SanDhir OS: Realisation Matters. *PM's Later*

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hello , first of all im a bit upset right now I don't know why but this is my testing OS! I mean , the result of this OS will determine whether I should continue writing or not. I know it sounds weird from a below average writer like me but this is the truth. I wanna see the response this OS gets and then only I'll decide on whether I should continue or not. All my fanfics will be on Hiatus if I do stop. Anyways , here's a piece of writing. Just do the needful if you feel like it!😭


The snow fell on ground with a slight noise. 'Will it be appropriate to wake her up' he thought. This wasn't the only reason he wanted to wake her up. He needed to talk to her. Now.

"Sanyukta , get up!" he whispered in her ear. She stirred in her sleep. She would sleep like a typical Ninja turtle. He chuckled at her recent pose where her right leg was over his legs , locking them and her tiny head was on his chest , her right hand wrapped around him.

He could hear and feel her breathe. How he loved it. Randhir Singh Shekhawat gazed at his wife with all the love present in the world. Her hair fell over his shoulder and she stirred again. "Maybe she is having a bad dream!" he thought. As he was about to wrap his arms around her , he heard her mumbling in her sleep.

"Please don't leave me please! I need you!" she mumbled. It broke his heart yet again. It had been a year since they got married but he knew that she was still in love with her ex-boyfriend , Parth. But he never complained about it. He decided to be patient with her. He knew she never loved him nor considered him as a friend but he loved her a lot. He fell in love at the very first sight when he saw her in her house.

The sun rose , the rays fell on her beautiful visage making it glow even more. It took him a lot strength to control his desire to kiss her forehead because even though they were husband and wife in-front of the world , they were mere strangers in the house. He would try to talk to her but she wouldn't give in at all. It was as if , she hated him.

But he decided that today was his last test.

"Today too I won't come in-front of you Sanyukta! I won't be with you!" he sighed sadly and reluctantly moved out of the bed. He quickly took a shower and went downstairs for breakfast.

Hari-Prakash , the age old servant of the Shekhawat's was astonished to see his 'chotte sahab' up so early , ready to leave for office. It was just 6:00 am.

"Chotte sahab aapko aur kuch chaiye?" he asked. Randhir nodded. He quickly finished his breakfast and rose. He was leaving when he suddenly he had an urge to look upwards towardsTheir room. He smiled sadly. "I guess in this life , you are only my companion not my mate but I promise you Sanyukta , I will fullfill every duty as a husband and will never let you down!" he promised to himself just like everyday. It had become a ritual for him to promise such sweet words to her everyday. He reluctantly went to office.

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Sanyukta woke up with a jolt. She got up and sat on the bed. She noticed that she was sweating even though the AC was on. She looked here and there but couldn't find Randhir. "it has been a week since I have seen him properly! Is he mad at me?" she thought.

She quickly took her shower and went down for breakfast. "Hari Prakash have you seen Randhir?" she asked. Hari Prakash told her his morning encounter with his chotte saheb. Sanyukta was now worried. I wonder what happened to him? Why is he behaving so strangely all of a sudden? She thought. It was disturbing her. Every night she would wake up around 2:00 am just to look at his sleeping form. He never came in front of her and in sleep too , he maintained a safe distance from her. Why does he care for me so much?' she thought.

She knew that she had to talk to him but she couldn't get out of the house due to the snow. She sat on the sofa and remembered every encounter she had with him. She remembered their marriage night , how he handled the situation with ease without making her uncomfortable.

*Flashback*

Sanyukta heard the door open and saw him coming up to her. She was enraged. Even though he was her husband now she would never ever give him the right to touch her. She was adamant about it. She saw him sitting near her. She felt him touch her hand and that was enough to make her lash out on him. But to her surprise , he squeezed it softly and looked at her. "Don't worry , I won't force myself onto you! I know you don't trust me but don't worry , I will never ever cross my limit , until you let me do it!" he smiled and went to his side of the bed and sat down.

None of them slept peacefully that night. Sanyukta couldn't sleep because she was still in love with Parth and Randhir couldn't sleep because he came to know about her previous affair from her best friend Kaustuki.

*Flashback Ends*

She tucked her hair behind her ear and went up to the kitchen to eat something. Boredom engulfed her since her father would never let her work and since she used to fight with her father , she was married off to one the famous business tycoons of India , Mr. Randhir Singh Shekhawat.

Her eyes welled up.

Why is it getting so awkward between us Randhir? Why are you behaving like this? Why do you care so much when all I did was hurt you emotionally?' she cried. She had to do something. She couldn't let him slip away from her hands. She needed him. Everytime he would help her , her heart would flutter. She would have Goosebumps all over her body whenever he would accidentally touch her. She remembered how he saved her family from getting embarrassed in front of the whole society and very same day , when he made her him , forever.

*Flashback*

"sanyu ,Sanyu?" her father yelled. He opened the door with a bang and pulled her out of her room.

"Aaj tumhari wajase aaj mujhe itna sharminda hona par raha hai!" he yelled. They were standing in the hall where everyone from his office and their neighborhood were present.

"Papa I really love Parth! I cannot think of anybody else as my husband other than him!" she sobbed and when suddenly her dad slapped her.

"You should be ashamed of yourself. Agarwal khandan ki larki aur aisi baat chi chi..." She heard an elderly woman say.

"Arre kon karega aisi manhoos larki se shaadi..." Another woman taunted. One by one everybody present in the room hurled insults at her and her family.

"Now who will marry my daughter?" her mother cried.

"I'll marry her aunty!" they heard a voice full of authority and dignity.

"Randhir beta?" her dad cried.

"Uncle , my dad owes a lot to you. If you hadn't help him with his finances , he would have committed suicide! So as his son , its my duty to help you out when your in trouble!" he assured him.

He held Sanyukta's hand gently and motioned towards the crowd. "I will marry her! And no one will point a finger towards this family. No one!" he ordered. Sanyukta looked up at the man.

"Wow , mauke ka kitna acha faida utha raha hai yeh admi!" she was disgusted by him.

*Flashback Ends*

Sanyukta wiped away her tears and went upstairs. No , I will never leave you Randhir nor will I let you be away from me!' she mentally noted down and went to her room.

She opened the cupboard and searched for the saari he had gifted her on her birthday. She looked at the saari and a fresh set of tears fell on her cheeks. "How could I be so harsh on you that day when you only came upto me to give me this!" she cried out loud. She had been hell rude to him. She told him not to show her his face. And from that day onwards , she never got to see him properly. She would look for him in the whole house and when she gets tired , she lies down on the bed and tries to sleep. After a few hours, she would feel him lying down on the bed.

She would gently turn to his side , acting as if she is asleep and then slowly open her eyes only to look at his baby like face. I didn't know that he looks so cute when he sleeps!' she thought and smiled. This continued for days and today too , she tried to pull him closer but he went away.

She quickly changed into the saari and went to his office. Randhir Singh Shekhawat , aaj tum mujhse bach nahi sakte!' she smiled as she headed for his office.

"Excuse me , can I meet Mr. Randhir Singh Shekhawat?" she asked the receptionist. "No ma'am , he is busy in a meeting and will not be free before 3 pm!" she said. Sanyukta looked at her watch. It was just 1 pm.

She waited for an hour but she was too restless. All sorts of bad ideas were coming up to her mind. What if he asks for a divorce? What if...what if he doesn't forgive me? What if his hot assistant snatches him away from me? No no , I cannot survive without him! No..!" she thought and ran upstairs to the board room , leaving the receptionist shocked.


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"As you all can see this model is much more profitable than..." Randhir couldn't finish as he saw his beautiful , feisty wife standing at the other corner of the table , panting and desperate for air. He then noticed that she was wearing the saari he had gifted her. An unknown ray of hope engulfed his heart but he still did not want to promote the feeling. He saw all his collegues gaping at her. His blood was boiling with jealousy. He cleared his throat.

"Aahem...Sanyukta , what are you doing here?" he asked her. Sanyukta sensed his jealousy and chuckled. "Woh actually...umm..." she didn't know what to say. Randhir's assistant sensed the tension between them and smiled. "I think we should take an hour's break!" she concluded and instantly everyone got up from their seats , smiled at Randhir and went out of the room leaving them all alone. The assistant , closed the door behind her and made sure that no one would enter the cabin and disturb her boss.

Sanyukta looked at her handsome and yet confused husband. She slowly walked up to him. Randhir was in a trance. "You look beautiful!" the words came out of his mouth without him realizing it.

Sanyukta blushed.

Randhir realized what he said and mentally scolded himself. "Who umm...tum yaha kar kya rahi ho? You should be at home! Kisi bhi waqt snow fall ho sakti hai!" he said but Sanyukta inched closer to him.

"I don't care Randhir!" she breathed.

"Sanyukta tum..." but he stopped when he felt her finger on his lips. "Sshh...aaj tum sunoge aur main baat karungi!" she smiled at him. Wow' he thought. He never saw her smiling at him.

Randhir was shocked. Actually , he was mesmerized , first by her beauty and second by her boldness. Sanyukta held his hand. He looked up at her with all his hope. Sanyukta smiled sadly. He looked like a little baby , vulnerable and innocent.

"I know I haven't been the best wife here , I know I haven't been the best companion here and I know I have hurt you beyond repair but the truth is that..." She cupped his face.

"The truth is I have always found you beside me whenever I am in trouble. You have always stood up in front of me as a shield and that day , that day you saved the dignity of my family! Thank You!" she started crying. Randhir touched her hand.

"Randhir Singh Shekhawat , what have you done to me? I thought I would never be able to love anybody else , especially you but you stole my heart with your kindness and selflessness! How could you be so caring towards me when all I did was hurt you!" she cried.

Randhir was dumbstruck. Did she just say Stole my heart'? Did he hear the right thing? He thought. Sanyukta saw his confused expression. She laughed. "Oh hello , Mr. husband , I am talking to you!" she smiled at him. "Huh? Haan bolo..." he whispered.

"I just wanted to say that..." she stopped and looked into his eyes. "That?" he asked. "That...That I love you!" she shied away and was about to go when he pulled her towards him. She crashed on his chest , his cologne driving her crazy. Randhir bent down and kissed away her tears. She giggled and blushed. "I love you too Sanyukta! I have been waiting for this day! I thought that you would never love me , especially after our fight on your birthday!" he had tears in his eyes.

Sanyukta pushed him lightly. "So? Fight hui isiliye you will ignore me like this? Phirse aisa kiya na then I will never talk to you!" she pouted like a kid. Randhir chuckled. Sanyukta looked at him. "Waise , why didn't you tell me about your feelings before?" she asked.

"Because I thought that you would think ill of me! That , you might even leave me if I say that!" he frowned. "Oh really and you think that I would have left you so..." before she could finish as she felt his lips on hers , for the first time. It felt like heaven. She never felt like this when she used to kiss Parth. It's a different feeling. His hard lips felt perfect on her soft ones.

She kissed him with all her might. They poured their passion into that one kiss , both fighting for dominance. Randhir snaked his hand around her waist making her shiver and she encircled her hands around his neck. They kissed like their was no end to it. He left her lips , letting her breathe and attacked her swan like neck. "Ran..ndhir..." she moaned. Her moans were turning him on even more. He gave her a love bite and bit her earlobe and sucked it. Sanyukta was moaning constantly , all this was new to her as well. He went back to her lips and his hand went up to her blouse.


Sanyukta smiled in between the kiss. She moved away and looked at a disheveled Randhir. "Not so soon Mr. Shekhawat , you have to wait! Till night! Come back home early..." she winked and was about to leave when he pulled her towards him and her back hit his chest.


"Not so soon Mrs. Shekhawat , before you leave , I have something to show you! Come!" he kissed her shoulders , took her hands in his and went outside the board room not taking any notice of the way people were gaping at them. They entered a cabin which was being renovated.

"Yeh kya hai?" she smiled. He looked at her. "This is your cabin Sanyukta!" he smiled. Sanyukta looked at him , wide eyed. "What? Par...par papa kabhi..." she trembled. "Sanyukta , you're my wife now and I want you to work here , not only because you are qualified and capable enough but also because I want to spend as much as time possible with you!" he winked. She laughed and cried at the same time. "I love you!" she whispered.

"I love you too Sanyukta! You can't imagine how happy I am today! I love you!" he hugged her tightly and she too wasn't willing to leave him.


She kissed his cheeks. "Thank you Randhir and...I really love you!" she laughed and kissed his forehead. Their lives were about to change forever. Now they were , together , forever.



So this is it...will send the Pm's later by tomorrow maybe! Plz do leave a comment!

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yatup thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such a simple and sweet writing dear.
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That was such a sweet and an. extra ordinary OneShot.

SanDhir moments. ā¤ļø They were the best in whole Os.

That"s very sweet of. Randhir that he made an another room for sanyukta.

Don't stop your writtings dear.

Keep writting and I'll keep commenting
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Just one word to describe

AWESOMEEE!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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See I'm not a good "commenter"

But this is far too good and cute !! I loved this OS!!

Please don't stop writing!! Pretty, please?!

Love,
Kriti ā¤ļø
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kitni kamini hai re tu... Not gonna write futher????
RES

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Posted: 11 years ago
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perfectly written... i was like 😃 all smiles when i was reading it...!
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I want you to continue it..
This was so Frikking cute
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow

I just read it

This was brilliant

Superb work

Totally loved it

Awesome job

Sandhir were so perfectly portrayed

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! Im surprised I never read this before :O
So beautifully written.
What an intriguing plot O_O
Kya creativity hai xP
Really loved it..Thank God Sanyukta realized the sweetness and understanding of her dear husband, Randhir.
Their kiss aah <3
The flashbacks were so touching :*
Please keep writing :)
Love,
Tanya

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