I LOVE U...(an AR FF) Imp Note on page 31

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Hey Guys...this is Fatema...and i would like to share my fiction on Armaan and Riddhima with all of you out there...
This is the first time i am posting my fic on IF...so i am excited to see the response...

Hope you guys like it 😊

I LOVE U...
By Fatema.



Character Sketch:

Armaan Malik: The Main Male Protagonist of the story,A handsome and muscular college going guy.With his greyish eyes he looks like a greek god and very girl just wishes to be with him.Originally from london he has shifted to New York to pursue his M.B.A. He is a smart, funny and kind hearted guy, and is in a search of love of his life, and can do anything for the friends.Friends with Atul Joshi and Anjali Sharma.

Riddhima Gupta: The Main Female protagonist of the story.She is a Smart,Independent andStrong college going girl.Originally from London but living in New York alone since she was 19 years old.She is now about to pursue her M.B.A.She has a deep past with her family and hence does not trust and does not become friendly with anyone,her life only revolves around her three best friends Rahul,Muskaan and Anjali

Rahul Mehra: Best friend of Riddhima and anjali.Doing his M.B.A.Likes muskaan a lot but haven't said anything to her.

Muskaan Chaddha: Best friend of riddhima and anjali.Doing M.B.A. like all others.she is a very bubbly girl who likes to live her life on her own terms.Likes Rahul a lot but haven't said anything to him.

Anjali Sharma: Best friend of Rahul,Muskaan and Riddhima.A kind hearted girl but at the same time very short tempered,every body hates to see her angry.Engaged to Atul Joshi and loves him very much.

Atul Joshi: Engaged to Anjali and loves her very much.He is in his family business and very successful.A very shy guy and loves his plants a lot

INTRO

In the suburbs of New York we see a beautiful white mansion with a huge garden and a giant pool.


Inside the house,we enter a gorgeous room and in this room a lady is sitting on the bed with a smile on her face writing a diary and also touching her 6th month pregnant belly every now and then.(Now lets see what she is writing in her diary...)

Dear baby,

Its been six months now that u r growing inside of me, aur ye six months mere aur aapke daddy ke sabse khushi ke din the...aapke papa toh ab aapke aane ka intejaar hi nahi karsakte...u r a blessing to us baby...jabse aapki aane ki khabar mujhe padi hai mai tabse roj aapse baatein kiya karti hu aur is diary me likha karti hu taaki jab aap bari ho jaaye tab ise padh sake...Aaj me aapko aapke mommy aur daddy ki kahaani batana chahti hu aur isme likh rahi hu taaki aapko pata chale ke aapke mommy aur daddy kese mile aur kese un dono me pyaar hua...


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INDEX

Chapter 1: Page 1
Chapter 2: Page 4
Chapter 3: Page 4
Chapter 4: Page 5
Chapter 5: Page 5
Chapter 6: Page 6
Chapter 7: Page 9
Chapter 8: Page 12
Chapter 9: Page 12
Chapter 10: Page 14
Chapter 11: Page 15
Chapter 12: Page 16
Chapter 13: Page 16
Chapter 14: Page 18
Chapter 15: Page 18
Chapter 16: Page 25
Chapter 17: Page 25
Chapter 18: Page 28
Chapter 19: Page 28

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Chapter 1

FLASHBACK

It's a nice morning in New York City and in an apartment at 28th street 7th avenue.


A girl is sleeping peacefully with her head under the sheets. Suddenly the alarm goes off and shewakes up lazily and after sometime dials a no. on her phone

Girl: Good Morning sleepy head!! Chal uth jaa

Girl2: (in a very sleepy tone) Kya yaar ridzy thodi der sone de abhi to sirf 6:30 hue hai

Ridzy: (smiling) Roz ki teri yahi kahaani hai...chal anji uth nahi toh college jaane me der ho jaayegi..

Anji: (getting up lazily) OK fine uth gayi now happy!!!!

Ridzy: Bohot, chal now ek ghante me ready rehna I'll come to pick u up ok...

Anji: haa thik hai meri maa bye!!!

Ridzy: (smiling)Bye.

(This was ridzy daily morning routine to wake anjy up early as she was very lazy in getting up early)

Scene shifts to College

Ridzy and Anjy were walking and chatting in the college campus while going to their class when suddenly...

Girl: (Shouting and Smiling Widely) Hey Guys!!!!

Then She runs to them and engulf them into a rib-crashing hug.

Anji: (Choking due to hug) hey muskaan, it's great to see u to par ab mujhe chod nahi to mera antim sanskaar karne ki situation aa jaayegi

Ridz: haa muski plzz leave!!

Muski: sorry sorry guys,excitement me dhyaan hi nahi raha,aur waise bhi I m seeing u guys after like 2 weeks.(smiling)

Ridzy: (smiling) how r u? aur how was ur family trip.

Muski: I m good aur family trip was amazing we enjoyed a lot par tum logo ko bohot miss kiya..

Anjy: Rehne de, Rehne de hum jaante hai tune kiss ko bohot miss kiya hoga (winking and hitting her shoulder)

Muski: (Trying hard not to blush) Tera matlab kya hai anjy, mai kyu wo gadhe rahul ko miss karne lagi,huh?

Ridzy: (trying not to smile) lekin muski, anjy ne rahul ka naam kab liya?

Anjy: yes muski maine rahul ka naam to liya hi nahi

Muski: Kya tum log bhi bekaar ki baate lekar bethe ho hame class ke liye late ho raha hai chalo.

Anjy: oh right haa chalo, bye the way nice save muski (smiling)

The trio went to their classes now

during the break in the canteen

Anjy: (Boiling with anger) Unbelievable, How dare he?

Ridzy: Chill yaar plzz, and have this glas of water(handling the glass)

Anjy: I don't believe this Anthony ki itni himmat that he calls u self centered and mean...I mean he knows nothing about u.

Ridzy: Relax anjy, mujhe in sab baton se koi fark nai padta

Anjy: agar jhuth bolna hai to kisi aur ko dhundh, mujhe pata hai tujhe kitna hurt hota hai maine tujhse kitni baar kaha hai ki duniya ke saamne itni hard mat ban ke tere asli personality ko jaan naa paaye aur...

Ridzy: (cutting her) tu jaanti hai me kyu esa karti hu, phir kyu bolti hai anyways I don't want to talk about this plzz...

Suddenly a guy sits on the table with them and

Guy: Kis bare me baat nahi karni tumhe?

Ridzy: Hey Rahul, wo kuch nai anjy mera dimaag kha rahi hai aur tum batao subhe se kaha the tum?

Rahul: kahi nai bas meri classes aaj jaldi shuru hone wali thi isliye me dikha nahi.

(Actually guys, rahul is 1 yr older than the three girls and hence wo senior hai but phir bhi best of friends hai)

Rahul: Waise guys, where is muskaan I thought she is coming back today (seeing around searching her)

Anjy: ohhh, tabhi me kahu ki ye janab yaha kya kar rahe hai, apni muskaan ko dhund rahe hai kyu (winking)

Rahul: oye anjy plzz paka mat, aur bol kaha hai wo (getting embarresed by getting caught)

Anjy: oye me bakwas...

Ridzy: (cutting her) ok ok guys peace, rahul muskaan yaha nai hai use professor se kuch kaam tha to wo aaj lunch baadme karegi.

Rahul: ohhh (making a sad face)

Ridzy: If u like her so much then why don't u tell her, waise bhi ye sabko pata hai ki she likes u too...

Rahul: I know yaar, par jab bhi usko kuch kehne jaata hu to muh se aawaj hi nikalti nahi hai...(hitting his face on the table)

Ridzy: (takin a deep sigh) I hope u say ur feelings to her aur wo bhi jald

Rahul: yeah I hope so too...waise have u listened that a new guy is joining MY semester tomorrow.

Anjy: really, semester ke bich that's strange.

Ridzy: thik hai na hoga koi reason, anjy chal hame library jaana hai hamara assignment complete karne ke liye

Anjy: haa ruk lunch karke chalet hai

(little did she knew that the guy is coming tomorrow is going to change her life)

At the same time on the other side of the town. At the New York's international airport.

Announcement: Flight no.AKA502 from London has landed

After some time a guy comes out wearing black jeans and a black full colored shirt and having the cutest smile ever. He is making every head turn to him, looking the hottest guy at the whole airport


The guy then saw someone and waved at him and gone towards him

Guy: (hugging the other person) Hey Champ!!!! How r u? It's so good to see u

Atul: Hey Armaan!!! It's so good to see u too buddy!!!(smiling widely)

Atul: Welcome to New York buddy

Armaan: Thanks champ, waise u looking good kya baat hai anjy ko impress karne ke liye workout karne laga hai kya tu (in a teasing tone)

Atul: tu sudhrega nahi aate hi khichai shuru kyu?

Armaan: Never mai sudherne waalo me se nahi hu...waise how's work and how's anjy?

Atul: Work is going great and anjy (suddenly his phone rings) ye le anjy kaa hi phone hai tu khud puch le

(Putting phone on loudspeaker)

Anjy: Hey atul , subhe se tumhara phone kyu nahi aaya ?

Atul: Hey honey, sorry baba subhe se tumse baat nahi ki par kya karu is armaan ko lene jo aana tha isliye time hi nahi mila

Anjy: kya armaan aaya hai...(getting excited) kaha hai woh tumhare saath hai kya?

Armaan: Hey beautiful kaisi ho?

Anjy: Hey ammy me bilkul thik hu, what a nice surprise ammy welcome to NY. It's been so long that I have talked to u

Armaan: yeah that's right so kab mill rahi ho?

Anjy: thik hai to aaj sham mai atul aur tum dinnerpe challenge thik hai.

Armaan: done

Suddenly he hears a voice calling anjy

Voice: Anjy chal na, phir library jaane me bohot der ho jaayegi...

Hearing this voice made armaan mesmerized, something stirred inside him.The voice madehim lost into his la-la land and was brought by anjy's voice

Anjy: acha armaan see u tonight abhi I m getting late bye!!

Armaan: uhh...ok anjy bye.

At night Armaan's House

After dinner with atul and anjy, armaan came home and was standing near the window and was thinking about the voice he heard while talking to anjy

Armaan: (talking to himself) Koun thi wo? Aaj tak kitni ladkiyo ki aawaj suni par is aawaj me kuch special hai. kaash me usse mill bhi pata jiski aawaj mujhe pagal bana rahi hai.(taking a deep sigh) Chal beta armaan so jaa kal college bhi jaana hai...

At Riddhima's apartment

Riddhima was reading a book near the window and suddenly she remembered rahul's words about the new guy coming tomorrow

Riddhima: (getting irritated) Hadh hoti hai yaar!!! Jabse rahul ne us naye admission ki baat ki hai tabse baar baar yahi dimaag me aa raha hai ke wo koun hoga...pehle esa kabhi nahi hua pata nahi mujhe kya ho raha hai, I think I should go to sleep now...

Saying this she went to sleep not knowing what is in store for her in future...

plzzz comment and tell me your view...rest of the parts will be updated soon 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey fatema congrats for your ff i really loved it looking forward to it continue soon & please try to update regularly.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congarts Babes :) And welcome to India Forums :)

🤗 👏 👏
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here goes a gift from me to you 😊 an banner for your FF ❤️

Hope you like it 😳



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Posted: 11 years ago
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mujhe pm toh nahi mila but yeh parts mujhe bahut pasand aaye they aur specially starting ,toh i loved it,its reminded our golden days..love u piyu...
ur punam di
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey fatty di...priyu is here..
I'm so happy to see this ff here :)
plz post new part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it it's superb... updt soon
can u plzzz pm for nxt prt
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awesome update TFS 4 d PM

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