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Chandnii.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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aish-au

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Posted: 11 years ago

sounds interesting.

can't wait for jealous and possesive asad

cont soonish and plzzz pm me wen u do :)

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

Interesting! 😃

Possessive and Jealous Asad!

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sarbrathan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Are you seriously considering NOT continuing this? This was my favourite track and just judging from this chapter I can tell your mind is WAY SUPERIOR THAN Gul SO CONTINUE!

One request, can it be in english? I struggle reading hindi/urdu. I am improving and I can read things like bhaijaan, ammi, baat, meri, shaadi, mein, tum, hum, kal, dosti, dost, etc but not full sentences so things like articles. Like I didn't fully understand "lekin usse pehle aapko mek batana hee hoga ki if you didn't mean it, aap mujhe airport pe ring pehnate hee nai. Hain na!?!" I gathered the meaning using the bold parts "did you mean it when you proposed at the airport." But then Asad said "yes," and Mr. Emotionally Challenged Khan cannot accept his feelings SO I KNOW I AM WRONG😳

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Miss-Appy

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Posted: 11 years ago

Its awesome buddy ! 👏 😃
Loved it !! 😳 please do continue soonish ! 😳

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RAJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

This is awesome buddy. Looks interesting.
Jealous asad a treat to watch. Continue soon.

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nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

very interesting

plz pm me for updates

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Chandnii.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aish-au
sounds interesting.
can't wait for jealous and possesive asad
cont soonish and plzzz pm me wen u do :)

hi , thankyou .
glad you liked it .
will try to update soon (:

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Chandnii.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sarbrathan
Are you seriously considering NOT continuing this? This was my favourite track and just judging from this chapter I can tell your mind is WAY SUPERIOR THAN Gul SO CONTINUE!
One request, can it be in english? I struggle reading hindi/urdu. I am improving and I can read things like bhaijaan, ammi, baat, meri, shaadi, mein, tum, hum, kal, dosti, dost, etc but not full sentences so things like articles. Like I didn't fully understand "lekin usse pehle aapko mek batana hee hoga ki if you didn't mean it, aap mujhe airport pe ring pehnate hee nai. Hain na!?!" I gathered the meaning using the bold parts "did you mean it when you proposed at the airport." But then Asad said "yes," and Mr. Emotionally Challenged Khan cannot accept his feelings SO I KNOW I AM WRONG😳

Hi , thankyou . its just I'm not a writer , hence the apprehension .
regarding your confusion , I'm sorry , didnt frame the lines well . made a change , see if you can understand now . Also , I'll and write as much as possible in english (:

Edited by mona12345 - 11 years ago