya nahi( Sehensha I know how Jodha bbbegam had an argument, and she left for amer and now you are worried that whther she is alive or not)

Jalal- Ankho me ansu le kar, unke jane ke baad hume ahesas hua ke hum unse mahabaat karte hai. Jis dil ke na hone ka hum dawa karte the usi dil ko dharkan de kar wo hume chor kar nahi ja sakti , roz hume unke kafile se kisis na kisis ke maut ki kahabar milti hai humara dil manne ko tayiyar nahi ke wo aabh zinda nahi. Par aab humme Aur hausla nahi hai hum me hum toot rahe hai andar se isiliye aap ke paas chale aye hai hum, hum janna cahte hai aap to saab jante hai humare iss sawal ka jawab de dijiye hume (Jalal with tears in his eyes after she left I realize that I love her, After making m realize that I have aa heart, she gave me the heart bit and now she cannot leave me like this . Every day I get a news of death from her group, but my heart is not ready to accept that she is no more. But now I am slowly losing hope., I am breaking from inside. That's why I came to you, I know you know everything. I want answer to my question.

Sekh- Sehensha hume pata tha aap humare paas ayenge , aap ki jodha zinda hai bilkul thik hai aur Amer me hai apne gharme( Sehensha I knew you would come to me, Your jodha is alive , she is absolutely all right and she is in Amer in her home.)

Jalal- sukar ha khuda hai suudenly jala naraz ho jate hai to unhe hume kyu nahi bataya? Kya unhe ilm nahi ke hum unke likye kitne pareshan honge?( Thanks to Khuda, suudenly he gets angry why she did not inform me? She don't know how much I am worried about her? ) Suddenly Rukayiya comes to Jalal and Sekh Chisti . hum aap se thori der baad milte hai Rukayiya begam aap guftagu kijiye hum ate hai( I will see you later, Rukayiya begam you have a word I will be back in sometime)

Rukayiya- adab , kaise hai aap? (adab how are you?) Rukayiya has a lot of pain in her eyes as well .

Sekhshab- Khuda aap ko Sukun bakes kya baat hai Rukayiya bgeam aap bahat takleef lag rahi hai?( may Khuda give you peace . What is the matter rukayiya begam You seem to be in pain?

Rukayiya- aap to saab jante hai phir bi aap humse puch rahe hai?( You Know verything , but still you are asking me?)

Sekhsahab- hum jante hai aap ke pareshani ki wajye, par khuda ki marzi ke age ksis ki nahi cahlti, khuda ne unki aur jalal ki takdeer ek saath likhi hai aur yahi khuda ka faisla hai, aap ise jitni jaldi maan le utnahi aap ke liye acha hoga( I know why you are worried . But you cannot argue with Khuda . Khuda has written jalal and her destiny together. This is what god's want. It will be better for if you accept this as soon as possible.

Rukayiya- Par humara kya? Hum bhi jalal se mahbat karte hai, jala ka aur humara saath bachpan ka hai kya iski koi kimat nahi khuda ki nazro me( But what about me? I also love jalal, we have been together seens our childhood does Khuda not value that?) Suddenly jalal comes again and rukayiya wipe her tears and she left the place . jala looked at chisti sahib and he smiles at jallal

Jala- Hum maffi v=cahate hai aap ke aur Rukayiya begam ke guftagu me humne khalal dali, par hum janna cahte hai ke aap ko kaise pata chala ke wo thik hai( I am sorry I inturupted Your Conversation with Rukayiya, But how do you that she is all right.) Sekh sahib agin gave a smile to jala

Sekhshab- unke bareme hume fikr thi aur hume laga ke hume Amer me unke bareme puchna cahiye, humne un he khat bhijwaya, to unhone hume sari baat batayioi aur ye bhi ke wo khayeriyat se hai, aur ye bhi kaha tha ke aap ko hum kuch na bataye , par hume batana para aap ki ankho me pachtawa aur dard dono dekhe the humne unke liye(I was worried abot her and this thought came into my mind that I should ask about her to SAmer, so I wrote to her and she told me the entire thing what happened between you and her she also confirmed that she is all right. She also insisted ythat I do not tell you anything about her, but I had to I was immense pain and gratitude for her in your eyes.

Jala ek baar hume amer pahachne dijiye phir hum batayenge unhe. Bhat ziddi ho gayi hai wo( let me reach Amer then I will show her, she has became very stubun. Sekh sahib smiles and jala and says- Kya aap humari ek guzaris manegge Sehensha?( will you keep a request of mine Sehensha?) Jalal immediately replies - ha zarur aap kahe kar to dekhiye( yes sure . you Just tell me.)

Sekhshab- Unhe maat le ayiye Amer se anew la waqt bahat nazuk hai ye waqt aap aur wo saath me par kar jaye ye bahat muskil hai aap kuch dino baat le ayiyega( Don't bring her back from Amer the coming time is very delicate, it will be tough for booth of you to survive through tis time, You can bring her back some times later.)

Jalal- hum nahi rahe sakte unke bina hume unhe lana hi hoga aap kuch aur mang lijiye humse( I can't live without her, I have to bring her back. Ask for somethingelse)

Sekhshab- Thik hai to wada kijiye humse jab bhi aisa waqt ayega jaab aap yakin aap dono ke riste par se uth jaye ya aap ka unpar se to aap dono humare paas ayenge( ok promise me when this time will come when you will lose trust in your relationship with her or you, or you think that she has lost your trust , then booth of you will come to me) jalal did not understand what he said but replied- hum wada karte hai agar aisa waqt aya to hum dono zarur koi bhi faisla lene se pehele aap ke paas ayenge( I promise if this kind of situation comes we both will come to you before taking any decision .

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Posted: 11 years ago
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REALLY NICE CHAPTER 😃
UPDATE SOON 😊
THNX FOR THE PM 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful update buddy...Well done😊...This story is really getting interesting now...Update the next part soon and do PM too😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 1-5
nice updates
loved it...
thanx for the om...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update continie soon & pm me tks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres... i know i know that i have taken forever to unres it but see the brighter side of it i did remember to unres it😃...
i really love this concept of urs of purav janam and all 😳
n i reall cant wait to see how supriya will react when she will come to know that she was jodha ...
so plz just dont make us wait more n update it soon
Edited by oshinchaudhary - 11 years ago

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