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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here's a quick poem on Dadisa.


She rules like no other woman
Always wanting the best for everyone
Sweet adorable and kind
She commands respect
In her family. ..
She can be clever at times
With the help of beloved Uday
Just to get her eldest Grandaughter
To be the next heir
The chosen one
The only one
As for Jai
She can see through her games
She was the teacher at her school. ..
Brijraj is a greedy man
Living in intoxication
Running to his Maya
To find his desire..
The quaint Komal
Always wanting the best
For the sake of a Devgarh name
Dadisa is worldly wise...
She can read everyone like a book
She's nobodys' fool.




I got a bit carried away guys with this. I hope you enjoy this one. šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey!! How u dear?ā¤ļø
You write amazingšŸ˜‰
I loved it!!!šŸ‘
It Looks like you've got some talent my dear!😃
Do write more soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey jagz šŸ¤—how r u???😳
a poem on dadisašŸ˜†
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i think next u will write for jagat 🤣🤣🤣jokes apart🤣
now coming to the point😳


Always wanting the best for everyone
Sweet adorable and kind
She commands respect
In her family. ..
soo true she wanted the best for everyone and tht brijraj😔 wanted bad for everyone..specially for manyata😔
She can be clever at times
With the help of beloved Uday
i used to love the team of uday and dadi...how they used to plan for making moniya princess manyata😊also making manyata agree to marry uday😳 she was the cupid of manveer😳😃

As for Jai
She can see through her games
j😔 nasty games🤪...to seperate manveer 😔 i used to hate j and akash 😈this j made dadisa to go coma😭

Brijraj is a greedy man
Living in intoxication
Running to his Maya
To find his desire..
no cmnts on tht uncle🤢 🤣

The quaint Komal
Always wanting the best
For the sake of a Devgarh name
komal a sweet and adoreable maa😳but she wanted to make monash together as she is a maa so she want her daughter to be happy😳no prob komal aunty😃 manveer were meant to be together🄳
Dadisa is worldly wise...
She can read everyone like a book
She's nobodys' fool.
really true...

how do u write such a good poems
my cmnt is this clown🤔 / this pig 🐷 in frnt ur writing🤣🤣am proud of u my frnd šŸ¤—
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you beautiful friends for all ur comments. Watch this space for poems on Komal, Briraj, Giriraj, Unati and Vijay.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Perfectly done!

SuperbšŸ‘

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