bcoz i love u (KR os) and treat

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys!!!
confused with the name??
don't b bahut jaldi pata chal jaayega what i mean!!!!


bcoz I LoVe YoU


kria had returned from new york and she still ignored rey...
rey tried many chances but still he couldn't...
kria always used to make an excuse sometimes she used to say she has got a call to attend so sometimes she says its time for rehearsals... some or he other excuse...
this irritated ey to the core...
he was fed of this and decided to finish it for once and all...

one fine day kria was walking in the corridor when suddenly she pulled into fire exit...
kr- wat the hell swayam kya hai?? (sab rey ko imagine kar rahe the...🤣)
sw- kria i m tierd of it yaar...
kr- ab meinne kya kia??
sw- so u really don't noe tumne kya kia??
kr- accha ok fine i noe...
sw- aur kab tak chalega...
kr- pata nahi swayam but its jut that i don't want to hurt myself again...
sw- aur isliye tum apni in feelings se dur bhaag rahi ho??
kr- bhaag nahi rahi swayam it's just that...
sw- just that wat kria?? just one chance... give him one chance...
kr- but phir bhi un hone...
sw- bas ek baar??
kr- theek hai... kyunki tum keh rahe ho...
sw- wooowww kria!!!
kr- but that doesn't mean it'll b easy for him...
sw- matlab??
kr- jo jaisa chal raha hai waisa hi chalega...
sw- then how wil he do it??
kr- it's all left to him... (and kria leaves)
sw- (to himself)--rey beta ab tu hi sambhal isse... meinne apna kaam kar dia...
in the boys locker room...
rey- swayam kya hua kya bola usne?? wo maa gayi na? is she ready?? kya hua tu kuch bolta kyun nahi hai...
sw- rey agar tu mujhe bolne ka mauka dega tabhii can spk...
rey- ohh m sorry...
sw- kria ka asar hai... bilkul uski tarah baat cutter...
rey- ab tu aise hi karega ya kuch bolega bhi...
sw- haan wo kya haina wo maan gayi hai...
rey- wat sacchi??
sw- haan par
rey- par kya??
sw- ek problem hai...
rey- problem kaisi problem??
sw- wo she is like jo jaisa chal raha hai waise hi chalega and u will have to try hard...
rey- wat?? matlab??
sw- matlab ye ki jab mein (and he narrates the FE scene)
rey- yaar ye baatcutter... pata nahi kitna tadpayegi...
sw- ahem ahem...
rey- wo wo wo actually chod... i'll see through it...
and den rey leaves...
for few days things went the way... kria used to ignore rey and rey he used to try hard but one day...
kria was pulled into the FE...
by the touch she could say who it was... she hadn't have to see the face...
kr- kya hai rey??
rey- kya hai matlab??
kr- yehi wat r u doing??
rey- kuch nahi i m just and comes closer to her...
kr- rey...
rey (keeps his finger on her lips)- ssshhh aaj tumhe sun na hi padega baatcutter u can't ignore me... ab bas bahut ho gaya...
and den kria as she didn't want to make it easy for him removes his hand...
kr- ohh toh aapko samajh mein aagaya i m ignoring u... mereko laga
rey- laga ki i m dumb??
kr- haan
rey- wat??
kr- sach tha...
rey- baatcutter m sorry...
kr- sorry for wat rey?? sorry for hurting me or sorry for calling our kiss as moment or sorry for not loving me back?? sorry for rey??(she shouts)
rey- luk kria i m sorry for everything... for each and everything... i noe pagal hun mein jisne tumhe jaane dia... jisne tumhara dil dukhaya... i noe it's all my fault... but just one chance kria just one last chance...
i promise i will never hurt u and will make sure u never get hurted...
kr- y r u doing this rey?? (with teary eyes)
rey- bcoz i love u kria... i love u... u r more than a friend of me... u r my better half... u complete me... i love u kria i love u... (with teary eyes)
kr- i love u too rey and they have a hug!!!!!

huh khatam!!! bas itna hi... this is something out of my imagination...
i miss KR and unki yaad mein ye likh dia!!! +++
this is ek chotu sa gift for all my lovely dear friends jo mujhse treat mang rahe the for my promotion to goldie!!!!😆

kaisa laga?? do telll!!! hit the like button and comment!!!
p.s. it isn't over yet!!! 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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so mere pyaaro doston!!!!
here it is the party for you all!!! ab khush ho jao!!!!
rupanshi meri kudiye ethu raha tera treat!!!!
reshu sweet!!!! abhi kamo!!! ram di!!!! ana my anu di!!! ""Nehu and nikku di i miss u ppl!!!!"" and all my lovely deary friends jiska naam meinne nahi lia this is for you all too!!!!


ye lo pehle muh meetha karo!!!



and chocolates for u all!!!!


sugary wali!!!



chocoalty wali!!!



and ab celebrating!!! cake cutting!!! cake khao!!! acche se khao!!!😉




and ab finally desserts for u all!!!!
meri favourites!!!!



and sundaes!!!





Edited by arsha_simran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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🤣🤣

i noe bahut tempting hai!!!

mereko bhi ho raha hai!!! sooo mei chali khaane!!!!
isse pehle mereko maaro...

me runs!!!

and ab jo karna hai karlo!!!!🤣
Edited by arsha_simran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
It was cute... I loved it. Nice work.

I love the scene when she says sorry for what... Brilliant.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mubarak ho...sim ek kal or ek aaj...maze aa gaye...this was short nd simple bt sweet...loved it..nd congo once again
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
short OS but a Cute one
loved it
unishaz thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice os.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..
sumimita thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
wow... loved it...

superb os...

missing kriyaansh like helll..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome and beautiful oneshot
I hope it just happens like this
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Awesome!!!
Superb os!!!
How i wish it happens!!! Waise chances hai abhi bhi haina?!! 😉 😆
Pehle jab kriya ko swayam ne FE mein khincha tab i swriously thot k rey hi hai!!!
Fir kriya maan gayi ek chance dene k liye!!! *me dancing*
Aur fir se ek baar confrontation n confession hua FE mein!!!!
I was imagining d evil laughter bg wen kriya said dat he'll have to try harder!!!
N kab kriya ne bola ki he is dumb i was rofling seriously!!!

N niche itna bada treat diya!!!
Os superb tha!!! 👏 👏 👏

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