Arakshi FF - Forever with You - Last chapter and Epilogue 07/05 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
beautiful it is my dear
but what happened that he was so away for a long time
and whats going to happen
eager to know
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
fantastic updateee
dear update soon...

thnx for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
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fantastic update...
something is troubling him wt is that don keep suspense...
plz do cont soon...
Edited by anu91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
hey ritu...u compel me to leave my each work nd get involved in ur fantasy lad yaa!

this one is spcl to u right...

i cn feel it in th words u r writing!
the flashback part ws sooo cute!
both of them were so naughty...sakshi getting jealous of arjun...

arjun felt a connection with sakshi's mom too hence he started calling her maai!

lovely update!!

bt wat is this mystery part...wat is it dat arjun thinks he'll hurt sakshi if he tells her truth...

continue soon

PS: missing 'betn pages'

love
Aisha
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
I m sorry ritu but I adorn this chotu ACP &his titli more than the grown ups&for that here's a biG bear hug to the two.
I so so so adorn&love the conversation between him &his Maai.
Zig Ziglar quote says "Kids go where there is excitement. They stay where there is love".Her love,care,pampering draws him towards her that he felt a sense of protection towards his Maai& titli at such a tender ageπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Humairaa

Wow awsm update

Loved it
It was just beautiful
The flashback was lovely
Continue soon

Thank youu HumairaaπŸ€—

Originally posted by: shreya09

i am speechless !!!!
Ritu ji !!!!!!!!!!! how can u write so soo sooo well haan ???
very very very nice writing

already waiting for the next part
great writing Rituuu πŸ€—
loved it πŸ‘πŸΌ

Awww Shreyaaa you flatter me againnn☺️
Thank youuuπŸ€—

Originally posted by: PoohLover

Rituuu rituuu teri hands mein nah jadoo hain...you write sooo beautifully yaar making me go into 'Forever with you world'..lol am even imagining the scene in the rain..sakshi wearing a black dress..knee lenght one and arjun as you said white shirt

Sooo emotional as well it was...the past bit was soo cute ❀️

Oh oh why Arjun went away..what did he do...is he feeling guilty?but for what?is it something with sakshi mom death? sooo many mystery..you gotta continue soon😎

Like i said it was not looong rituu rituuu..you can do much better in terms of long updates πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†

Fantabulous update...do continue soon and thank you sooo much..big hugs to youπŸ€—

Poooh BearrrπŸ€—
hahaa i m glad you liked ittt hayeee main toh thanks bhi nahi bol sakti lolπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Looove you for the comment and biiig hugs to youπŸ€—

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Awesome update...

Beautifully written...
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Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Thank you SnehaaπŸ€—

Originally posted by: sakshiarjun

Awesome dear... As usual you took as to Sakshi's and Arjun's world...

Along with we also got drenched in the rain...
The past was so cute... I like the cute naughty Arjun...
Why was Arjun feeling guilty? Why couldn't he keep Sakshi with him forever?πŸ˜•
Continue soon dear...

Thank youuu πŸ€—
I know you have a lot of questions, they will be answered with time hehe😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai

Awesome update didi.

Loved it and love u.

Awww the flashback was sooo cute.

But u made me cry.

They are soo much in pain.

Can't see them in pain.

Plz con soon..

Thanks a lot EashaπŸ€—πŸ€—
Looove you for the comment! Awww dont worry, just one more chapter and then not too many emotional ones hehe😳

Originally posted by: jia03

Awesome update πŸ‘

Loved the flashback ❀️

Thank youuu JiaπŸ€—

Originally posted by: coolRD

OMG!!!! dis ws jst outstndng Ritu.. u made me lost vry deep in d stry again

i cud really conct 2 sakshi's pain.. she has actually suffrd a lot
d fb scene ws really vry cute.. as it is i luv d smaller versions of arjun nd sakshi.. nd d tadka of ur strys mke me fall 4 dem mre nd mre.. their cute little banter ws so adorable
there's quite a lot of mystry bhind arjun i guess.. i'm actually imagining wat wud b d posibl reasns of him leaving so sudnly.. nd again cming bck thnkng dat he won't b abl 2 stay wid sakshi 4evr.. i really wndr wat mistke he has committed..
do cntinue soon.. nd thnx 4 d pm

Thank you thank you thank youuu for the lovely comment πŸ€—
it serioulsy means a lot to mee!😳

Originally posted by: skrafty

Awesome update
loved it
It was magical
the FB was too cute
why is Arjun guilty?
why can't he live with Sakshi?
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Thank youu ShravaniiπŸ€—
Questions shall be answered sooonπŸ˜‰

Originally posted by: vivy58

hey u again back with boom...πŸ˜ƒ

love it .❀️..what an amazing update...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
the FB part was superb ,, awesome.. lovely tooo...πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ
eagerly waiting for next part ..
con.soon...😊.

Thank youuuπŸ€—

Thank youuuπŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97

awesome update

Loved it
It was just beautiful
The flashback was lovely
thankx for pm.

Thank youuu PariiiπŸ€—

Originally posted by: NainaSM

cute flashback .,,,,😳,,,,,,,, but what happened ? wana know ... why arjun can be with her forever ? .😲... continue soon πŸ‘πŸΌ

Thank youu NainaπŸ€—

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

nice update

sakshi's anger her need to know why and arjun's helplessness to give the answers for what ever the reasons 😭
flashback was so sweet how they became friends and how sakshi's mom loves arjun
hope sakshi is able to bring arjun back to herself with the time and they never part again
thanks for pm
hey i was in kerela back waters recently and it is absolutly beautiful so green so much of water
so u can use it in any of ur arakshi stories and the way u will write i am sure u r gona make
it more beautiful πŸ˜‰ happy writing

Thank youu ShefaliiiπŸ€—
ahh i so want to be there too myself! thanks for the idea, will deffo try and use it sometimeπŸ˜‰
Hope you enjoyeddd 😳
P.S - I have a wedding invitation in kerala for august and now i m thinking i should go hehe

Originally posted by: misakiscarlet

amazing...beautifully written
loved it..
arjun cant stay with her y????
y does he leave her before
plz contd. soon
thnx for pm

Thank youuu AradhyaπŸ€—

Originally posted by: Anjali.Mital

Its just beautiful Ritu..

Cont. soon...
Thanks for the pm...

Thank you AnjaliπŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: kunchu

beautiful it is my dear

but what happened that he was so away for a long time
and whats going to happen
eager to know
continue soon

Thank youuu Helna (that's your name right?) πŸ€—

Originally posted by: shailyshukla9

fantastic updateee

dear update soon...

thnx for pm

Thank youuπŸ€—

Originally posted by: anu91

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fantastic update...
something is troubling him wt is that don keep suspense...
plz do cont soon...

AnuuuπŸ€—
Thank you sooo soo much for the comment! it means a lot😳

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth

hey ritu...u compel me to leave my each work nd get involved in ur fantasy lad yaa!

this one is spcl to u right...

i cn feel it in th words u r writing!
the flashback part ws sooo cute!
both of them were so naughty...sakshi getting jealous of arjun...

arjun felt a connection with sakshi's mom too hence he started calling her maai!

lovely update!!

bt wat is this mystery part...wat is it dat arjun thinks he'll hurt sakshi if he tells her truth...

continue soon

PS: missing 'betn pages'

love
Aisha

Awww thanks sooo much Aisha! πŸ€—
that really really means a lot..and hehe it might be a lil special😳

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

I m sorry ritu but I adorn this chotu ACP &his titli more than the grown ups&for that here's a biG bear hug to the two.
I so so so adorn&love the conversation between him &his Maai.
Zig Ziglar quote says "Kids go where there is excitement. They stay where there is love".Her love,care,pampering draws him towards her that he felt a sense of protection towards his Maai& titli at such a tender ageπŸ˜ƒ

Awww lovely quote FarheenπŸ€—
hehe glad you liked ittt..thank you for the comment πŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
HeyloooπŸ€—
Sorry agaiinnn..this got delayed hehe.☺️

So so, I know the questions are still biting at you, and they will be answered but as the story proceeds😳
Here is the next chapter (yeah I know you will say that it's not a very long update, but I am going on a holiday on Friday and hence I had to update before I leave)

Read onnn😳

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Ok, sorry if I made you cry! I hope I didn't! But if I did, then I should tell you that this was the last sad/emotional update for now πŸ˜ƒ

Please do leave your comments!😳

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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