| Endings - A Kria & Ranveer OneShot | D3 & TBP Crossover - Page 2

Shazzy... loved your crazy imagination! 👏⭐️

Originally posted by: spicySugar..

Ah shucks! I wanted to kill you but dammit! You didn't give me a chance to! My Man is totes perfect here!

The thing that I loved the most here is the length of this. You know I've told you time and time again that you are an author of phrases, not paragraphs. This is such a wonderful show of your forte. Short and sufficient. I am astounded by the way you gave SO much insight of two characters in only some dialogues and a few descriptive lines. Your imagination just shone brightly more than anything else. While reading it, I was Kria who was flying and I was Ranveer who was falling. And I was Kria who was taken aback and I was Ranveer who chuckled because he knew it wasn't meant to be but he tried anyway. Just some words and I could picture an eternity with the two of them. That is saying a lot! Not everyone can do what you just did with this.

VP, I am proud of you 👏

Mera money is going because my WiFi is not working & mera data card is switched but I have to reply to this.

Hawww!!!! I wanna bawl ab 😭 Just for the second sentence of your comment I wanna bawl 😭 You know...I was so bloody nervous about your Man. Because he essentially wasn't the guy who was my favourite TBP male, & I wanted to make damn sure I did no injustice to him because of being lax. I HAVE written Ranveer before...but it was mostly the friend & totally different from this, and you called him perfect and aahhh <3 Maisy!!!! :* :* :*

Yeah...you have said that...and you know what??? That is one thing I keep in mind. i had actually started this differently. Longer conversations, describing their first meet, more dialogues and a longer oneshot in whole. But I felt totally uncomfortable. Not the 'gosh this makes no sense that I do before posting any OS...but a 'this is so wrong & heavy' wala feeling. And then I remembered this very fact that you say...erased the whole thing & rewrote this. The basic idea was the same, but the style totally different.

And that was the general idea. To give as little as possible, especially as far as Kria was concerned, in a way that the readers could still imagine & get the crux. Took loads of correcting & stuf...but wow! An eternity with these two? Simply WOW yaar MP! <3

Thank you so so so much for this amazing wala comment :* I am so glad I made you proud kyunki the opposite happens so mamy times 😳

I'll reply soon to everyone guys! As soon ay WiFi comes. Thank you SO SO much for this support <3

Wifey...waiting for yours ;)

Originally posted by: SuckerPunch.

OMG SHAZZZYYY!! 🤗 This was Awesome! *_*

Awww...thanks Upi :* :*

Originally posted by: --Akshu--

Shazzy it was different,firstly Kria and RV I love the pairing <3
Loved the way it started he is struggling with his music!!

The whole rv-kria convo was beAutiful esp when he said the song was her he needed a ending to it and that was written so beautifully !!!

That song touched many hearts but she was gone ahhh it wAs very different and I loved it <3

Pairing credit goes to Sarah 😳 She's the one who came up with it!

Yay...I am glad you liked that part! <3 Was afraid it might sound cheesy...LOL. Thank you Akshu :*