RaGna:-❤️ A forever luv story {part3 @page5}

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Hey guyyyss, i knoe aaj ka epi was roking gud😉 nd now i can't wait to write atleast something if it's even crap!!!😆 so here i go... bt before i start,,,, i jst want to tell u last tym i wrote i hardly had many readers coz i write pathetic, bt agar by chance meri story pasand aaye toh pls atleast lyk kr dena😉 kyuki dat will give me courage nd den only i can start d second part😃 okey k bohot paka diya so here goes...😉

RAGNA:- ❤️A FOREVER LUV STORY❤️

Kalpi alone at rags house... she luks at rags photo and thinks to herself...
Kalpi:- aap itne hot ho sir... i really luv u fr all ur capabilities and talents... nd ur luv fr me is impeccable..😳
Rags steps in... nd luks at kalpi holding his photo and hears her talking to herself bout him😆
he feels so loved... nd ab toh usse confirm ho gaya he ki kalpi bhi usse jaan se bhi zyada pyaar karti he😳
Rags:- wat d hell r u doing?
Kalpi:- ohh sir!! (photo falls down) 😳
Ohhh am soo so sorry sir woh mein photo ko saaf kr rhi thi!! so sorry!! shittt😭😳
Rags:- r u mad? tum ek photo ke liye itna tensed kyu ho rhi ho... leave it one of the servants will do it... leave it..
Kalpi:- no sir i will clean it😕 am so so sorry!!
and there BOOM kalpi hurts herself from the glass of the photoframe
Kalpi:- aaah shit ab yeh bhi hona tha kya!!
Rags:- meine kaha tha na mat karo!! silly girl chot lag gai na (putting his handkerchief on her hand and shouting for a FIRST AID box)
Box kaha he??? how hv u been so slow... itne saare servants he lekin ek bhi kaam theek se nhi aata!! Rags is full of anger and tensed fr kalpi too...
Rags takes out a bandage and some antiseptic cream and applies both on her hand...
Rags:- now sit and relax the servant will clean dis and sleep fr sm tym!! bohot kaam kar liya!!
Kalpi:- sir lekin party?
Rags:- kalpi ur ridiculous!! tumhe party ki parri he bt nt about ur hand!! he na?
Kalpi sits on the couch bt her bleeds a lot... rags calls the doctor bt till the doctor cms rags thinks to himself (itna khoon kyu behe rha he? kahi nerve toh nhi kat gai😲)
Kalpi dheere faint hone lagti he!!! nd BOOM she faints... Rags is in his kitchen getting water fr her nd as he cms bak he sees...
Kalpi ka haath and the place where she is sitting is full of blood... her kurta too..😲
Rags stands der fr 2mins in shock!!
Rags:- Kalpi!!Kalpi!!!Kalpi!! yeh ho kya gaya tumhe?? doc cms and dey take her to the ambulance... bt as dey sit in the ambulance the doc says dat rags shuld cm in his own car coz kalpi is in a very serious condition!!!
Rags goes in his own car and when he reaches the hospital d ambulance does not cm!!! he waits and waits fr about 2 hrs bt r still nt there!! Rags thinks to himself( meine kalpi ko akele kese chor diya) she is kidnapped!!! nd in dis condition!! he starts searching fr kalpi every where...
In the ambulance...
Kalpi is on the bed in the ambulance and the doc cms and puts water on her face... kalpi gets up bt she is still in a lot pain bt the doc really gives her injections😊 and medicines and starts healing the cut on kalpi's wrist... nd yes she has cut her nerve!!😭 bt the doc treats her very well.. he performs a small operation in the ambulance and kalpi feels much better😊 THANK GOD!! kalpi gets up and luks at the doc by blinking her eyes... she tries to open dem bt she is in pain bt as she opens dem wide she is in shock and she jst says...
TUM!!!😲
GUYS PLS PLS LYK IF U LYK IT WARNA JST IGNORE IT!!! AND BOLO YAAR CONTINUE KARU YA NAHI!! ALL CRITICISM ACCEPTED... GIVE UR KIMTI VOTE😆


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Posted: 11 years ago
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it is really good!!! please continue sooon!! cant wait for the next update!!! :D
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Originally posted by: incredible96

it is really good!!! please continue sooon!! cant wait for the next update!!! :D

yesss!! for sure!!! i will continue ab tumne joh keh diya😉... thanx mani dear will continue soon by tomorrow if i get many lyks den fr u anything dear😆😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome! Love it! Continue soon!
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Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond

Awesome! Love it! Continue soon!

Will do!! ofcurse dear thnx fr ur kimti vote😆
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Originally posted by: rajvilover

Wow lovely update soon

Am on it!! and will surely update if i get my votes... anyways thnx😆😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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jaldi jaldi jaldi continue karo, kaun tha ambulance me? doc kaun tha? wo hospital ku nai gaye? Haww... jaldi update karo, and pm me plz
and I like that BOOM 😉 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice😊
Ugdate soon plzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Luved it...! Waiting to know who's this saviour..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it to the core. continue soon

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