| Endings - A Kria & Ranveer OneShot | D3 & TBP Crossover

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Okay...so this is based on Kria and Ranveer Shergill from The Buddy Project. On my dearest Wifey AKA HPManiac's request! This really isn't that good SarSar, but I hope you enjoy it a little anyways

Also to my dearest Mais...don't kill me please. I have no clue what I did to your man
"Actually...it sucks."

"Excuse me? All those hotshot people in front of whom you made me sing couldn't stop applauding!"
"I'll be damned if those buffoons know a thing about music. Ranveer...the song is so fake, every one of my five senses was being skewered. Literally."

"Mr Shergill...this happens to be the most important song of your career. A lot of important people have been invited...if you don't touch them, you can get ready to stay stuck in the same position that you are."
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She looked at him curiously as he sat beside her in the same position that he had for the last 10 minutes. Head in his hands, and despair colouring his face. Not a common facet of the musical prodigy.
"So...he didn't like it?"
"Practically threw it in the dustbin."
"And then...?"
"I wrote a new one. My masterpiece. The one which will make me a legend. Manav said he couldn't feel the previous one...so I made sure my soul bled into it this time."
Because that's how he was. Driven and never one to back down from a challenge.
"Then what's the problem?"
"The ending...I don't have one."
"What's it about?"
He lifted his eyes to her expectant eyes and spoke.
"You."
She gave a start and her doe eyes widened in surprise. He chuckled at the sight.
"The way you leapt across the dewy grass the morning I first saw you. The way I had to check if your feet really touched the ground. The way your eye shone brighter than the rays of the sun falling on you. The way you waltzed into my life like it was meant to be."
She stared wordlessly and shell shocked at him.
"And that is why...it needs to be perfect. The ending. There has to be one."
He moved his face to the other side and missed seeing the single tear roll down her cheeks.
************
It did make him a legend. Just like he had foreseen.
He turned away from the enthralled crown and the deafening applause to reread the white chit of paper for the hundredth time. The only thing left behind.
With all but twelve words on it.
"Every beginning has an end...it's just not always the perfect one..."
*************
Comments???😊
Confused about Kria? Well...she left. Why, How, Where...well, she's the only one who knows.
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HPmaniac thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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O_O
:D

You actually wrote on RV-Kria!!

:* :*

RES!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG SHAZZZYYY!! 🤗 This was Awesome! *_*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shazzy it was different,firstly Kria and RV I love the pairing <3
Loved the way it started he is struggling with his music!!

The whole rv-kria convo was beAutiful esp when he said the song was her he needed a ending to it and that was written so beautifully !!!

That song touched many hearts but she was gone ahhh it wAs very different and I loved it <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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reswa😛
unres

woww😲

this was mindblowinggg⭐️⭐️

Brilliant write-up👍🏼

loved it to d coreee❤️

and love this pairing too RV and kriya


Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so short bt insanely mesmerizing...
shaz u r incredible...pehle to pairing lajawab...Ranveer nd kriya...pehli baar ye pair pe padha nd m in love with it...
girl..do write more...u can make a whole new fandom
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is sooo beautiful...!! And I love it's length.. If it was longer, I don't think that will make it any more perfect than it allready is..😊
The RV-Kria convo was sooo mesmerizing..!! typical RV way of talking and a typical silent Kria reaction...
the ending was amazing too..!! endings can't always be perfect..!! wow..!! I mean, it's soo true..!!
This is a really sweet, touching and flawless piece of work..!! Nice job Shazzyy..!!👏

Edited by anki_22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RESERVED.
Please remind me to unres.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ah shucks! I wanted to kill you but dammit! You didn't give me a chance to! My Man is totes perfect here!

The thing that I loved the most here is the length of this. You know I've told you time and time again that you are an author of phrases, not paragraphs. This is such a wonderful show of your forte. Short and sufficient. I am astounded by the way you gave SO much insight of two characters in only some dialogues and a few descriptive lines. Your imagination just shone brightly more than anything else. While reading it, I was Kria who was flying and I was Ranveer who was falling. And I was Kria who was taken aback and I was Ranveer who chuckled because he knew it wasn't meant to be but he tried anyway. Just some words and I could picture an eternity with the two of them. That is saying a lot! Not everyone can do what you just did with this.

VP, I am proud of you 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is so awsum..loved it

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