That moment when my heart stopped.

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'Baawli ladki' I thought to myself as I tended to my baapusa. What did she think of herself ? Change myself just for some stupid girl ? Love her ? Love ? 'Yeh mujhe jaanti bhi hai kya ?' I thought,irritated beyond anything.

'Ek haath pe mere Kaakisa jo mere jaan ke piche padi hai aur dusre haath pe yeh ladki, ab thodi hi dinon main, main baawla ho jaunga' , I grunted to myself.

And suddenly I saw her through the window of my room. There she was,standing just in that pose. I ignored her. 'Main tho uski taraf dekhunga bhi nahin,yeh yahi chahthi hai ' I decided grimly.

I looked at my baapusa,just willing him to get up,to hear his voice again ,to shout at him for leaving me in a lurch like that and glared at him in frustration.

And then I heard her chanting 'Om nama shivaya' and I now came to a conclusion that she was bent on annoying me for sure. I tried to tune her out.

I started drifting... Suddenly,I heard Kakusa's voice telling me something which I had been yearning to hear all along! Baapusa was conscious!!

I felt my knees buckle out of shock,tears welling in my eyes. 'Baapusa,aap waapas aa gaye hain' My heart was swelling with joy.

He was talking to me,I hoped this wasn't a dream.' Par Ranawat woh ladki ko dekhna chahtha hai ? Par kyun ?' I thought incredulously.

And I then saw her. Standing right there. Drenched from head to toe. I froze.

I ran to her !! 'Yeh ladki !!! '


And there she was,shivering like a winter stalk ,as white as chalk and my heart nearly stopped. 'Kya yeh theek hai ?!! '

I went to her,took her in my arms. I shouted at her and she smiled at me. Smiled ?' Has rahi hai ye ?! '

She was happy that I had come. Not angry that I hadn't come sooner.

I looked at her and could not take my eyes off her.

'Kaisi aurat hai ye ? Aur mujhe kyun dard ho raha hai ise ye haalat main dekhne se ?' '

'Kya woh mujhe badal rahi hai,mere jaane bina ? '

'Mujhe,Rudra Pratap Ranawat ko ? '
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Jaz1990 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haven't watched yet, but seems like a amazing moment!
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SUPERRR...that whole last scene was Haiii...Rudra & Paro in the RAIN and he holds her in his arms...
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awesome post . this scene was worthy of my time and patience. Loved it. Moment of the day.
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Originally posted by: Jaz1990

Haven't watched yet, but seems like a amazing moment!

It was a beautiful scene! Must watch
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It certainly was❤️
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Originally posted by: Absoluv

SUPERRR...that whole last scene was Haiii...Rudra & Paro in the RAIN and he holds her in his arms...

It was just the purest and the most beautiful moment ever !! Such was the intensity of her love that he just had to come out ❤️
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Originally posted by: DexterRocks

awesome post . this scene was worthy of my time and patience. Loved it. Moment of the day.

Thank you😊 Agree,it was a wonderful and first of its kind scene

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