ZAYA-FF I MISSED YOU! ENJOY

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THE CHARACTERS:

1)ALIYA ZAIN ABDULLAH: The wife of Zain Abdullah, but left her husband due to his lack of happiness with her. Let him live his life, without no worry. She is a very lively and talkative, she a mother of Zain's daughter. Also the Head of Z.Z company.

2)ZAIN ABDULLAH: The husband of Aliya, loves her dearly and started to miss her since she left his house, his room, his heart. Used to to be really immature, he always used to party for the whole night and sleep throughout the day. He is unaware of the fact that he is a father of a 3 years old lovely daughter!

3)ZAYA ZAIN ABDULLAH: The daughter of Zain and Aliya, but has never seen her dad face to face but has seen many of his pictures from her mother 's phone. Very lively and energetic like her mother and has a very weird sense of humour which would make everyone laugh just like father.

4) USMAN ABDULLAH: The father of Zain, who has always supported his children no matter what decisions they took, to teach them that not everything in life is free and that some things in life should be taken care of very carefully. Really loves Zain and share a very deep bond with Aliya.

Prologue:

The story start when the Aliya left Barkah villa because her mother-in-law said so for Zain's happiness and because of her Zain's happiness she was ready to leave anything but she was unaware of Zain's feelings for her, but it was too late, she left and didn't return but Zain didn't loose hope. He somewhere down there knew that she would comeback in his life, so he decided to change his life, become a bit more serious about his life so decided to join his father's business.

SO THERE YOU GO, IT'S A NEVER ENDING STORY, SO NO CHAPTERS:

Zaya: Ammi, I am hungry! (said a very frustrated Zaya)

Ammi where are you? Amm...

BEFORE ZAYA COULD SAY ANYTHING SHE FOUND HER MOM SITTING NEXT THE POOL SIDE AND CRYING HOLDING ZAYA'S DAD PICTURE"

Zaya: Ammi are you OK?? OH!! kaise bhul askti hun??? Whenever my angelic, sweet ammi touches her husband's and my abbu's picture then she starts crying like the river Thames in London.

Aliya: Chup! Where am I crying look I am so happy! (said Aliya smiling and looking at her daughter and analysing the features that she got from her father.)

Zaya: Ammi... are you done starring at me??? can i food now please???

Aliya: Yes my princess, you can have food, Lets go!

ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE CITY IN MUMBAI, ZAIN WAS GOING THROUGH A LOT! NOT EVERYBODY UNDERSTOOD HIS PAIN, THERE WAS ONLY ONE PERSON THAT WAS ALIYA BUT NOW SHE IS GONE ASWELL.

Surraya Begum: Zain, beta come and have breakfast!

Zain: Yes mom, I am coming!

SINCE THE DAY ALIYA LEFT THE HOUSE, ZAIN BECAME SOMEONE DIFFERENT THAT NO ONE WOULD HAVE EXPECTED ZAIN TO BE, HE STOPPED GONG TO PARTY ADN FOCUSED MORE INTO WORK.

Surraya Begum: Zain, mera lal what happened?? I have noticed some changes in you! You are not the Zain that I used to know...

Zain: Mom please, early morning with these kind of lectures, it isn't my thing, anyway I am not hungry anymore, I have a very important meeting with the head of Z.Z. company, so I better get going.

WITH THIS, ZAIN LEFT, HE HARDLY EVEN USED TO SMILE. BUT TPDAY HE SMILED FOR SOME UNKNOWN REASON I KNEW THAT HE WOULD MEET HIS ALIYA SOMEWHERE TODAY, BUT DIDNT KNOW WHAT WAS WAITING FOR HIM IN THE BUILDING THAT HE GOING TO ENTER IN FEW MINUTES.

Receptionist: Hello sir, may I help you?

Zain: Hello, I have a meeting with the Head of Z.Z. at 12.00.

Receptionist: Yes, let me check is Ma'am is in her office.

NO ONE WAS IN THE OFFICE FOR THE LITTLE, CUTE ZAYA, WHO WAS LOOKING AFTER HER MOM'S STUFF, THAT WAS HER DUTY FOR THE DAY, BUT ACCIDENTALLY SHE PRESSED ON THE "OPEN" BUTTON.

Receptionist: Sir, Ma'am is in her office, so the office on the 5th floor to the left.

Zain: Thank you!

SAYING THS ZAIN PROCEEDED TOWARDS ALIYA'S OFFICE, NOT KNOWIN THAT HE WOULD FIND HER THERE.

WHILE GOING TO THE OFFICE, HE HAD A VERY BIZARD FEELING, HE SOMEHOW FELT ATTRACTED TO THE OFFICE.

BEFORE GOING INSIDE, HE HEARD A LITTLE GIRL GIGGLING, HE WAS STARRING AT HER FACE AND THINKING "SHE LOOKS SO MUCH LIKE ALIYA".

WHEN FINALLY DECIDED TO GO IN HE CHECKED HIS UNIFORM AND HIS HAIR.

KNOCK,KNOCK,KNOCK!

Aliya: Yes come in!

AT THAT TIME ALIYA WAS FEEDING ZAYA, WHICH MADE HER LOOK SO MESSY.

Zaya: Ammi look, the man is so hot! (whispering into her mother's ear)

Aliya: Come one Zaya! (smiling at her and paying no attention her Zain)

Zain: Excuse me! (getting angry at the fact that he is waiting and she is busy chatting with her daughter)

ALIYA WAS SHOCKED! SHE DIDNT HEAR THAT VOICE FOR SUCH A LONG TIME, FOR OVER 5 YEARS NOW.

Aliya: Zaya, go to your play area please.

Zaya: OK ammi.

NOW IT WAS ZAIN'S TURN TO BE SHOCKED, HE DIDN'T REALISE IT TILL NOW THAT THE LADY ON WHOM HE WAS LOSING HIS TEMPER WAS HIS ALIYA.

Zain: MKB, You??? Here???

Aliya: KitKit, You??? Here???

Zain: I should ask you that question!

Aliya: No I should ask that question!

THEY BOTH REALISED THAT THEIR MEETING STARTED WITH TIER CATS AND DOGS FIGHT, WHICH WAS COMMON WHEN THEY STILL IVING TOGETHER.

BY THEN, THEY WERE BOTH CRYING, WITH LOTS LOVE AND CARE IN THEIR EYES.

Zain: MBK, I mean Aliya... I missed you!

Aliya: I missed you as well!

ZAIN AND ALIYA BROKE INTO A VERY POSSESSIVE HUG THAT ONLY COULD BE DONE BY THEM AND NO ONE ELSE.

SUDDENLY WITH A JOLT, ZAIN'S FOCUSED TURNED ON LITTLE ZAYA WHO WAS PLAYING IN THE PLAY ROOM. HE BECAME ANGRY, SAD, HUMILIATED AND CHEATED. HE THOUGHT THAT ALIYA MARRIED ANOTHER MAN AND WAS LEADING A HAPPY LIFE WITH HIM.

Zain: Aliya, who is she? (pointing towards Zaya)

Aliya: Oh! She is Zaya, my daughter!

Zain: Your daughter? (asked with a very suspicious look)

Aliya: No I mean, our daughter.

ALIYA 'S NEW REVELATION WAS MAKING ZAIN MORE CONFUSED, HOW WAS ZAYA HIS CHILD, IF NEVER EVER TOUCHED ALIYA. THEY NEVER SLEPT TOGETHER.

NO...WAIT, HE REMEMBERED THAT NIGHT AFTER THE HOLI PARTY, THEY WERE BOTH DRUNK AND ALL THAT THING HAPPENED, BUT HE DONT REGRET IT, HE IS REALLY HAPPY ABOUT IT. BUT STILL WANTED TO BE CONFIRM ABOUT IT.

Zain: What??? My child??? How?When?

Aliya: I know, you are confused, even I was confused when I got to know about it, after 2 hours I left your house, my doctor called me up and told me about it.

SHE SAID CRYING...

Zain: Aliya it's OK, waise toh, I am not angry or anything...actually I am really happy

Zaya: Ammi, are you done talking to Mr.Hot?

Aliya: Zaya??? Mr.Hot??? Who is this??

Zain: I think I know who is this Mr.Hot?...So princess, is that man over the Mr.Hot?

Zaya: No, silly I was talking about you! And by the way, you look so much like my abbu.

Zain: Your abbu, I guess your dad is as handsome as me.

ZAYA TOOK A LOOK AT ZAIN'S PICTURE THAT SHE ALWAYS CARRIES AROUND.

Zaya: No actually you look exactly the same.

ZAYA BEGUN CRYING SEEING HER DAD FOR THE 1ST TIME, MADE HER EMOTIONAL.

Zaya: You know abbu, ammi always said that you were just like a prince charming to her.

THIS REVELATION MDE ZAIN REALLY EMOTIONAL, WHICH SHOCKED

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Posted: 11 years ago
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you can't imagine how much i loved it...it was sooo amazing and cute...u wrote it beautifuulyyy... love u for this hugs and kisses from me <3 <3 <3
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thank you, so much i didn't know people would like,
i will write more if u guys want more but i don't know how to use india forum so plz guide me
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really cute and awesome concept.want to read more.continue.
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Awhhh this had never been done before reunion with a child involved it's sooo cute loved how they recognised their voices and the hug awhhh to die for amazing Uodate :)
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hi guys, back with the nest part of the i missed you!

Zain didn't believe what he was hearing form his little angel who grew up without the love of a father, but getting extra care and satisfaction from a mother, who didn't have anything except a child in her womb 5 years ago.

He didn't know that him saying "go Aliya, please go" would make her go away from his life forever.

After hearing what Zaya said, Zain broke into little sobs, that no one could hear but Aliya.

Zaya and Aliya were starring at him, with a shocked face.

Aliya because she never thought that the man that was always laughing and making the others laugh could suddenly become so emotional and Zaya because she never thought that prince charming cry.

Aliya: Zain are you OK?

Zaya: Abbu are you ok?

Zain suddenly broke a historic laughter more like a never ending one which stopped once he saw 2 straight bodies with their hands on their hips and looked cross, he couldn't help but smile.

He thought to himself: Both are alike, same hair, same nose, same smile, and same anger.

Aliya: OH Hello! What happened? What are starring at?

Zaya: Hain abbu what are you starring at?

Zain: Nothing...just looking at that beautiful lady over there!

Zain said pointing towards the door, staffs were standing there, talking on the phone.

Zain: Isn't she beautiful?

Zaya: Abbu we are here you know! And do you know...

Zaya went ahead and made herself comfortable on her dad's lap.

Zaya: And so you know how hard it was for ammi to be there without you? She would cry once in the morning, and once in the night, she would keep you picture next to her when she sleeps and would always get 1 extra plate by mistake and say "Zain come for dinner" something that I thought would never happen.

All that time, Zain was looking at Aliya, but then realised that she wasn't there from the beginning, she left the room when Zaya started to talk about her feeling to Zain.

Zain: Did you see you ammi?

Suddenly saying with tears in his eyes.

Zaya: No! I think she went to the parking area, where there is a park; she goes there when she wants to cry.

Zain: OK princess-wiping his tears away-I will go there now, could you go and stay with you pretty aunty over there for a minute please?

Zaya: sure abbu, by the way ammi is prettier then her.

Zain: WOW! Possessive huh?

Zaya: Yes! -Throwing her beautiful hair back.

IN THE PARKING AREA PARK:

Aliya has been crying for over 10 mins and now decided to get back to work before Zain reaches.

While walking, Aliya slipped on the wet grass, she thought that she would be bathed with mud and rainwater, but she was wrong; a pair of strong-arm and grabbed her at the right time.

Zain: MKB I mean Aliya are you OK?

Aliya: Yes I am, but how did you know that I am here?

Zain: I guess that's why Zaya was for, to tell me where you go, what you do...

Aliya: Did she tell you everything?

Zain: Yes everything, from A to Z.

Aliya looked away, embarrassed about what Zain must be thinking of her.

Zain: Aliya, I am taking you and Zaya back home in Barkat villa with me tomorrow at 10, so be ready.

With that Zain headed towards his car, but stopped when he heard Aliya shout his name:

Aliya: Zain!

Zain: What?

Aliya: I can't come with you tomorrow nor can Zaya!

Zain: Why? I found both of you and now I am taking you back final!

Aliya: Listen Zain, it's not possible, there was a reason why I decided to leave you and Barkat villa behind!

Zain now started to get annoyed and frustrated.

Zain: What? I thought that you left because asked you to...

Aliya: You asked me to go many time but did I budge...no then why would I listen to you, but at that time I had to do leave because...

Zain: Because what Aliya!

Aliya went back to the flashback where her mother in law had asked her to leave this house and Zain's life to give him back his freedom that he lost because of her:

Flashback:

Surraya: Aliya can't you give Zain's freedom back?

Aliya: Mami what are saying?

Surraya: I am saying the right thing since the day, you entered his life, and he has been doing everything for you but you being selfish, decided to keep him burning under your sunshine.

Aliya: Mami...

Surraya: I didn't ask you any question... if you want Zain to be happy, than leave but if you want him you burn and rot in Bhopal then stay put in his life.

Flashback ends.

Zain: Aliya are you there? Or did you land in planet Mars?

Aliya: Not funny Zain! I can't come back to Barkat villa

Zain: But why Aliya? I have been waiting for this day only, to find you and keep you in my arms for my whole night, something that I couldn't do when you were there with me.

Zain started to cry, he didn't know why, he just knew that he wanted Aliya back in his life somehow and that was going to be today, with his child that she brought up with much difficulties.

Aliya: Zain??? Why are you crying?

Zain: Aliya...I want you and Zaya back in my life, I cant live like a weirdo al by myself in that room, it feels as though something is trying to suffocate me.

Aliya: but...

Zain: And our room is still the same, the way that you always wanted it to be, mom tried to take all your designs off, but I said no and kept them.

Aliya: My answer is still the same.

Zain: But why? Aliya?

Now shaking her:

Aliya: Because Mami doesn't want me there, I left you because she asked me to, she said if I left you then you would be happy, you would find your freedom back!

Zain: What...

Aliya: Zain I have given you what you wanted the most, your freedom, now please leave, please I beg you!

Zain: No way, I am not leaving you that easily; you will come with me today.

Aliya: No Zain, please understand...

Zain: No Aliya I understood only one thing, that I need to take you back to Barkat villa so that mom can understand how badly I missed you.

Aliya: Really you missed me???- not believing what he was saying.

Zain: Yes, I did, I never wanted to show you my feeling because I never believed in them, but after you left, life became weird, I only concentrated on work and you, I would talk to your picture that always kept in my pockets.

Aliya: Really?

Zain: It was always you Aliya, from the beginning of the time that we met after 18 years of cold war between us.

Aliya couldn't help, but smile thinking about how they used to have their Tom and Jerry fights; their thoughts broke when Zaya came with watery eyes.

Zaya: Ammi, Abbu where were you?

Aliya: We were here beta. We thought that you were having a nice time with Jannat aunty. Anyway, we have a surprise for you!

Zaya: Really-wiping her tears away what is it?

Zain and Aliya: We are going to Barkat villa, where you will meet your dadu, dadi and nana, nani.

Zaya: Really??? YESSS!!!! THEN LET'S GO!!!

End for now!

Enjoy!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ahhh part 2 was even better than part 1 :) just loved it the way they just clicked after meeting afterso long! Loved the way zain caught aliya and when Aliyah was forced to tell zain the real reason why she left felt epic :) honestly what an Uodate truly great! Can't wait for the next oart :) do pm me when you Uodate :)
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thanks for your support and i will pm you when teh next update is ready!
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hi guys, i know it's quite late to update a new chapter but here i am with chapter 3, enjoy and comment! thanks.😃

Zaya: Abbu, is your house big?

Zain: No actually it's as small as a mouse house

Zaya: Really??? How will 3 of us fit than?

Aliya and Zain couldn't help but laugh at the innocent face of Zaya.

Aliya: Zaya beta, your abbu is only joking around with you, the house is really big, just like Jannat auntie's house.

Zaya: Really??? Abbu is there any children or am I the only one?

Zain: No there are 3 other children, you will meet them when you get there okay sweetie?

Zaya: Hey, I am not sweetie; I am a princess!

Aliya: Yes you are a princess, now try to get some sleep, come on.

Zaya: I need to be on your lap to sleep.

Aliya: Zain please stop the car for 2 minutes please, I need to get Zaya at the front.

Zain: Yes sure, wait, and go.

Aliya: Thanks, Zaya beta come at the front.

Zaya: OK, ammi, here I am.

Aliya: Now try to fall asleep.

As soon as Aliya said to fall asleep, Zaya dozed off, she couldn't hold her sleep anymore, she was fast asleep now, which made her mom sigh.

Zain: Aliya you really missed when you left?

Aliya: No I didn't miss at all, because I had you all along.

Zain looked at puzzled. He didn't understand what she meant.

Zain: What??? I wasn't there with you, than?

Aliya: So what Zaya was there!

Soon after Zaya dozed off, Aliya dozed off as well; she was too tired from all the crying and hugging.

Zain looked at the 2 angels that are really important in his life. He couldn't help but smile by looking at both of the ladies sleeping peacefully and how much they looked alike.

After a long journey, they finally reached Barkat villa.

Zain: Aliya, Aliya you reached.

Aliya: Oh, OK, I'll get Zaya, could you please get our luggage.

Zain: Yes sure, be careful when you get down the ground is wet.

Zaya: Ammiii,mmm

Aliya: Shhh, I am here, beta.

Aliya couldn't believe that she came back where she was emotionally thrown out of.

Zain: Lets go in.

Aliya: Zain I don't want to... I am scared.

Zain: It's OK! Lets go, nothing bad will happen.

Aliya: OK

Inside the villa:

Nafisah: Arub, Sana lets go, no more TV for today.

Arub: No mama I don't want to go now.

Sana: Me too mama.

Arub and Sana were Zaya's cousin sisters. They are Zain's older brother Fahad's first wife's daughters. Fahad had 2 wives, Shazia and Nafisah.

Once Zain entered the hall everyone starred at him, with full of happiness and excitement soon after him entered Aliya with Zaya in her arms.

Surraya couldn't believe what she was seeing, after about 5 years of happiness without Aliya in their life, everything started to settle down but now here she is back in there life again.

Surraya: Zain, what's this? Where did she come from? Is this a museum or something that when she wants to come she will and when she wants to go she will.

Zain: Mom enough of this non-sense! Aliya didn't go because she wanted to leave but because she was forced to leave, you emotionally blackmailed her about my happiness.

Aliya started to cry, but she didn't want Zain to see her crying, she hid her face under Zaya's arm.

Zain started to walk toward his wife and his child.

Zain: Mom, my happiness always lied in Aliya, now it lies on Aliya and Zaya and will always lie on them. They are my life and love.

Surraya: Zaya? Who is this?

Zain: My daughter!!!

This revelation made the whole Abdullah family shocked. They couldn't believe that Zaya was Zain and Aliya's daughter.

Usman: Zain I always wanted to see you happy, and now it looks as if you want to see me happy. I never thought you would ever want to have a child ever but now look like you are proud to be one.

Aliya beta how are you? And I bet you named her right?

Aliya: Yes mamu I named her, I didn't find any better one so...

Surraya: But how, I mean you two never even used to sleep together let alone stay.

Zain: Mom do I have to describe how a baby is made? Or do you me to give my GCSE biology book, where you can read it yourself.

Aliya: Leave it Zain.

Zaya: Ammi, stop talking!

Aliya: OK I will go back to sleep.

Zaya: No I want abbu.

Zain: WOW! Finally comes my princess, go to sleep now.

Surraya couldn't stand seeing Aliya and Zain together, and now a new member of the family, Zaya!

No way she would let live in peace, she would everything to make their life hell.

Zain: Aliya I am going upstairs, you come with the luggage, or actually you take Zaya, I will take the luggage.

Aliya: OK.

Aliya and Zaya went upstairs in their own room, where Aliya's past was, all the beautiful memories of her and Zain together.

Aliya: WOW... he was right everything is still the same.

Downstairs:

Usman: Zain I am proud of you, my son.

Zain: Thanks dad! By the way, did my two beautiful bhabis come together to hatch a plan with Mom to throw Aliya out, or just like that, like by co-incidence standing next to each other?

Nafisah: No Zain, it's nothing like that because from the beginning I was always happy that Aliya was in your life, and I am really happy that you got her back, that too with a precious daughter.

Zain: Thanks Miss Chocolate.

Nafisah: Your welcome, now hurry upstairs.

Zain ran upstairs and saw Aliya and Zaya on the bed, sleeping comfortably next to each other. Zaya sleeping on top of Aliya's chest, which made it look as if Aliya was hugging her daughter.

Zain: Amazing combination. Zaya and Aliya look so alike. Zaya might not look like me but still is as funny as I am. WOW... Zain beta you are so lucky to have two angels in your life man.

End of chapter.

Enjoy.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing story
Zaya back together with little princess
Continue soon

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