Akdha FF: Love Confession

This is my first FF & request to bear if not good enough to enjoy. Look forward your feedback.

Situation:

Jalal got cleared on the Letter MU and feels very sad on knowing about MA & also fells awkward on facing Jodha who he blamed multiple times that she called him to her room, but gave a dhakka.

On other hand Jodha who already started realising her love for Jalal understood that he has no hands on coming to her room and MA was behind all these happenings.

Jalal was sitting in the garden with multiple emotions and Jodha comes there and sits beside him.

Friends! Please advise whether i can continue this...

Bcoz CVs ka to mood hi nahi hai, 😡😡So it is interesting to see how Jallu face her😃😃

pls pls continue...😳😳😳

Jodha was moved by his words very much & replied "No Shehenshah. It was not your mistake & It was mine who was not knowing earlier that my husband was illeterate and sent my message through letter which was base for all these misunderstandings. I was suppose to come to you directly to convey my thanks instead of sending such letter. So do not feel yourself guilt on this issue. Let us forget all the old issues which created sour taste on our life. Let us not discuss this anymore"

Jalal was very happy on Jodha's reply and slow able to come out of his guilty feeling & hesitation.

Jalal was not able to control his emotions anymore with his beloved wife Jodha and slowly hold her hands. But also he was not sure on the reaction which he is going to receive from Jodha. Hence while holding her hands he saw her face for her reaction. To his surprise, she was blushing on this handhold and was not giving any hesitant reaction. He was very happy on seeing her and firmly took her hands and hold with both of his hands.

In fact when MA informed that it is mentioned in the letter that you are in love with me, i was in my own wonderland and more than your dhakka the words of yours mentioning that you have not yet started loving me made me feel depressed. The dhakka of my heart was more than the dhakka of my physical body.

Till now i am not sure whether you have any feeling for me in your heart, but instead of waiting without revealing my heart to you, i felt of telling you all whichever is in my heart before it becomes too late.

it does not mean that you need to accept me immediately, you can take your own time and i am ready to wait for your acceptance of my love."

After telling all this Jalal was not sure on Jodha's reaction and was not ready to get any more dhakka on his heart by rejection from Jodha. Hence he immediately got up from the place & tried to move...

Jalal was standing near the bolcony & seeing the moon where he can see Jodha's face only inside the moon. He was talking himself staring at the Moon " Jodha I Love you! I Love you so much! But not sure what is in your mind. But myself cannot handle your rejection anymore. Please do Love Me Jodha"

Jodha replied from behind "Yes I Love You Shehanshah! I Love you! I will not hurt you any more! You have told your heart, but has not wait to know my heart & so i came here to tell you. I too when i saw your face in the pond on that night gave my heart to you. It was situational & fatel that i behaved as if i have you. But my heart i was loving you only. Even i can say that the hatred which i was showing you initially was just false emotion to cover my love towards you. But that does not last long. On that Dhakka night i misunderstand you that you have come to me out of lust & not of love. Also at that time, my mind was unablet to completely admit my love to you. But now the situation is not live that. I love you so much. I cannot live without you. My life is for you for which i return back to this world from the door of death."

Jalal as well as Jodha was completely happy on both confession and was both in eye lock. Mind was completely freezed and heart was at increased rate beating for each other mutually...

shall i continue...