ZAYA-FF I MISSED YOU! ENJOY - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys, here i am with the last chapter of I MISSED YOU, enjoy and comment please. thanks!


Early morning in Barkat villa, everyone is coming downstairs to have breakfast except Zain and Zaya, they started they kit-kit from 7 am, still didn't stop.

Aliya couldn't wait to go and help out, so she left the room as soon as she was done with her hair.

Zaya: Abbu, where is ammi?

Zain: She went to the park with the other very pretty princesses.

Zaya: No abbu, I am the only princess in here.

Zaya couldn't stand her abbu when he called another person a princess, because she was the one, she was always the one and always will be, no matter what.

Zaya started to cry as if someone suddenly took the most precious thing away from her.

Zain: Sorry princess, I am sorry, look!

Zaya: OK! (She said smiling and wiping her angelic tears away.)

Zain: By the way, did you know that you look like your ammi?

Zaya: Yes I did.

Zaya loved playing with her abbu's shirt and commenting on his 6-pack abs. She loved her dad, since she was little. She would hear her ammi saying so many nice things about him, and she always believed in her, she always dreamed that her abbu would come, pick her up in his arms and make her fall asleep, and finally her dream came true.

Zaya: Abbu did you know how much ammi loved you?

Zain: She loved me? Does that mean that she doesn't anymore? (He said in a mocking way)

Zaya: No silly, she still loves you and always will, but now I want to go downstairs and play with my cousins...what was their names again?

Zain: Arub and Sana! Ok legs go.

Zaya left first, took her mini pink towel and headed toward the bathroom, but stopped when she realized that she cant even brush her teeth properly than how will she have a bath all by her self?

Zaya: Abbu, can you call ammi please?

Zain: Why? (Looking at her with surprized expression)

Zaya: Because she needs to bath me, OK?

Zain: OK, wait I'll help you.

Zaya: OK

Zain headed toward the bathroom, opened it and went inside, after 10 minutes of chaos in the bathroom, they finally came out, with Zaya in her abbu's arms, fully wet and Zain, holding Zaya, who became half wet because of her silky hair.

Zain: There you go princess, you are done, let me go and get your cloths.

Zaya: OK, but hurry up, I am shivering!

Zain: OK, look what I've got you, your favourite one.

Zaya: Thank you.

Zain made Zaya perfectly look as if she was a really princess, he moisturized her, dried her hair, combed her hair, put her favourite designer dress on and finally put her home sandals on, and there she fully ready and perfect.

All that time, Aliya has been standing near the door and looking at how the most person of her life, lived together and too care of each other.

Aliya: WOW... Zaya you look exactly a Barbie doll.

Zaya: Thank you ammi, abbu made me ready!

Zain: See Aliya even I know stuff about children and how to take care of them.

Aliya: Thank you, anyway Zaya lets go downstairs, Arub and Sana are waiting for you.

Zaya: Zaya: Wait ammi, I need to go and get my towel from my bracelet from the bathroom.

When Zaya left for the bathroom, Zain back-hugged Aliya.

Aliya: What are you doing Zain? Zaya will come back at any minute.

Zain: No she won't, now tell me, why were you spying on Zaya and me for?

Aliya: No, I wasn't...

Zain: You don't know how to lie

Aliya: To see whether you know how to take care of a child or not.

Zain: OH, Hello I know how to take good care of her all right.

Aliya: All right, now let me go and come downstairs quickly.

Zain let her go as soon as he heard the bathroom door open.

Zaya: Ammi I am ready.

Aliya: OK let's go; I baked a cake for you, Arub and Sana.

Zaya: Really, Let's go than hurry up!

Zaya was running down the stairs and suddenly bumped into someone.

Surraya: OMG! Are you OK beta? I am so sorry! (Surraya looked concern)

Zaya: Yes I am OK, I should say sorry to you because I bumped into you and because I was running when I wasn't supposed to. (Zaya started to cry, not wanting to get shouted at)

Surraya: It's OK, beta, mistakes happen, anyway let's go, your ammi baked a really nice chocolate cake, if you don't come than I will eat it all by my self; Aliya come.

Aliya: Yes mami.

Surraya: Zaya, go to the dinning table and join the others I will be there in about a minute.

Zaya: OK.

Surraya: Aliya beta, I thought about it for the whole night and realized that the changed Zain only happened because of you, I am really sorry that I mistook you for... anyway and from today, you will not call me mami!

Aliya looked with a shocked face

Surraya: What are you looking at? From today you will call me mom OK!

Aliya was overwhelmed, finally her mother in law accepted her as her daughter in law.

Zain has been watching the whole saas-bahu scene from the stairs and was really happy.

Zain: WOW... really!

Aliya and Surraya: What?

Zain: Nothing, just shocked that chalk and cheese finally came together, anyway... where is my princess?

Aliya: On the dinning table!

Zain: OH ok, good that she didn't stay there watching the saas-bahu natak, otherwise she would have started it as well.

Aliya and Surraya: Zain!!!

Zain: Sorry!

Everyone was happy, no more problems; Zain and Aliya lived happily ever after with their kid Zaya.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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The last two updates made me fall in love with your writing all all over again just loved it how he told Aliyah to be careful when she got off the car how he supported her and stood up to suraiya and when he even didn't spare nagisa and shazia was hilarious! Loved it when he bathed zaya and the back hug was the cutest and loved how even suraiya apologised to Aliyah and was so nice to zaya was amazing to see :) thanks for the Pms was a pleasure to read :)
Edited by Sweta... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic
Loved zain and zaya part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing!!
You wrote it so beautifully, love the cutie little Zaya
Loved ZaYa's scenes
All the parts were awesome
Edited by mayur-arti.4eva - 11 years ago

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