Sandhir SS: One in a million updated 29/3 Pg 13

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One in a million

Hello guys!

This is neha.

So finally my boards are done J

I had written a Os which *luckily* many of u liked..

If anyone wishes to read it..here it is

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3884981

now when I return to the forum I see many new members..Hello guys J ..Hope u like my work

So here I am back wid a new SS

Ohk so the title *One in a million* goes for Randhir ..I am a Pagal Randhir fan..u can call me biased..per randhir ke saamne mujhe nhi dikhta..

The story is set 3 months ahead in future ..the companies have come for the final internship selection ..

And in this story no one knows that renuka sanyal is Randhir's mom

Sanyukta was sitting on the same bench with same ppl surrounding her..hoping that history doesn't repeats itself ..she wished her brother had got his brains with him this tym & would call her for the interview..

Peon: Interview khatam ho chukka hai..u all can leave..

Sanyukta got up..determined to give an interview..as this tym she had her mentor Vardhan sir with her..

Vardhan enters: Don't worry sanyukta..i'll talk to them

Sanyukta smiled..she knew he would do sumthing..

Parth came and placed his hand on sanyu's shoulder

P: Don't worry sanyukta..everything is gonna b fine

She liked to be wid parth..he has always encouraged her..

S: Thanks parth..

But someone who was sitting on the other side of the table did not like it..

As soon as he heard parth taking sanyu's name ..his head shot up..

He was none other than our *jal kukda* Randhir Singh Shekhawat

Why did this guy always keeps surrounding her like a bee...he decided to interrupt

R: De de ..isko sympathy kit oh zarurat hai..aur tujhe acchi symphathy de bhi kon sakta hai (he said pointing to parth)

Randhir had noticed her tensed face as soon as she had entered the room..

To his goodness she wansnt carrying his mother's scarf today..

Now as she was not been called again ..she seemed depress..

So why not taunt her n get a tigress sanyukta back..?

P: Randhir plz chup raho..its not the tym to fight..

Randhir ignored him and looked at her waiting for her reply..

But to his surprise..she didn't say word..Bolna chodo..she didn't even gave him angry look..

Was she so depressed..?..She didn't even bother to bounce back..?

Vardhan returned..

V: I m sorry sanyukta..But they r saying that they don't need female candidates..well I argued with them on this point but its their choice..

Randhir luked at sanyu..she luked broken..she luked so like...*him*..

*him* was the real randhir..he has always tried to not to expose this part of him..

He neva eva wanted anyone to face this situation..as he himself knew wat it feels like to be hurted..to be hurted by ur loved ones..

He got up..making up his mind to do sumthing..to atleast get her back to her*tigress* form..he sought of didn't like this rondhu sanyukta..

He was about to reach and talk to her when he saw dean coming n announcing..

D: So last but not the least..randhir & parth have been selected by agrwal automobile..

Listening this sanyu's face dropped..

D:So students go n pack ur bags..u guys r will b leaving in the evening..good luck to all..

Randhir was restless now..he was in his dorm..packing his bag..but his thoughs were occupied by sanyukta..

The thought of staying away from her for next 3 months..not fighting with her..not talking to her..

He had to do sumthing..he had to..

He rushed out of the room..searching for his so called boss Ankit agrawal

After half n hour of search he found her in the college amphitheatre..

R: hey ..i gotaa talk to u..

A: Oh! C who's here..my best man! Haan bolna..kya kaam hai..

R: who I wanted to say..ki u didn't select sanyukta..? umm why?

A: Arey usko uski aukat dikhani thi..

R: *Mind voice* Aukat toh main tujhe teri dikhaunga saale..

R:.. Listen I know u hate her.. n so I m here to help u..

A:..help..kaisi help?

R: See..Ur sister is not that dumb as u think..thik thak knowledge hai use..and some company has selected her too..agar usne who internship join karli toh kya pata uske aur par nikal aye..aur woh shayad khudko itni independent samje ke ghar wapas na aaye..Inshort Agrwal family ki nak kata degi..

Randhir didn't know wat he was blabbering...He just wanted sanyu to be wid HIM..

Wait wat..? he wanted her to be wid him..? but why..

He chucked that thought and prayed this stupid guy agrees to him..

A: I think tu sahi keh rha hai...Toh ab kya kare..

R: Give her internship..make her join ur company..

He blurted out..

A: U r ryt..ab yehi karna padega..

Sanyukta who was standing on a corner was shocked..this guy whom she reffered her as her *mortal enemy* was helping her out..?

But why..?

She turned to her return to her dorm immersed in her so called *mortal enemy* thoughts..

Randhir turned n smirked..

R: Game on Sanyukta agrwal..! Tumhara saath toh main kahi nhi chodunga..Ab tumhari life hell banana ki kasam kha jo rakhi hai toh nibahni padegi na farzi..

But whom he was giving reasons too..He knew he did not it to make her life hell..

Well the reason was something else..he knew this very well...and he was afraid to figure it out..

Didn't he know ke *Jis chiz se aap dur bhagte hain, zindagi aapko uske hi zyada pass lati hai*

Precap: Randhir to stay in sanyu's house..


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Hope u guys like it..

Leave me with your comments..

Sorry for the mistakes..not proof read..

P.S For pms plz like this post and add me to ur frnd list..

Thank you 😃

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Part 2 : pg 4

Part 3: pg 9
Part 4: pg 13
Edited by _-NeHa-_ - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yippeee...I'm the first one to comment!!!

Wow a new SanDhir SS!!! A very good start after xams...
OMG!! This one is hell lot amazing and awesome. The backdrop of the story, internship, is really interesting. Good concept, dear.👏

Prof. Vardhaan and Parth supporting Sanyukta was very touching.
Randhir's, as usual, taunts and then his sub-conscious support for Sanyukta was very well expressed.
His inner turmoil and lingering emotions have also been perfectly portrayed. I luved his confused states and his self-help justifications for his actions.
Randhir brilliantly manipulated that moron Ankit. 😎I felt the entire convo to be funny.

This chapter was just superb. 👍🏼
All the dialogues were well-formed and exact for the apt situations.
The entire emotional ride was wonderfully penned down.
Do update the next part soon... I'm eagerly waiting to read more...😊
Edited by KAJU10 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start
randhir helped sanyukta
precap is nice
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asapom

awesome start

randhir helped sanyukta
precap is nice
continue soon

Thank u so much!
Well yes He helped her out..
U can say he is kind of addicted to her $ staying away from her was just driving him crazy..
Will try
Can i know ur name?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It is very nice and more like u stols the idea right out of my mind plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: KAJU10

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Yippeee...I'm the first one to comment!!!

Wow a new SanDhir SS!!! A very good start after xams...
OMG!! This one is hell lot amazing and awesome. The backdrop of the story, internship, is really interesting. Good concept, dear.👏

Prof. Vardhaan and Parth supporting Sanyukta was very touching.
Randhir's, as usual, taunts and then his sub-conscious support for Sanyukta was very well expressed.
His inner turmoil and lingering emotions have also been perfectly portrayed. I luved his confused states and his self-help justifications for his actions.
Randhir brilliantly manipulated that moron Ankit. 😎I felt the entire convo to be funny.

This chapter was just superb. 👍🏼
All the dialogues were well-formed and exact for the apt situations.
The entire emotional ride was wonderfully penned down.
Do update the next part soon... I'm eagerly waiting to read more...😊

Hey kajal :)
I have always loved to read ur comments..
U analyse the story well and also make me realise where i go wrong..
Thank u so much buddy 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sniggybabes

It is very nice and more like u stols the idea right out of my mind plz pm me when u update

Thanks yaar..
Will defo do it..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well hi5 on being randhir fan...m too a crazy randhir fan..chahe wo kuch v kare.. coming to the story...its so good...please update next part soon..n congrats for completing boards..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: _-NeHa-_

Thank u so much!
Well yes He helped her out..
U can say he is kind of addicted to her $ staying away from her was just driving him crazy..
Will try
Can i know ur name?


my name is vani.😃
Edited by Asapom - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg... loved it!! Want the same thing to happen in the serial also... jaldi next part post karo and haan do PM me..!! :) <3

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