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Mari

@mizzle_pizz

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Posted: 12 years ago

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SirenMitra

@SirenMitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG!!!!! this is more painful than the actual scene...

Why man, why??????????

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

Nice twist to the scene. Really heart breaking but very impactful.

Loved your take for the passionate moments.

Edited by SilentShadow - 12 years ago

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sushmita ghosh

@shalunsarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awww poor arnav..i really found this one emotional wanna cry

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Farah

@LuvArnavKhushi

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

aw darnit! Now I know what people mean by a sad ending! Are you telling me there's no second part to this? This is actually it? They're never going to end up together? *sigh* I know, I know. It's not always a happy ending in real life. But gurl, you better give at least one happy ending from your stories and it better be Losing You...though now that I think of it...is one or the other going to die? Again? I hope it's losing the mother... ok, wrong comment on the wrong thread. In all honesty, it was a great OS and although it's not an ideal ending, you wrote it exceptionally well! 😃

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Mari

@mizzle_pizz

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvArnavKhushi
aw darnit! Now I know what people mean by a sad ending! Are you telling me there's no second part to this? This is actually it? They're never going to end up together? *sigh* I know, I know. It's not always a happy ending in real life. But gurl, you better give at least one happy ending from your stories and it better be Losing You...though now that I think of it...is one or the other going to die? Again? I hope it's losing the mother... ok, wrong comment on the wrong thread. In all honesty, it was a great OS and although it's not an ideal ending, you wrote it exceptionally well! 😃

It's what Khaled Hosseini would have called "Afghan Laff," the son of an Afghan took part in a high school biology class and he's suddenly VIOLA a doctor... Que *DariAccent LOL I say this because secretly I am being coy and I wanna be cajoled into writing a sequel. But YOU! You actually accepted this OS, just like that! haha (I am kidding, kinda...)

Once again you made me laugh, so thank you yaar!

Nah here it is... straight from the source herself... Niggs LY WILL have a happy ending...

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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

I agree with sirenmitra...this was as painful as the scene in the show...devastating beautiful...but painful nevertheless...I could actually feel his desperation and this is one scene where I had always hoped ASR was running the show instead of Arnav ...so it was really sad to see him like this...and Khushi??? I wished I could read her mind?? What was she thinking trapped against that pillar and what was she thinking accepting that proposal??

So NK is chofu in this?? Hmmm

Hopefully there would be more to this...keeping my fingers crossed for a sequel 😊

P.S. I have been meaning to catch up on your other stories as well but didn't want to rush through them without leaving a comment so would read them ASAP and leave my thoughts there...till then how about we get the next part for this?😉

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

That's even worse right

He kissed her and even then

Man that made things even worse

Kiss and still nothing happened

His brother got her

But her heart broke even more

What did you do Arnie what

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

No... no way you are leaving him suffer like this... get the girl back to him asap...
she loves him..!! then why did she accepted nk's proposal..??
this was really really sad... and i just, just can't see sad Arnav... it break my heart yaar... :(
sequel to this pleeaasse mari pleeaasse...
happy one..!! :D
thanks.