Door chali jaati hai A swaron Poem

Yeh Kya tha..!!I am surprised,U are so talented girl,Kitna sara talent hai..!!Actually hindi poetry writing is my one of the most favorite hobby from college days,I believe that hindi words and their meaning is just amazing to show various emotions of a particular person or thing..I mean Hindi shabdo ka joh ghumav and their beautifull co-ordination with opposite wordings is most important..And u did so so well..

Originally posted by: Ananya_VruShan

It truly is beautiful. Just WOW!!

thanks😊

Originally posted by: prateek.007

Yeh Kya tha..!!I am surprised,U are so talented girl,Kitna sara talent hai..!!Actually hindi poetry writing is my one of the most favorite hobby from college days,I believe that hindi words and their meaning is just amazing to show various emotions of a particular person or thing..I mean Hindi shabdo ka joh ghumav and their beautifull co-ordination with opposite wordings is most important..And u did so so well..

Seriously U did so so well to define swayam's pov,i just loved each line with each single word..Amazing dear

Thanx for PM

Prateek

OMG I really am flattered bhai.Thank you for such flattering words.I am really bad at poetry I just try sometimes and this is all that I can do in the poetry section but its nice ti hear such generous comments though.Thank you again

Originally posted by: nature2

WEll Written sisy

thanks neeraj bhai

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

tis is really amazingg harshu 👏

thanks rosy dii😃

Originally posted by: sakshibshah

This made my eyes go teary!😭😳
Poetry buddy...it was beautiful...❤️

Mostly the lines-
Aankhon se ojhal ho ke bhi
wo base in aankhon me khwaabon si
Kabhi yaad bankar aankhon me theher jaati hai
To kabhi aansoon ban kar beh jaati hai

Loved it...muahhh!!!!!!!

PS- I miss our Shayari session...

Love,
Ur Poetry buddy.!😊

thank you poetry buddy and I miss our poetry sections too