JODHA AUR AKBAR WAQT SE AGE MAHABAAT KI DAASTAAN

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HI EVERYONE I JUST GOT STUCK WITH THIS IDEA OF WRITING THIS NEW FF ON JODHA AKBAR . i KNOW i AM ALREADY WRITING ONE BUT THIS IS A DIFFERENT IDEA. SINS PEOPLE COMPLAIN THAT I DON'T WRITE IN ENGLISH SO THIS TIME I WROTE IT IN HINDI BUT WITH ENGLISH SUBTITLE AFTER THE COMMENTS I GET FOR FIRST CHAPTER WHICH IS WRITTEN IN HINDI. SO I WANT TO KNOW IF ANYBODY WOULD LIKE TO READ IT, AFTER READING THE CHAPTER 1 PLEASE COMMENT , IF I GET POSSESSIVE COMMENTS THEN ONLY I WILL CONTINUE , IT'S NOT THAT I CAN NOT TAKE CRITICISM , BUT WANT TO KNOW WHAT YOU FEEL ABOUT THIS IDEA, IT IS A FICTION OF DIFFERENT KIND I THINK HOPE ALL OF YOU LIKE IT

SO I GO WITH THE FIRST CHAPTER

index
chapter 1 page -1
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chapter 2 page - 4
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CHAPTER 3 PAGE - 6
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CHAPTER 4 PAGE - 7

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CHAPTER 5 PAGE -8
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JODHA AUR AKBAR WAQT SE AGE MAHABAAT KI DAASTAAN

This story is a fiction but of a different kind . I have just taken the historical characters and used my imagination as a writer I do not want to offend the feelings of any community or people from any regain, I just struck with the idea of giving Jodha-Akbar love story a new angel . It is written completely biased on my imagination, most of the characters, organizations, theories which are mentioned or told are purely work of fiction . am not doing it to make money from it . It is done purely from the love I have for the love story of jodha and Akbar. Hope the readers of the fiction will like it.

CHAPTER 1

21st Century 3rdnd January 2014 time - 12:00 pm - Supriya is very happy today she finally got the perdition from the Head Of The department of her university she can do make a research paper on her favorite subject which she dreamed of doing from her graduation days . she comes out of H.O.D'S department . she meets SUbrotot outside he asks her - To Tultul ijazat mil gay Madam se? supriya- atop calling me that, it feels like name of a pet. Subroto- ok I will not . supriya- thanks. Ya I got the permission . thora muskil tha par ho hi gaya. Subroto- so kaab niklogi research ke liye? Supriya- lets see may be I will start tomorrow? Subroto- ok see you at dinner then . Supriya- see you . Suddenly supriya's best friend Ankita comes to her from her face anybody can tell that she is a bit nervous . Supriya- what happened? Hua kya hai? Ankita- union ke ladko ne phir udham machaya hua hai theses boys are too much . na jane kaab ye khatam hoga teri zarurat hai. Supriya- chal ja kar dekhte hai kya hua . When Suprya reaches the union common room it was in a mess , and the boys were still fitting over the campaigning issue . Supriya- whats wrong with you guys ye kya chal raha hai yaha? Koi mazak hai kya ? har baar election se pehele tum log. Suddenly ankur comes he looks up to Supriya like his eldee sister . he is still in the 2nd year and doing his B.Com he comes to Spriya- they started it di we did not . it was our time for rally , but they suddenly a boy from opposition said- we are from the ruling party we can do what we wat to do you cant not. Supriya- wait , you have divided time tables now its there time after 2 pm you do what you want to do . Ankur- I hope you heard it you supriya- enough no more fighting ok? I have to go have some work . supriya comes out from the common room. Arpita- really you have left the post of GS three years back but you still have a command over them . supriya- they love me that's it . Arpita- not only that you have a leadership quality which cannot be denied . I wonder tune raajnneti kyu chordi. Supriya- simple main inn saab se bore ho chuki thi aur subrotot ko bhi to ye saab... Arpita- Subrotot the love of your life to kaab kar rahe ho tum dodno shadi? Supriya- baas ye research ke liye mera 4 dino ka tore khatam ho jaye then shadi phir PHD ki parhayi . Arpita- ok chalo I will catch up with you later .Supriya- ok chalo bye.

16th century nd 3rd january 1568 time 12:00 pm- Jalal his standing near the window of his hojra this was not meant to be happen, whay ? why he did this he should have gave it a second thought how could he he will never be able to forget himself , the pain through which the whole kila and mughal saltanat is going he is responsible for it . Sehenhsae hind is so helpless . he has been waiting for adga shaba for too long . but he is not coming . Does it takes this much time to find out? What's wrong with these people. Suddenly Rukayiay comes with a bandi - jala kuch kha lijiye do dino se ek niwla nahi utra hai aap ke halak se. jala- kaise kha le rukayiya . jo hua use baad . rukayiya- hum jante hai jalal . jo hua wo bahat galat hua adga sahib gaye hai na wo zarur koi kahabr layenge . par aap ki tabiyat ko kuch ho gaya to saltanat ko kaun samhalega jalal? Jalal- looks at rukayiya's face- hum jante hai hum tumhe amm jaan ko , bahat taklif de rahe hai par hum kya kare rukayiya kaas humne unki baat nahi maani hoti to aaj . Rukayiya- saab thik ho jayega jala aap khana kha lijiye thora sa hi sahi . aap ji to kehete hai khane ko na khana uski beizati joti hai. Aap ko allah ka vasta . jala- thik hai, jala has just taken a bite and a bandi comes bandi- gustakhi maaf ho huzuzr par adga kha shab aap se mulakat ki iltaja kelkar aye hai. Suddenly jala's eyes billing with a hope . jala- bhejo unhe isi waqt. Rulkayiya- jala khana . jalal- baad me rukayiya abhi aap jayiye. Rukayiya- thik hai, and rukayiya takes an exit from jalal's hojra. SAdga sahib enters jalal- almost ran to him. Kya hua adga sahib koi kahabar? Adga sahib- his eyes were looking down at floor . sehensha ek buri kahabr hai . jala- kaisi buri khabar? Adgakhan- wow o sehensha wo unhe. Jalal- screams at adga shaba- kya hua unhe jawab dijiye hume? Do din taak aap ne hume koi kahbar nahi di hai aur aab ye khamosi . batayiye hume ye aap ke sehensha ka hokum hai . Adga- jis kafile ke saath wo ja rahi thi us kafile me cahanak kisis bimari keher hua sehensha aur saab ke saab mare gaye . kuch ki lashe jangal me mili hai aur jala- aap ke kehene ka maat lab kya hai? Adga- huzuzr hume khabar mili hai ke uss kafile me koi nahi bacha un saab ke saath hume daar tha ki wo bhi. Jala- ya khooda kahi aap wo to nahi kaheneg jo hum sunna nahi cxahate. Adga- huxuxr isiliye iss nachiz ne do din ka waqt liya poora jangal aura as paas ke gao bhi chan liye par unka koi apta nahi cahala . par aaj aaj Jala- humare sabr ka aur imtahan maat lijiye adga sahib aaj kya ? aaj hum eek lash mili hai aur hume shak hai ki wo lash...Jala- nahi ye nahi ho skata. Adga- huzuzr aap ko ekbaar uss lash ko dekhne ana hoga huzuzr ye ek gulam ki iltaja hai aap se. jalal- nahi humare saath khuda itni bari na insafi nahi kar sakte . adga- huzuzr samhaliye apne aap ko. Jala- kya mehel me saab ko pata hai ki? Adga-nahi huzuzr lash ke pehechan ke bada hi saab ko bataya jayega. Jala- thik hai cchaliye. Jala walks towards the main gate of the fort . It was felt like he was walking miles and miles he was hopeing that the deadbody should not identify or resemble with her . She can not do this to him, she cannot break her promise . jalal walked towards the body he have seen many dad bodies as a worrier and identified them, but this time after seeing the body he stood still for few seconds adga shab- kya hua sehenhsa? Jalal- ye wo nahi hai ye wo nahi ho sakti . adga- par inhone jo zebrat pehene hai. Jalal- humne kaha na ye wo nahi hai, wo aisa nahi kar skati . aap iss lash ka antimsaskar karwane ka intezam kijiye adga- hum mante hai sehensha ser iss lash ko buri tarha se ghyal kiya hai cehera bhi pehechan me nahi araha hai par. Jala- adga shaba ye wo nahi hai, aur iss bareme haram me koi baat nahi hogi. Sirf rukayiya iss bareme janti hai hume pura yakin hai wo hume chor kar nahi ja sakti . aur ha iss bareme aap mehel me bhi koi baat maat kijiyega. Apni talash jari rakhiye . adga- ji huzuzr.jala retuns to his hojra rukayiya was there- Kya hua jala? Jalal- adga shaba ek lash laye the aaj rukayiya- ya allah saab khayeriyat to hai na jala- jalal- uss laash ke jism par jo zewar the wo unke the . rukayiya- ya khuda ye aap kya kahe rahe hai? Jala- huem yakin hai ruayiya ye wo nahi thi . wo hume chor kar nahi ja sakti . rukayiya humare dil me bahat bechayeni si ho rahi hai. Hum kaal hi aap ke ssath salim chisti ke paas jana cahte hai . bahat hogaya aab aur bardash nahi hota humse, thora sukun cahate hai . rukayiya- jaisa aap cahe jala hum kaal subha hi niklenge. Khuda saab thik karenge jalal , hum sare intezamat karwate hai. Jala ha karwayiye , aur tab taak adga shaba sab kuch samhal lenge yaha .

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PLEASE DO COOMWNT IF YOU COMMENT THEN I WILL UPDATE THE STORY ONCE A WEEK IF YOU DO NOT COMMENT I WILL STOP UPDATING THANK YOU👏

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