-:: A TaaRey TS - Unsaid Feelings ::-chp 3 at pge 6 pms sent - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing update
Please continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
what ever happened last night... and had a huge argument with all her friends
and after talk to her mom she realized what had happen and soon had send a text long
message to both her friends and think what to send rey in message...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Superub update
Taani being soo stubborn
Loved the way she said sorry to both her friends
Want to know taani's plan
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
nice update
taani ws literally too rude
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
awesum story ..! 👏

luvd it ..! 👍🏼

update soon .. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing concept
loved both the parts
update soon nd pm me too
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37



"Eyes Check
Nose check
lips check
clothes check
hair check

hmm not bad Taani u r luking really good " she was ready to go at Rey's place she wanted to woo him she was craving to talk to him since ages and there was no better day than today she thought and went to Rey's home.

At Rey's place

she reached at his place and knocked her door she was hell nervous she was nearly unconcious 😆 she was bitting her lips after that she was tapping her foot after 5 minutes of waitng she ringed the door bell so loudly she was about to break the ring in the meantime thankfully Rey came and opened the door. Rey's has mixed reaction on his face, shocked+ happy+ sad😆

There was a akward silience Taani broke it

"wat took so long to open the door ??" she asked normally

" I was in bathroom sorry??" Rey said nervously due to her famous anger 😛

" Can I come in ??" Taani asked with a stern face.

" ahh sure sorry again??" he said in hell nervous tone

"Its ok" she said with a cute light smile to calm him down.

Rey was happy seeing her smiling so he calmed little bit, Taani sat on the couch, he asked her for some water but taani refused and directly started talking about yesterday.

"Rey whatever happned yesterday..." she sighed and started again Rey was continously staring at her waiting for her to complete.

"It was my mistake sorry for that ??" she said nervously .

Rey was hell shocked and replied imediately " Its ok Taani not ur fault I am also sorry I was really rude to u that day "

There was silence again but Rey broke it this time

" so u came here just to say sorry ??" he spoke

" yeah !! I want some answers from u " suddenly Taani felt like clearing all the MUs she just wanted to speak her mind .

" Rey what do you feel about me ??" she asked without any fear.

Rey was silent everything was happening so fast for him so he stayed silent for sometime Taani took this opportunity and started ranting her feelings.

" Rey I want to confess something " she was nervous but she was not afraid of anyone this time she took a deep breath and started talking.

"I really like u infact what I feel about u is something more than this I love u may be " she closed her eyes tightly and again started

"I feel jelous when u r with that bi*** sorry riya I just cant forget u everytime I try to move on I end up loving u more and more u remember when I wishe u on valantines day u said valantines day is not meant for friends I was so upset then I know I overreact but I cant help it , I have been in love with u since 4 years I know u have a girlfriend and still m confessing this I am such a bit** so please dont answer me just listen to me I know ur answer will be no" she was about to complete but she heard some noise it was Rey who was laughing his ass out on the couch.

Taani was shocked how can someone laugh in such situation so she went upto him n slapped his shoulder he looked at her with big smile on his face Taani was amazed to see his twinkling eyes and joyful smile she missed his smile, Taani was lost and rey took the chance and slapped her on the head and started runing.

He was chasing Taani and finally she caught him and started beating him Rey was moving back n "thappp" he fell on the bed behind him taking Taani with him on the top . They stayed like this for 5 minutes it was taani who came out trace and got up she was about to go but Rey stopped her and held her wrist

" Taani U want to hear wat I feel ??" he whispered in husky voice dangerously close to her .
Taani was feeling as if she passed away 🤣

In the meantime Rey pecked her lips and carressed her face "Taani I missed u so much u know what I started loving u at the moment my eyes fell on you it was 6 years back can u imagine how I lived in those 6 yrs I was craving for u but u started behaving so weirdly suddenly so I thought to move on but I couldn't u know why??" He whispered with his husky voice and carressing her cheeks with one hand and other hand on waist taking her close to him , his each movement was driving her cray she clutched his t-shirt.

" hmm why ??" Taani said in barely audible voice with a moan.

" cause I Love You goregeous" He said again in his husky voice.

Without any delay Taani kept her lips on him and slowly nibbled his lower lip Rey too mimicked her action and responded it was soft yet passionate kiss they were so lost in each other that they forgot to breath Taaani was first to break it .

"Rey wat about Ria??" she asked in worried tone.

"we will face her together " he said with a wink .


They stared each other for a long time and Rey hugged her tightly Taani to responded him with same passion 😊

---The End---

Give ur feedback I hope it was not boring enjoy reading. Please ignore mistakes proof reading is yet to be done.

Ps- I am back with the last chapter currently I am working on Os after that I'll update my untitled ss hope it is fine with you .


Love,
Priyu ❤️



Edited by priyu_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Ale_TaaRey

Lovely Update dear 😃
Taani was really rude 😕
Chalo koi naa 😛
Please update soon n me 😊
Much love: Ale ❤️



Thanks for the feedback 😊

Originally posted by: .CuteKittyCat.

nice one...taani shout on three of them...she is su damn hurt...waiting for next...loved taani and her mom convo.



Thanks :)


Originally posted by: ankita_95

oh my god !

amazing ts till nw.. :))
taani's character is so much different n rightly potrayed. as per the ts.. ;)
continue soon n do pm me too plz :)




Thanks for the feedback 😊 Glad u liked taani's character in d last part u will see her different side 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Taani cry the whole night...
Her checking Rey profiles to see if anything changes from last night was nice lol
She is mad at Rey but still can't help herself and stalk his profiles lol
Taani having fun with Ritz and Sharon was wonderful
It was nice to see her having fun and smiling for a while
Aww poor Rey, he had to face Taani anger again...
Taani leaving and her heated conversation with Sharon was awful
I like that she apologize to the girls after talking to her mom
But I'm waiting to know what she will do to apologize to Rey
Beautiful update, impeccable writing




Oh my god !! ur comments make my day thank you so much for supporting always

u r the best reader I have ever came across 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: my_angel...

Aww poor Rey😭, he had to face Taani anger again...
Taani leaving and her heated conversation with Sharon was awful
I like that she apologize to the girls after talking to her mom
But I'm waiting to know what she will do to apologize to Rey
Beautiful update



Thanks for the lovely comment it seems u r a new reader thanks for giving it a chance 😊

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