THE LOCKET (19) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 75

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Posted: 11 years ago

TEASER




The sun was starting to come up when I feel something different. I turn to my side and find myself alone on the terrace. When did Geet slip by me, I wonder? Dressing up in my shirt I make my way to the outhouse to find Dev still sleeping soundly. Daadima must be tired also because she hasn't arisen yet.

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It's been a while since we all have had breakfast and talked about the engagement and she has yet to meet my gaze with hers. I am confused by her behavior. I have eaten more than my share and drunk so much adrak wali chai in the hopes that she will be the one to serve me. Instead it is Tara or Megha who bring me stuff while she stays in the kitchen.

This has gone on far enough I decide as I head to the kitchen. Megha is in there helping her and again she volunteers to help me. Geet doesn't lift her head from her work and instead I find her hidden behind a curtain of her hair. I can't help but feel hurt by her hiding now. It forces me to question myself. Did I overstep my bounds last night? I am not able to understand anything at this moment.

"I am going to the site. Aate der ho jaayegi", I address the words to Megha but I can see Geet chewing her lower lip. I turn towards the door striding out in my impatience and hurt.


... to be continued


Thanks for the likes and comments on the previous part. I know it was unexpected for some of the readers. Sorry if I made you uncomfortable but it is a realistic story between a couple so such things happen.

Hope you stay with the story. I am trying to add parts but I can't write without your support.

120PMs and less than 60 likes no motivation to type😕


Going to clean out my buddy list before the next update so consider yourself notified. Will be removing all non commenters for the last part. There is no point in sending PMs if you are no longer interested.






Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
haila avi yeh kisliye😲
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

haila avi yeh kisliye😲


Teaser ke liye 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


Teaser ke liye 😃



kab dene waali ho?
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Posted: 11 years ago
achanak geet ki avoidance dekh kar maan hurt hogaya hai😭😭😭usko kaise samjhaye ki wo shy feel karrahi thi 😳
ab jaldi jaldi se update bhi dedo aise hi😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

ye kya hei..??
Maan is hurt..
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Posted: 11 years ago
😃
ab geet ko kya ho gaya??😲 why is she avoiding humare maan babu...Aviii...continue sooon...and dont come out of maaneet land 😳😃
Edited by honeygrape - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


The chapter seems to be getting longer and longer. I hope it turns out okay.


Keep it coming babes 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1



Hmmm aur kya karu? Even those who comment regularly kuch nahi bol rahe hai..

next part ka mood nahi ban raha hai

:P



Achaw 😲
Kon he wo badtameez jo comment nae kia *hiding my face in palms* 😆 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow.. Loved the update.. And the passion b/w is something i cant describe in words.. Also liked the teaser.. Why geet is ignoring maan?? Update soon..

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