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hello gals updating today any one waiting??
BTW holi special update with maaneet 😉
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sochoongi wait karoon ya na karoon😉😆
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Originally posted by: priya111111

sochoongi wait karoon ya na karoon😉😆


i am angry on uuu 😡
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i am angry on uuu 😡




wo kyun?😉
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mai nahi batavungi 😆
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mai nahi batavungi 😆





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aap ki manmani nahi chalegi is bar huh

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Originally posted by: sangeeta33

Main to wait nahi karungi


haawww kyunnn😆
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ADHOORI ZINDAGI



New banner again by priya111111


thank you soo much di



Part 34


(geet still haven't realised her feelings she need some push here

it's really hard for her to move on easily right )

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@ nivedita my hand is fine now dont worry thanks for ur concern




"Wow Sheela looking like your plan is working the way I wants time for final blow" thought sheela watching maaneet meeting from her room.
"Thanks to you maan I didn't get any pics after the hospital day because your guards but today I got golden opportunity" thought SK sliding pics she have taken one by one smiling evilly.
For maaneet it is most beautiful night they got they couldn't ask for more both were lost in their own world not knowing the storm is about to knock on their door steps. Geet didn't get sleep because of her over flowing happiness tossing on her bed. She even forgets why she is distancing herself from him guess what she still not even realized why she is feeling sad for his marriage news. Her life is not cake walk she gone through so much in her life. Her life totally got dependent on him his smile is her medicine. His hug his touch making her feel alive the reason is un known to her. She is unable to give any name to this new found feel of her.
She is so much happy to think any other way all she wanted is capture this moment in her heart whatever may be the consequences. After some time she eventually drifted in to sleep due to her tired day. Un like her daily routine night mares she is dreaming about his touch not to forget his kiss.


Maan flowing on with happening for her one smile he can do anything. Her fragrance still lingered on his body in his thoughts. He can even imagine her sleeping beside him with smiling face. He sat on his bed unable to hold back his excited heart. Images of her face flashing in his mind making him go crazy for her. He went there to meet her but turn of events ended up making him kiss her. Ohh that kiss he is losing himself with this feel with her innocent look. Her blushy face her dimple cheeks. Looking her in that dress took toll on him he kissed her again and his teasing??.. his own behavior surprising him but for her everything is looking perfect in his point of view.

One thing still missing she haven't said why she is distancing herself from him. He needs to know that she is doing that with at most difficulty. When she is craving for him why she have to bear all these pain. He vowed himself to know the reason as soon possible. He is sure of his feelings for her did she realized her feelings?? If not he will make her realize then he can solve issues that were bothering her. With determined look maan also slept peacefully thinking about his love.


The morning shined up with new zeal of happiness for maaneet. Maan woken up late resulting skipped his work outs. Maan opened his eyes when naina came with his coffee. She took good class of him for doing late night work. He managed he went for some work at night when he came back dadi and aniee already sleeping for his relief.


Maan called her from his mobile after taking bath sipping his coffee. A smile automatically spread on his face with her name itself. She is sleeping lazily on her bed with smiley face not bothering about her assistant constant calls. He waited for her but she didn't pick his call at first two attempts. As last chance he again tried this time at last ring she picked his call.

"Good morning geet" she heared his sweet voice which holds magic it felt like some lullaby to her sleepy state.


"Princess abhi tak nahi uti?" he questioned lovingly. She nodded her head for no lying on bed with closed eyes listening to his pampering voice. He guessed that she won't give answer from her mouth "Eyes swear mansee is better than you geet" he thought smiled imagining her state. "Sweet heart I am not there na so you should answer me now get up like good girl" he love to pamper her.

She opened her eyes lazily sat on bed stretched her arms to get rid of her sleepy state. He gave her time to at least wish him back. She looked here and there it felt like dream to her. The metal piece in her hands saying this is true not any dream. Taking back her stretched hands she kept mobile on her ears. With crossed legs kept her chin on her knees she is feeling so shy to even talk with him on call. "Good morning" she wished him gathering her all courage.


He chuckled for her meek voice he can clearly say in what condition she is in now. She remembers there last night encounter but a part of her brain refusing to believe she needs his assurance.
"Aap sach mai aaye kya yaha last night" she asked him so cutely not able to believe anything.


"Tuje kuch yaad nahi hain kya?" he asked with disbelief look. "nahi mera matlab ha yaad hai per?" she stopped not knowing what exactly she wants to hear from him.


"sab kuch yaad hain kya?" he teased with naughty smirk she didn't get his teasing words answered like good girl. "Kuch hua aur" she thought for a while to remember how she reached up to him. He remembered how vulnerable she was when they meet. He don't want to spoil her mood by asking any questions at this morning changed the topic wisely.


"If you want I will do it again so than you don't have to remember by starching your brain. BTW I said I will teach you something do remember that?" he asked so coolly but his words came like some whispers to her ears.


A current passed through her body his touch his kiss she remembered everything clearly. She cursed herself for even asking him like that. She tried to hide her embracement but her voice trembled as the flashes of her quick peck came in to her mind.

Suddenly she started sneezing continuously he got worried for her health. "Geet apply vicks or something to nose and fore head" maan paused hesitant to say further. His grand maa strict about health if any one got cold then she will apply powerful medicine on fore head and chest on nape will make sure they took warm bath. Pushing his hesitance aside maan commanded to do the same.

Geet felt embarrassed when he said to apply that on her chest etc. He felt she is her responsibility commanded her to do that. She is very much ignorant toward her health he have to take care of her no matter how personal problem that was.


"Geet just do what I said ok" maan at last commanded with high voice as she is sneezing badly from almost twenty minutes. She pouted with baby angry face for his shout hurriedly searched for any medicine. She made yucky face when she got that after few minutes carrying that in her hand. "Ji haachi I hate this hachhi smell" she managed to say those lines while sneezing.


Maan hit his head hard even she can hear that sound she asked so cutely "wo awaz kya hai aap teek haina". He chuckled at her cuteness uff what he have to do with this girl maan thought smiling. With his constant pestering she agreed to do what he said. Maan warned her sweetly "If you won't do that then forget it I won't call you again" he cut the call without waiting for her reaction. She cutely cribbed in her lonely room about his devil avatar warning.


Maan came down for BF after getting ready for office in his MSK style talking on phone with someone. He scanned the whole house it was decorated fully while servants still busy in decorating outside of house even. He quietly sat on dining table grabbing news paper in his hands. "Maa whats going on any special day?" maan questioned out of curiosity as his family ladies were very busy in discussing something.


"Maan tomorrow is holi so we all planning to celebrate in grand way" dadi answered his question again immersed herself in making some list. Maan can see how much happy they are he started eating his pasta. What surprised him was his dad also taking part of preparations he is listing about guests he struggled left that topic. Dadi and aniee exchanged naughty looks when maan cell beeped with message tone.


"Bath karona mujse I did what you told me please" he read her message with winning smile. Geet walking to and fro in her room after sending message to him. It is first message from her side to him officially. Every time maan is the first only one who will send messages to remember about her meals etc. he did small bangra for his victory but didn't replied back.
In no time maan cell again beeped before he put that back on table. "sachi I did that now I am feeling good also please call me na" he smile widened watching cute baby angry face she sent on end of message. She is reluctant to call him but she is unable to sit silent when he said he won't call her again. He said like that to make her do that task but he is enjoying her restlessness.
"Dadi I told you na see his smile and his actions and that glow on his face" aniee whispered in dadi ears keeping an eye on her dad who sat on head chair of dining table.
"Aniee beta your dadi is not dumb ok I too told you what I have witnessed in party right" dadi answered raising her invisible color. Aniee smiled at her dadi like silly me sorry guru ji.
Naina, Dev and meera watching them from corner of eyes while maan is busy with his love.


Dadi eyed aniee to keep silent as all looking at them curiously. After the BF maan grabbed his lappy bag about to left from there but one person call makes him halt in his tracks.


"Maan wait I need to talk with you" all gasped when Ranjith called him directly. After maan returned from London it is first time ranjith talking with him directly. Maan didn't turned back stood there like statue indirectly saying to his father to go on.
"Ji he is in rush today you can talk with him at night also" naina interfered before Ranjith open his mouth. Ranjith glared at her for coming in between she pleaded through her eyes at end he given up. Remaining family members were mute spectators while maan stood there mixed emotions of pain and anger. His values what his mom and dadi teached him didn't allowing him to disrespect his dad's words. At same time he won't for give this man who crushed his happiness in matter of few seconds.


"Maan go have a nice day beta" dadi said pecking him on his fore head knowing about his state. Maan given his faint smile left from there with long steps sat on his car closed his eyes resting his head on seat. He is here for his pari but at end because of geet's presence in his life everything came upside and down.


He is sure about his feelings but at corner of his heart the guilt is still there "Is he betraying his heart by himself in name of geet's love? . Whenever pari memories came in to his head many thoughts triggering in his heart. It's paining his heart badly he wants to end this but how?. He is so much happy at start of the day but his aloofness again surrounded his heart because of his dad.
"Naina you mean that Aarthi arora is the girl whom Ranjith searched for maan?" dadi asked blinking her eyes in disbelief. She didn't find that girl for as homely girl she looked like some show off peace to her eyes. She cursed Ranjith for even thinking aarthi is best for maan. She guessed Aarthi is potrating herself as good girl in ranjith eyes.
"Yes maa at BF he is going to reveal this to maan but I stopped him as we all know the consequences." Naina said with heavy sigh. She is able to share her inner turmoil to her MIL at last as ranjith is not at home now.
"Ok leave that to me I assure you this time I won't give any chance to ranjith to win over us. He is such a big stubborn I am also not less all I want is maan's happiness. I know where his happiness resides now" dadi proudly said thinking about maaneet in her mind.

Naina looked at her with questioning gauze but dadi wisely changed the topic before she could reveal this news to any one she must know about maaneet feelings fully first. Following day both ladies got busy in preparations of holi while aniee dev and meera already left for their respective works.


Maan makes himself busy in his work he talked with geet after he reached office. He so much wanted to meet her but his lined up schedule eating his whole time. Geet didn't met sheela even forget her existence her assistant is there to play key role in between them. The whole day is hell busy for geet as well her cold affecting her she often fainted due to heavy cold and headache.

It was evening dadi and aniee went for shopping to purchase few things for holi. They invited Arjun and Amy swetha not to forget rahul the play maker in maaneet first meeting at their birthday night. Amy informed them he will brought his official girl friend Ritzy dadi warmly accepted his wish.

When dadi and aniee are busy in shopping they heard impatient aarthi grumble.

"I said right I am Khurana's hone wali bahu so I should look matching their standard" aarthi shouted at her friends throwing the dress on their faces. They rolled their eyes for her over reactive nature for small thing. Aniee don't like her at party day itself throwing herself on her bhai same with dadi.
"See meet your bhabha ji aniee" dadi said with mischievous glint.


"No way yuck forget it dadi dare to say like that she is right Khurana's bahu should have some standards she don't have them" aniee made yucky face while saying those words making dadi chuckle.

Dadi told her what her dad planning behind maan aniee know the terms between them were not good she wondered why her dad doing this.


"Looking like she is dreaming about her marriage with maan let give her some trial of Khurana's welcome tomorrow then. Your dad invited them too" aniee gasped with this new piece of information. "I wonder will maan bhai give at least one glance at her or not" aniee said out of pity looking at aarthi hard work to get some good dress.
They walked away before aarthi could see them they don't want to meet that girl no way.


"Aru you are claiming yourself as there would be daughter in law but why you guys didn't announced that?" one of aarthi friend questioned to get information.


"I don't know yaar but dad warned me not to open my mouth until MSK dad announced that. All I want is to be as DIL of Khurana's at end I will be the one so why to worry unnecessarily." Aarthi dismissed her question with straight answer.


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"Maan bhai you know what I even invited GK for tomorrow's holi celebration dadi given permission for that I am so happy bhai" Aniee entered into maan's while saying this maan glared at her for not taking permission. Aniee smiled at her sheepishly maan also smiled at his bay sister warmly.


"Now come on we will go for shopping to take dress for all of us and GK is also coming there" aniee dragged him keeping all his files aside. Maan checked his time he talked with geet at morning only after that he didn't heed any attention because of his disturbed mood. His baby sister is like savior to him he wants to meet her but got stuck with files as usual.


They make their way out of office arjun accompanied them as per maan's order much to aniee happiness. Maan was surprised to see dadi also with them. He can feel something fishy but he shrugged his thoughts sat in the car.

faster will the comments and likes faster will be the update

last precap is on its way so wait and watch for that

Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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