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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Beautiful TS :)

Loved it :)

Keep writing more :)

PM me :)

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Amy

@Amy21

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

It was amazing...well penned... 👏
Was waiting fr this update...frm so long..finally
My wait was fullfilled with such a nice update... 😊 😊
Thnx fr d pm..
Do write more.. 😊

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

thank you so much for updating..
just one word PERFECT...
perfect penned down emotions, perfect convo, perfect ending..
just loved it.
thanks 4 d pm

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

wow its just aswom...

plzz come up with new write ups...

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Hello, hello, roomie forever! Feels bad that I can't turn to you right now and tell you how I felt about the story! I have to type it using a stupid computer, but nevertheless I shall tell you what you made me feel!

First off, I adore how you've used the song! Sets the right emotion in motion in the readers' mind! This is not only for this update but also for the previous two! Excellent idea! :')

Coming to the update, everything was in the right place! The language, the emotions, the pace, basically everything! Loved your idea about the difference between the extent of love and the intensity! It is indeed true that they need not be a basis for rash judgement on our parts! I'm sure it was a genuine thought and observation by you, so a big high-five for that :D

Thank you for giving us such a happy ending by not making the story mushy and cheesy! This is what I loved the most about the writing! Keep writing, because you rock at it :D When you're absolutely positive about your writing, I'm sure you'l get the response :D Can't wait for the FFs and the many more things :D ;)

PS. Send some people to read my story and comment? xP

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GlamourousPearl

@GlamourousPearl

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Song perfect
mood perfect
wordz perfect
emotions perfectly penned... i so love u for dis ...thnx a ton dear ...
A HUGE wala thnx...i thought of getting an intense n mashy mixed swaron...bt i so loved da way u potrayed our lovebirdz...damn ur updates r as cute n perfect us our Swaron...loved it...n ending toh was boss hats off to u yaar...

tons of thnks my gal...
do continue writing...dnt brk our hearts by jst discontining...u r tremendously good at dis...
PMs n updates r always welcomed...
keep wirting
keep smiling...

PS;if u cn irritate wid ur Write-ups...den v(i) can pakao-fiy u wid my bore comments.. :)

Edited by GlamourousPearl - 11 years ago

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