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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

wow...dis waz a beautiful os...
kriyas pov waz written very well...
sad ending buh very suprbly written...
thnk u for pm...

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Shaju yaar...
Itte dino baad likha n itna aadha ahura sa...
Ek fll to KR os deti..
Not only Kria OS :'(
achha tha.. Bt agar kR ka hota with my KR together till d end.. Tab shayad bahut acha achha hota..

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Hey sad one!!!!!!

Never want to see them separate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭 😭 😭

Well written!!!!!!!!

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DocSNair

@Mukthaa

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Great work yr...
U described everything beautifully...
I coud completely relate to the stkry.. Was so realistic...
Felt like m seeing it all infront of my eyes..
U r a talented writer...
Waiting for more stories from u

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Sneha

@Arsha_Arshi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

This was beautiful.

d way u potrayed kria's feelings was really nice.

Loved it.

Very mesmerizing.

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Mahnaz Gul

@FrozenTeardrops

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Nice... But sad.

Yet I liked it... Kriya's feelings were described very well...

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SM_maniac

@SM_maniac

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Brilliant job

loved it a lot

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

good to c u back🤗

amazinggg os👏

beautifullyy penned down😊

lovedd ittt😊

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

shails... superb concept... 😃

kri ki situation toh aisi h --- mil kar bhi hum na milein.. tumse na jaane kyun...

its right on his part .. that he want her beside him but not ready for relationships... 😊

he's still hurt n dazed with past breakups that he's not opening up like a normal relationship... 😵

poor kriya... she can feel it & is hurt with lack of intimacy... 😭

maybe it was right to talk ... & breakup just followed... 😔

who knows .. its just a break to mend things between them... 😳

ending was complete... somethings should be left upon fate 😊

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