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Posted: 12 years ago
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As Arnav said that 'this far from over Khushi Kumari Gupta' I say to you this is far from over.. so where is the second part and the third was there any wonder I was actually avoiding reading this OS as I know your sadist qualities and I was expecting something like this from you..here I am gasping for more that all I have read feels just a little teaser or a starter so where is the rest??????

What can I say that was just something else.. girl you know how to weave a sensual web and all get caught in it unaware..that is your trick. So beautifully written that I could feel every emotion and move made by Arnav Singh Raizada towards Khushi and knowing him he is not going to just let her go just like, that too to his brother..that will be a sheer torture and he is not into self destruction...after realising his feeling and practically making it out with her and Khushi being with him every step of the way..she just let him know that she is his for the taking.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: gifttag

As Arnav said that 'this far from over Khushi Kumari Gupta' I say to you this is far from over.. so where is the second part and the third was there any wonder I was actually avoiding reading this OS as I know your sadist qualities and I was expecting something like this from you..here I am gasping for more that all I have read feels just a little teaser or a starter so where is the rest??????

What can I say that was just something else.. girl you know how to weave a sensual web and all get caught in it unaware..that is your trick. So beautifully written that I could feel every emotion and move made by Arnav Singh Raizada towards Khushi and knowing him he is not going to just let her go just like, that too to his brother..that will be a sheer torture and he is not into self destruction...after realising his feeling and practically making it out with her and Khushi being with him every step of the way..she just let him know that she is his for the taking.


Well well well... Hello there hun, I knew you couldn't resist Arshi Magic... 😉😛

What wunderbar feedback woman, you making me blush with all this wonderful, wonderful praise. Yep I am evil and to be totally honest with you I did this deliberately just for YOU ! I know how caught up with Arnav 😉 you get, and so decided to write a slightly different take on this much beloved scene.

Khushi was always receptive to ASR's/Arnav's advances, it was always his phone, his meddling family or his GHUSSA that literally put a spanner in their romance. That is why I decided to write him the way I did. As you have probably guessed I love NK. I mean I totally adore him.

Thank you again for such in depth feedback 😃
Edited by mizzle_pizz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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As Arnav broke his engagement ...she can also...I am not worried
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
feel really bad for arshi in the end
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mizzle_pizz



Well well well... Hello there hun, I knew you couldn't resist Arshi Magic...😉😛

What wunderbar feedback woman, you making me blush with all this wonderful, wonderful praise. Yep I am evil and to be totally honest with you I did this deliberately just for YOU ! I know how caught up with Arnav😉you get, and so decided to write a slightly different take on this much beloved scene.

Khushi was always receptive to ASR's/Arnav's advances, it was always his phone, his meddling family or his GHUSSA that literally put a spanner in their romance. That is why I decided to write him the way I did. As you have probably guessed I love NK. I mean I totally adore him.

Thank you again for such in depth feedback😃


What do you mean you love NK??? What about my Arnav?? You can't always make him suffer. You might love NK but Khushi loves Arnav.. HAMESHA ( always). So no way you are getting then hitched together. Khushi is always Arnav's and no one else's. he might treat her abdominally but it still doest negate the fact that Arnav is not letting her get away from his clutches by hook or by crook. NK might love Khushi too but what is she going to do with his puppy love she needs a real man and you can't get more real than Arnav. I hope I convinced you.

Edited by gifttag - 12 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh Girl you are breaking my heart today! This is so though.. but really well written! Khudos to you! Take care, Chanya.
Edited by Chanyaforever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love your take..
Its so beautifully described!

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