SWARON TS-Of Drizzles and HurricanesLASTPARTUPDTD!(Current Track) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its awsum amazing
Am luving it alooot
Do update next part sooon and do pm me plzzz
And guddie luck for ur exams
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Posted: 11 years ago
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me too having 12 boards paper.!! best of luck..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -spongy-


this was truly amazing
i mean the story, the outline, the way it was penned down. 👏
loved it so much
is this your first write up?

please do write more.. and do you mind PM-ing this to me. 😊

Thanx a lott :)! This is my second write up..my first write up is ALVIDA which was also on Swaron Current Track! Do check it out n I shall PM u :) V !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome...👏
inspite of xam u hv writeen so well...😊😊
good job well done😊👏
all the best fr ua xam..😊
Edited by abcdghi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

PART 2

Sharon was thinking all the possible ways of staying away from Swayam and also making sure that he is alright.She thought of going to college and arranging everything as Swayam will join college soon.She had a talk to VP sir about Swayam not working as ACS until the recovery of his injury.She also checked the Rehearsal Hall properly.She called few technicians who could renovate the Rehearsal Hall once again so that everyone will be safe! Rehearsal Hall looked Simple and Elegant. All the risky things like the Lights hanging on the ceiling and glass pieces were removed and replaced by the posters of Great Dancers like Michael Jackson,Javed Jaffery,Govinda,Shiamak Davar,etc whom Swayam and Gang worshipped.She went to Swayam's home decorated it nicely for one last time.She consulted to a Dietician regarding Swayam's health and made a fixed Diet Chart for about 1 and a half months.She instructed each and everything to Kaka,she even made a book for Kaka in HINDI so that he does not forget anything.She did not wanted to risk Swayam's Life once again in any way.She made sure that everything is in on its place.She posted notes everywhere so that Swayam doesn't find it difficult to locate things.

Swayam got discharged from the hospital.Ruhi was there with him all the time.He felt suffocated with her but he didn't respond to her rudely.He avoided the Proposal thing.Sharon knew about Ruhi's admiration towards Swayam.She felt she should let him go.

Swayam was back at Home.He saw all things and was surprised.He was about to ask Kaka about all the changes when Ruhi came,

Ruhi-Swayam,yeh sab humne aapke liye kiya hai taaki aapko koi taklif naa ho.Abhi aap befikar hokar saare kaam kijiye.

Swayam-Thanx a lot Ruhi but all this was not needed.

Ruhi-Are kaisi baate kar rahe hai aap,ye sab karna toh mera farz tha.She took all the credit of things done by Sharon.

Sharon thought to meet Swayam one last time before going to United Kingdom at her Masi's place.She got admission into London School of Dance easily as she was The Sharon Raiprakash.She went to Swayam's place.

Sharon-Hi,Swayam

Swayam-Sharon tum yaha?

Sharon-Haa voh mein bas Thanx kehne aayi thi.Thanx a lot Swayam meri jaan bachane ke liye.Par tumhe ye sab karne ki zarurat nahi thi.

Swayam-Meri Life ko mein itne easily jaane nahi de skta tha.

Sharon-Hmm, I have got these for you please accept it.

(She gave a bouquet and a letter with it)

Swayam was angry,upset,hurt and what not. He accepted the bouquet.

Sharon-Chalo take care . I will miss you Swayam.Bye!

She immediately left the place.She acted formal so that Swayam doesn't sense anything wrong.She controlled herself.But as soon as she left from his house tears started making their way.She cried,screamed and went to meet Rey-Kria-Simmi.

Sharon left for United Kingdom after meeting all her friends.Here,Everyone tried to talk to Swayam about Sharon but He avoided everyone,he did not want to hear anything about Sharon.He was in a deep pain.Swayam doesn't even reads the letter given by Sharon.

Precap-Swayam comes to know about Sharon going to U.K.

A/N-I am sorry about all the mistakes in this part.I wrote it in a hurry.Pls KEEP READING as I know there are many SS on current track but I promise you all to give my Best J!

-Sachi!

Edited by sachi123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3

Rey gave the letter to Swayam which Sharon gave him when he was in the Hospital.Swayam didn't open this one too.So basically he had two letters given by Sharon!

Ya Rabba

Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata
Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila
Is Pyaar Mein Hon Kaise Kaise Imntihaan
Ye Pyaar Likhe Kaisi Kaisi Dastaan
Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar
Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar
Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata
Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila

Sharon was in the flight thinking about the memories she shared with Swayam.She was upset.She had that little hope that Swayam would stop him, but he didn't. May be he didn't read the letter,she thought.

Here,Swayam was thinking about Sharon.

Swayam POV- Why is everyone talking about Sharon? Is she alright? Why am I thinking about her?

Rey-Because you love her Idiot!

Swayam-Huh???

Rey-Swayam,tu kuch nahi bolega,na mujhe rokega,bas sunn chup chap mein jo bol raha hu!

Rey-Sharon humesha ke liye U.K. chale gayi.She wont come back!

Swayam-What? Par Kyun?

Rey-Tere liye Swayam.She loves you dude.Aur use lagta hai uske pyaar ke vajah se you are in this condition.Why don't you accept that you both are meant to be? Kab tak use push krega apni Life se.Itnaa bada sacrifice toh Swayam tune bhi nahi kiya ,jitna Sharon ne kiya hai.Sharon left St.Louis,Her Diva image,Her home,Her Friends,Me,Her Dad.She left you for YOU.

Swayam couldn't digest what Rey just said him.He just went to his room and got the letters.He panicked.The thought of Sharon leaving him forever scared him to death.He opened the first letter quickly.

Kaisa Hai Safar Wafa Ki Manjil Ka
Na Hai Koi Hal Dilon Ki Mushkil Ka
Dhadkan Dhadkan Bikhri Ranjishein
Saansein Saansein Tooti Bandishein
Kahi To Har Lamha Honton Pe Fariyaad Hai
Kisi Ki Duniya Chaahat Mein Barbaad Hai

Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar
Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar


He read,

Swayam,

I know you must be expecting me in the Hospital,taking care of you and all.But I cant.I really cant. It hurts me to see you in this condition and that to because of me.I am sorry to disappoint you.I hope Ruhi takes proper care of you! Get well soon.

-Sharon

He tore the envelope of second letter quickly.He read,

Swayam,

I know you are too stubborn to follow all the diet and rules.But if ever you have loved me,you have to follow them.After all I have put so much effort in to it! I know last six months have been difficult for you because of me.I am really sorry from bottom of my heart.Sorry.I know a sorry cannot fix the pain I have given you but I had to say it.There are few things I need to tell you which I couldn't because of my big fat ego.

I love it when you say my name,it gives me all the happiness in the World!

I love when you pamper me, I love to see that you still care for me.

I love it when you hold me when I am about to fall.

I love to see you Dance.

For me you define perfection.

I know I inspire you to Dance,but I Sharon Raiprakash admit that you Dance better than me and now you are my Inspiration.

I loved spending time with you,I have memories to smile upon all my Life.

I LOVE YOU

Swayam,I have joined London School of Dance.I know it's a big thing.I didn't want to Dance after our break up.But not dancing means disconnecting from you.And I didn't want to break that last thing which kept us connected.London School of Dance was never my dream.My Dream was to DANCE with you all my Life.I never spoke about our problems to Rey,it was a misunderstanding,Rey came to know about it himself.You were never a Toyboy for me Swayam.I rejected you in front of everyone.It still hurts me.It was my reflex.My guards were getting down.You are my weakness.I didn't want World to know that.Everyone,whom I have loved in my life had gone away from me somehow.I was too selfish to let you go.I never got a chance to explain you this.I am a complicated girl with lot of baggage around me and I don't want you to suffer because of that.You deserve someone better,who is simple,caring without any baggage.Ruhi loves you Swayam.Give her a chance.I will be the Happiest person if you move on.You deserve all the Happiness.Dont ever think that I left India for you,I left India for myself.Ya,I know I am Selfish.

Take Care,Be Happy!

Forever Yours,

Sharon!

Koi Na Sune Sisakati Aanhon Ko
Koi Na Dhare Tadapati Baahon Ko
Aadhi Aadhi Puri Khwaishein
Tooti Footi Sab Farmaaishein
Kahin Shak Hain Kahin Nafrat Ki Deewaar Hai
Kahin Jeet Mein Bhi Shamil Palpal Haar Hain
Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar
Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar
Ho Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar
Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar

Swayam had that sinking feeling in him.

End

A/N-I just wanted to use some song.I got this idea by reading Os on Current track by Tanvish and Varsh-mayur.Thanx.I dont know to how add the song.But i surely know that reading it also has an impact! I hope I have done justice to the story.Next update on 10th March,2014.Pls comment and hit the like tab if u liked this one.Do leave your valuable Comments and Suggestions!

Cheers👍🏼!

-Sachi!

Edited by sachi123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazingly penned
loved it
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Edited by nature2 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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the way sharon took care of ecerything, is awesome.. ruhi , why are you taking credit of sharon's care? swayam plz do read the letter... do update soon nd plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was jst owsmmm
waiting 2 see swayams reaction when he will come 2 know about sharon leaving 2 uk...
eagerly waiting...
plzzz next part update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
i love it i love it pls PM me

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