OS: Enough with the Hidden Past (1)

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Zaina

@CrazyForAshish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Thatz was a fantastic start.. love the story.

Do continue it sooon

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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Hey..this is lovely😊😊..so well written👏👏..extremely brilliant..👏

I too really want Ishita to know what happened in Raman's past and know that he was really loving and caring at one point of time in his life..😳😛😊

Loved your OS😊😊...pleaseee continue writing and update it..would love to see what happen next..😃

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serendipity.

@serendipity.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Thank you very much guys, i might post the 2nd part in a while :)

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chathu dharmawickrama

@chathu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Awesome .. eagerly waithing for Part 2

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645435

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

This is amazingly written... So beautiful

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-ChutkiBajake-

@-ChutkiBajake-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Always loved your creations and now loving your writing ...

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4856

@4856

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

nice one... keep writing more...!! 👏 👏

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Annet and Janet

@loveabletwinz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Awww Reeno!!! We hadn't seen this OS before, but coming to it today was so lovely! We love the idea of the OS and your style of writing! I imagine that Ishita finding out about Raman's past will be just as emotional on screen too! You wrote it so well, yaar! And you wrote so well about how Raman internalizes all his feelings and he doesn't share it with anyone, and even if he shares it with Mihir, he can still be so restricted. I am sure Ishita got a glimpse into the old Raman from the photographs she was looking at, and I can imagine that she couldnt' find any similarities between the old Raman and the new Raman. I hope Ishita's love can melt the cold hearted Raman.

Will you write a part two? Please do :D We would love to read :D