Is it you ?? KR os * On Kriya's return*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sabe pehle !! Bhool jao sab tum log,... sab matlab sab.. kal ka mera OS , aaj ka episode.. sab!! Okay!!

So subah ko me became sad thinking there will be no kriya in Holi episode!! So by the evening this is what I thought.

It's utter crap so just bear it 😛😆

And yeah it's my assumption on holi episode


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What is happening to him. He wiped the sweat on his forehead and again looked around. He tried. He tried is level best to be happy, to pretend that he is enjoying it to the best and no doubt he succeeded in it. Why not?? After all Reyaansh Singhania plays the game clean. He mocked himself with a laugh.

How perfect he is !! That he spoils everyone's life, he messes up everything.

And instantly her face appeared before him. Those eyes , that pain, they seemed so weak... she doesn't want to leave , but because of him.. . It's been 10 days or more already.
He looked around once again. But everything looked pale to him. Isn't Holi supposed to be a festival of colors?? He is drenched in colors. But why is he not excited? Why is he not happy?? Why??

Because she ..

"I don't know the reason " he mumbled sternly for himself stopping his heart to voice out the reason.

" Rey!! Tu yaha kya kar rahe ho?? " He heard sharon from behind. He smiled, he is supposed to right? He doesn't want to see Sharon upset thinking he is upset. So he smiled. He can easily convince people with his smile, why not, The dazzler Singhania is famous for that only.

" kuch nahi dad ka call aaya toh " he shrugged smiling.

" Kyu?? kya hua?? " she looked at his hands for his mobile. He quickly took it out of his pocket.

" Kat gaya, I will call him back. Waise Sharon I will be back in 5 okay?? "

" Kaha jaa rahe ho?? " She asked as he turned his back to her. He sighed. Now a days she is tagging him everywhere and trying her best to keep him happy and to a extent he is, after all she is his bestie. His heart found some peace with her.

" Washroom? " he raised a eyebrow as if asking. "Kyun?? " he smiled naughtily.

Sharon narrowed her eyes and punched him on his shoulder lightly "Shut up Rey !! " she left shaking her head. And the next second his smile vanished. It's getting hard now -a-days .Sighing he walked into the college. He will silently leave for home from the back gate and he will think of what he will explain to the gang later. Right now all he wanted was to hit the bed, his head is literally spinning.

He was walking through the Girls locker room corridor to reach the boys locker room. But he stopped seeing her walking towards locker room looking down . As usual in those black jeans and white shirt with a black jacket. He gulped slightly.

Is she back really?

He felt a sudden swell in his chest. Is it due to happiness? He closed his eyes for a second to feel that feeling. But as he opened his eyes she vanished. He shook his head.

He didn't even take bhaang right?? Then why is he hallucinating?? He resumed his walk scolding himself to behave a bit sensible. But as he crossed the locker room he heard some noise. He couldn't stop himself and glanced inside and there she is . Adjusting her stuff in her locker. His legs took him to her in trance. To hell with girls locker room and restrictions that boys shouldn't enter. All that matter is she. She is finally back.


"Kriya !! " He breathed slowly standing right behind her. He frangrance. God how much he missed it.

"Rey !! " she turned surprised. As soon as his eyes met hers he hugged her tight letting those tears fall.

"I am sorry Kriya!! I am very sorry, mujhe uss din dhyaan se situation ko handle karna tha!! Sorry Kriya I am really sorry!! I missed you so much!! " he chanted when she continuously tried to speak.


"Rey sorry ki koi zaroorat nahi hai " She said clutching her jacket on sides.

He pulled back. Why isn't she hugging him back?? He pull back just to get lost in those doe shaped eyes. They held so much love for him. Damn he missed her so much.

She looked away not meeting his eyes and tried to move back when he pushed her back to the lockers and crushed her between him and the lockers. She looked at him wide eyed.

"Rey ye aap "and before she could complete he dug his face in the crook of her neck and kissed her there taking in her fragrance. Her grip on her jacket tightened . Rey pulled back slowly and looked at her caressing her cheek with his left hand. Her eyes are closing every now and then. How can they not?? He has such effect on her and this closeness is not helping either.

" Rey aap ye kya kar rahe ho? Chodiye mujhe " she pleaded but they fell into deaf ears. All he knows, hears and sees is - her.

And without thinking twice he leaned in and kissed her for life. Soon he felt her palms slip into his hair and she kissed him back with equal passion. He tightened his grip on her waist and moved forward crushing her more. But , he hit the locker, and his eyes flew open. He looked around quickly. She is no where to be seen and he is standing in the girls locker room before her locker?? Something is seriously wrong with him. He dashed out frustrated with himself. Grabbing his bike keys from the locker her dashed out. But he once again stopped seeing her. And the next moment he got lost in her. She looked so beautiful in that white suit. And she looked too cute with those blue and pink colors on her cheeks. He smiled but frowned immediately. He lost it for sure. He shook his head and looked front but she is standing there looking at him blankly. He sighed out of frustration.

Enough Rey!! Just leave.

He walked front quickly. But what he did was bump into her hard clashing both of their foreheads .

"Oaaww!!! " She cried rubbing her forehead.

"Rey aap paagal ho kya??? Dekh ke bhi takrate ho?? " She shouted rubbing her head when he jerked his head up hearing her . Is he hallucinating again?? Or is he not?

"Wo bhi itni zor se ! " She kept rubbing her forehead eyes closed slightly due to pain. He moved front and forwarded his hand but stopped seeing his palm full of color. He then slowly forwarded his hand and caressed her cheek with the back of his hand . She looked up right into his eyes instantly. For a moment both remembered their first touch, i.e., when she was crying and he helped her take of those tissue over her.

Realizing what is happening she stepped back bringin him back to reality!!

" Tum sach mei ho ?? " he asked dazed .

"Ji? "she made a face. What is he speaking?? Can't he see her standing like a rock in front of him??

He came out of his trance and spoke.

"Tum kab aayi??" he stammered.

" abhi!! "she smiled and she looked away feeling awkward at the way he is looking at her. Why is he not speaking anything.

"Sab wait kar rahe hai. Mai bag locker mei rakh ke aati hun " she said . She stood there at looked at him for response. But all he did was gape at her like a fool. After few minutes she gave a awkward smile and walked away before she does anything stupid. He looked at her till she vanished from his sight. And unknowingly a smile spread on his lips. He looked down at his hands sensing the touch.She is so soft.

"Happy Holi Kriya ... " he said looking at colors in his hand. Suddenly he is so excited to celebrate it and quickly walked towards the arena where holi is beeing celebrated slipping his bike keys into the pockets.

Good night!

Deetha!!😊

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shelly_Arsha thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Imagine this come true aswel 😆

Omg that locker part!! The kiss!! 😲 I was reading it in so much depth and then realised rey banged into the locker xD Aww!!

Him hallucinating was shown nicely, and his smile at the end!!

aw it was perfect..ab holi tak wait karte hain 😛
Edited by shelly_Arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hallucination part was the Best.

Amazing OS Deethuuu :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Gawddd diii dis was ecstasy I so loved dis os kash aisa sach hojaye plzzz bhagwan ji thoda sa hi aisa hoon I so want kich toh scene mile kriyaansh pe in d holi special episode 😭
Edited by ..RD.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Deee its beautiful 😃 👍đŸŧ
I sooo wish aisa hi hooo Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ohkkk... first of ol.. thnx deee... tune likh hi diya... :-)
n now coming to os.. i think ye bhi sach ho sakta h.. excpt hallcuation part :-P but seriously kya entry h.. rey behvr.. hehe majnu ban gaya h... bht howceasily he hide his pain aftr all he s a dazzler n beautifully described ^_^
happy holi.. :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsome
i loved it
kash aisa hi ho...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Deetha u rock :*
that hallucination part was awesommmeee
haha rey banging in lockerđŸ¤Ŗ
amazing os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello.. n I love uh... as uh know

aur Iss OS main to wah wah

Dil khush kar diya apne

Poor Rey... trying his best to be happy

But ending up hallucinating

about Kria everywhere *Poor guy*

the locker room scene Aww...

that was really sweet...

Rey was completely lost in her thoughts

When Kria entered...

Hayeee Kya entry thi

"Rey aap paagal ho kya??? Dekh ke bhi takrate ho?? "

It was a really Fabulous one..

n I hope d3 main bhi aisa hi ho

like ur last OS... hehehehe...

Loved it..
Edited by Dewdrops.ShaKun - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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deetha u r on fever or something...new os evryday ????
hope it continues...this was..ermm...smthing though for sad rey bt i enjoyed it laughing...how much he hallucinates...god...well best was locker room wala...
nd end me jb wo aa gai to sara ghar jakr sar phodne ka plan change ??? nautanki...loved it..
PS : sm1 promised to update 3 stories daily...

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