Sparks without Electricity ;) - Zaya TS- Updated on Pg 4 - Page 6

Originally posted by: sunithi

u write so well...plz do continue...

Originally posted by: -Ammie-

Ninjaaa! this was such a brilliant update! i really loved it!

i love how Zain was so dumbfounded at Aaliya's badla huwa behaviour...😆 if only we'd get to see something like that in the show as well!

You wrote so well! So romantic and Zaya like...loved their kit kit! 😳

looking forward to reading more from you in the future. 🤗

Originally posted by: NinjaInPyjamas

Itna formal note from you??😆

I am so bummed by the whole Barkat track yaaar.

I am going to write one on their separation. 😃😆

☺️ just one expression ... so hot it was, loved it... kitkit romance ☺️

Hey this was really good i am outstanded you are such a good writer! you should write so much more and i am sure as the days go more and more people will read ur work :-) its just so new at the moment thats why lack of response. I hope u will add more parts ..keep it up..:-)

Originally posted by: preity_d

☺️ just one expression ... so hot it was, loved it... kitkit romance ☺️

Originally posted by: ** L.U.S.H **

Hey this was really good i am outstanded you are such a good writer! you should write so much more and i am sure as the days go more and more people will read ur work :-) its just so new at the moment thats why lack of response. I hope u will add more parts ..keep it up..:-)

I just read both the parts. And I fell in love with it!!
Especially part 2. :)

Write more na please..

Branded sandals, branded clothes, real jewels especially for u. It was tooo good. I loved it. Keep writing more. 😊 Washroom kitkit was the best of all. And the dialogues were amazingly written.😉