Sparks without Electricity ;) - Zaya TS- Updated on Pg 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello Zaya Louversss!🤗

Yesterday we had a generator breakdown and "andheri raat with no bijli " had me getting all of these wrong thoughts about Zaya ☺️🤣

So! I decided to take advantage of the situation and write this today! It can remain an OS or become a TS based on the responses.😃

Thank you for reading!😃

The lines in italics are their thoughts :)



It had been 2 hours since their power was out. And it seemed the entire Abdullah family was to have candlelight dinner as well! So much for bonding!

Aaliya was tired of working in the heat and sweat alongwith Chand Khala to prepare their Sunday feast of Biryani and Lamb chops plus her Shaahi Tukda. Her Shauhar, Mr. Kitkit had demanded for it, after all.

Mentally cursing him for making her work in her heavy attire, she curdled the milk on the gas when Chand Khala scared her calling out "Aaliya beta!"

"Chand Khala! Aapne toh achanak se andhere mein dara hee diya!"

Chand Bi smiled. "Itni garmi ho rahi hai. Kuch halke mein change kar ke aa jao. Zain ko bhi dekh lena is bahaane. Na jaane kab se so raha hai"

Aaliya was more than happy to oblige."Aap iska dhyaan rakhiye, main Kitkit..er..Zain ko dekh ke aati hoon."

She took a candle carefully walking so as to not spill the wax on her fingers. She was balancing a sample of the sweet for him to taste as well, in her other hand. Creaking the door open, she entered their bedroom.


"Kya baat hai MKB? Itne tayyari se kahan chali aa rahi ho?"

Aaliya threw him a quizzical look not quite understanding his reference "Matlab?"

"Aaj tum apne actual Chudail avatar mein? Candle, khule baal and the works?" he smirked.


Aaliya gritted her teeth, ignoring him while looking for a suitable position to place the candle.


"Theek hai le jaati hoon. Andhera enjoy karo. Ya fir koi Ullu ho, jise raat mein dikhayi deta hain?" She said placing the candle and bowl on her dressing table, by his side of the bed, and sat down to remove her jewellery.

He narrowed his eyes. "Itni funny Chudail? Thodi technology wali bhi ban jao! Phone hai mere paas, jisme light hoti hai. Aur ye tab kaam aati hai jab Biwi apne Shauhar ka bina khayal kiye andhere mein chhod ke chali jaati hai." He sulked.


Aaliya hid a smile. She scooted closer to him with the Bowl and spoon. He also shifted on the bed towards her, to take a better look.

"MashaAllah! She looks gorgeous." Were his first thoughts when he cast a look at her in the candle light, sans any jewellery. "& I hope I didn't say that out loud!"


Aaliya handed him the dish and smiled indulgently. "Shauhar ji, Taste kar ke Bataiye"

Zain refused to take the bowl.

"Kya hua?" Aaliya got worried. "Mami ke haath ka hee pasand hai kya?"


Zain was perturbed for a moment. He should tell her sometime she cooked really well. And maybe pretend to get sick one of these days to get to taste her soup. Fahad Bhai had vouched for it, after all.

Composing himself, he decided to make her happy. He knew she always seemed to melt a little by romance.


"Nahi. Mujhe Bhopal style hee khana hai"

"Toh phir? Khaiye na?"

"Khilaiye na!" he grinned.

She blushed at his copying her. "Romance works!" He made a permanent note.


She took a spoonful towards him. He held her lower palm and observed she got nervous. He took the spoonful and decided immediately that it was the best he had tasted ever in his life.


"Can I kiss you?"


The spoon fell and clanged into the bowl as Aaliya looked at him in shock. He hoped she wouldn't run away out of panic. Uff this MKB!


"Relax. I meant your hands!"

"He is evil." She made a note." Having fun at my expense."


"Thank you. But tumhe toh Maami ne sikhaya hai na ki aisi vaisi cheezon ko muh nahi lagate?" Aaliya placed the bowl near him and went to her cupboard to find a simple suit. Pools of saltwater collected in her eyes as she was reminded of his insult.

Zain was taken aback by the sudden flashback. This poor thing had retained that waste piece of information for so long?


Plus she made romance difficult. Oh lord.


He got up and went to her. Standing right behind her, he realized she had tears, which she was now surreptitiously wiping away.


"Tumhe mujhe Shirtless dekhna pasand haina?"

Aaliya spun around. "What the hell?!"

"Don't be in denial. Tum bhi kya yaad rakhogi MKB. Mood theek kar lo" saying so he proceeded to remove his shirt.

Aaliya made a frantic attempt to stop him. "Pagal ho Zain!" she held his hands midway.

"Garmi lag rahi hai mujhe! T shirt nahi badal sakta? Trailer mein hee darr gayi?"

"Main deti hoon T shirt. Main jab change karne jaungi Bathroom mein tab tum room mein kar lena. Abhi covered raho upar se neeche!" She scolded him turning away trying to calm her disturbed self.


But Zain Abdullah listen to MKB? Naah.

He removed his shirt quietly and observed her while she hunted for something, trying to work in the semi-lit environment.


"Ye lo." She simply handed a T shirt without even turning and walked away holding her own set of clothes towards the bathroom.


Walk away?! Just like that?! She didn't even spare him a glance! This nice sculpted body of his! So much for shirtless romance?

But Zain Abdullah wasn't so easy to get rid of, was he?

Okay! So Like or Comment and tell me whether it is good or bad? This shall continue or not continue based on that!😳

And I take only branded sandals and organic veggies if you are planning to throw any of those.😆😆

Second Part : Role Reversal


With loveee

Ninja!😃

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-Ammie- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oooh, Ninjay ki OS! morning = made!

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Ninja Ji this was an exceptionally good read...i love your "source of inspiration" lol...a generator breakdown?! really woman...you were thinkin' of this while there was a power cut ...! 😆
but i'm glad you wrote this tho...it was brilliant and soo romantic ☺️

i'm totally in for a scene like this in the show itself!

i love shahi tukda...so now imma have to make some for myseld immediately...well thank you for reminding me 😛

and i want morrreee! continue karo na plsss! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oho ninja ji if writing could kills tou ap ki writing ne mjhe maar dala
And what the hell is this you ended it on cliff hanger and I was expecting zain would follow her to the bathroom 😆

please continue this is surely worth it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: xoxpunkxox

Oho ninja ji if writing could kills tou ap ki writing ne mjhe maar dala
And what the hell is this you ended it on cliff hanger and I was expecting zain would follow her to the bathroom 😆

please continue this is surely worth it


Hahaha I was wondering the same. Whether to send him after her or not😆

Thanks for reading! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow lovely OS ninja :)))
Andheri mein romance...the concept is beautiful...
hahha i was all blushing while reading it...
Keep writing more!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Romance in night without electricity,what a concept.Zain was in so much romance mood,when we'll be get that Zain in show.lol poor boy Aliya didn't show little bit of attarction to his sexy bare body.can't wait to know what he going to do next.update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello hi you need to continue this LIKE WHY YOU STOP HERE? This is torture :(

Also when Zain said, "Can I kiss you?" I was thinking, mind in gutter 🤣

You write beautifully :) Please do continue! It'd be a treat to read :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Ammie-

oooh, Ninjay ki OS! morning = made!


---------------------------

Ninja Ji this was an exceptionally good read...i love your "source of inspiration" lol...a generator breakdown?! really woman...you were thinkin' of this while there was a power cut ...! 😆
but i'm glad you wrote this tho...it was brilliant and soo romantic ☺️

i'm totally in for a scene like this in the show itself!

i love shahi tukda...so now imma have to make some for myseld immediately...well thank you for reminding me 😛

and i want morrreee! continue karo na plsss! 😳


🤗

You have no idea what all thoughts I got when the power was cut for so long. And then I imagined what if they didn't have lights on the set in the night shift🤣

You better send some of that Shahi Tukda love this way😳

😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maneesha_Shanak

Wow lovely OS ninja :)))

Andheri mein romance...the concept is beautiful...
hahha i was all blushing while reading it...
Keep writing more!!


Thank you Maneesha!

I might make it a TS if I have the time and motivation..LOL
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jyo.

Hello hi you need to continue this LIKE WHY YOU STOP HERE? This is torture :(

Also when Zain said, "Can I kiss you?" I was thinking, mind in gutter 🤣

You write beautifully :) Please do continue! It'd be a treat to read :D


🤣

I had to stop myself from writing besharam stuff🤣

Otherwise..I was quite famous for those🤣

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