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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini_s

lovely update.. so emotional... I'm glad that both took a step..

Thanks a lot!

Originally posted by: neha2013g

awesome update... loved it... finally khushi realized

Thank you!

Thanks!

Originally posted by: sfghfj

awesome update. loved it

Thanks!

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...Da update was sad but da ending was perfect...adorable...Sooo happy Khushi stopped Arnav...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm

Thank you so much! Don't worry..next update is happy happy..lol...

Thansk!

Originally posted by: Aishaqaiser

Absolutely brilliant!!!!!
U penned every emotion beautifully!!!!

Simply loved it...

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: luvbug

lovely!!!!!!! finally khushi stopped Arnav from leaving... aww poor Amby and Adi ...now they will be one happy family!

Thank you! Yep..he's here to stay and that second wedding is coming up!

Thank you!

Thanks!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you

Originally posted by: Akorshi

outstanding update...

khushi stopped him...

khushi determined for second chance...

update asap...

Thank you so much sweets!

Originally posted by: flowers4u

awe such a wonderful update...loved it ...super cute...continue soon

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe

Awesome update

Loved it <3

Thanks for the pm

Thanks a lot <3

Originally posted by: Spoonai

Aww I loved the update, it's time the have a happy family life and Arnav not screwing up things again

Thanks! Yeap..its time for them to unite and become one big happy family...

Originally posted by: supervin76

This is an awesome FF. I just caught up with all the updates. It's beautiful and very very believable. I love the way you have shaped up both Arnav and Khushi in this story. It's wonderful writers like you who have helped keep up the Arshi magic alive for fans like us. thank you so much. You now have another loyal fan in me.

Thank you so much! I had been very nervous when I started this story but the readers have been very supportive and motivating throughout! I shall continue writing with Arshi in my stories...I refuse to part with them...lol...and I'm glad I have another loyal reader...that's always the best reward for us writers...Thank you. :)

Originally posted by: PixieFlame

Loved it! :)

She's in love with him! :')

Thanks! Yeap...she has been for a while but now she's just admitting it to herself. ;)

Originally posted by: spvd

part 44
awesome dear...
excellent...
Khushi is disturbed...
and Arnav he wants Khushi to stop him at least the kids...
Amber is so affected and Amy too...
good Khushi has stopped him...
lovely...
cont soon dear...

Thank you sweets! Amber is a typical daddy's girl and even though she doesnt know that he's her dad, she's reacting this way...imagine when she finds out that he is the father she has wanted so badly...

Originally posted by: sivatharshini

Fantastic update !!! just SUPERB love it

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Uzii

Wow fabulous update,it was so so emotional tht I had tears i my eyes when I read the children part tht they were feeling sad for their buddy,really very nice.

Thank you so much! I should have given my usual tissue warning at the start of the update...lol...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: seeta_naips

just so great that she realizes that she is in love with him again

Thank you! And yeah...she had to realize sooner or later, right?

Originally posted by: kkyajo

AMAZING, AWESOME N WOBDERFUL

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: faffy

Started reading your FF yesterday...I don't have adequate or appropriate words to express the impact your writing has had on my mind and heart.

Its a story that makes you traverse through the highs and lows of life, ups and downs of relationships and heights and depths of emotions - taking the reader along this journey as an integral part. I cried, I smiled, I laughed, I cursed, I prayed, I hated, I loved, I screamed - you drained me of all emotions with your genius strokes. You have painted a story of mammoth proportions both in terms of the sensitivity of the subject and insights into the human mind. The dilemmas and challenges of life have been dealt with such intensity that you often leave the reader speechless and breathless!

You must, I implore, publish your work for the reading pleasure of a larger audience...this is too precious to be confined to a few of us. I can't thank you enough for embarking on this profound literary journey. I have so much more to thank you for but this is too public a place to do so...my years of work on gender violence often found voice in these pages...

Honestly speaking, right now I am so humbled by your comment that I don't even know what to say..lol. 'Thank you' doesnt feel adequate enough to express the gratitude I feel but Thank you. :)😳

When I started this story, I was apprehensive about it...its a sensitive topic and its nearly impossible to look at the offender in such situations in another light...I, of course, don't support rapists in any way but I guess my goal with this story was to show the power of repentance, guilt, heartbreak, and more importantly love and forgiveness😳...people often underestimate the implications of true regret/repentance of the person who made a mistake just like people take the word "sorry" too lightly these days when really, that apology and the forgiveness that may follow can do wonders in some cases.


And another big reason was to give a perspective that with enough support and self-confidence, the woman who went through something so horrendous can emerge as a survivor, stronger than before, rather than a victim. In our society, unfortunately, women are held responsible for these things because "they must've provoked the man"...and I am strictly against that. I'm a big believer of woman power myself and I've seen a friend go through this and emerge as a strong woman who refused to let her past bring her down...its just a vision I have, I guess and wanted to share it.😳

Publish my work for a larger audience??😲 Again, I'm humbled that you think so that I should try but I don't think that I'm nearly as good enough as the wonderful authors out there...that's along the fact that I have absolutely no clue on how to go on about trying to get published..lol😳

Again, I can't thank you enough for your kind and generous words...you have just made my day and I can only hope that I continue to live up to the expectations you guys, as readers, have of me. :)😃

Thank you!

Originally posted by: P4rveen12

Sorry for the late comment as I was doing a happy dance for the past 5 days, lol. lol...well...I hope you've rested well because I'm sure that after the next update you'll be doing that happy dance again...(after you throw a chappal at me, of course)

Thank you so much for dedicating this beautiful update to me, it means so much.You deserve more than that for the kind of support you've shown me 🤗

I absolutely loved the update, it was amazing, brilliant, superb, fantastic and simply beautiful yet very emotional. Thank you so much hun!

Awww love the fact Khushi loved the sound of the laughter between Arnav and the kids,Who wouldn't love Arnav's laughter's sound?? I know I love it. 😆

So Khushi looking at the mangalsutra remembered Arnav's words from the night before and she started to have doubts and was scared to have another heart break.Yeap..she's still got her demons to fight...

Arnav noticed Khushi being quiet and decided to question her but love the way he did not pressurise her and khushi's kiss was so unexpected but so beautiful, tender and I think it was more for assurance, comfort and trust. I agree...besides...given that she always gives him the space, I thought it was only fair for him to leave her alone until she decided to talk about it...and arent you glad he didn't interfere and that she admitted she's in love with him on her own?😉

It was so sad when Arnav told the kids he was leaving, ambers reaction bought a tear to my eye.Imagine how attached she will be to him once she finds out that he's her dad...😃

The emotional goodbyes and hugs were sad, especially when he hugged Khushi as they were both trying to be strong. I know I kinda went ott there and he wasn't leaving the country or anything but it involved kids whose reactions are always exaggerated and a woman in love...lol..

I love the fact you included this part in the update with Arnav leaving as it made Khushi realise what Arnav means to her and you wrote and expressed her feelings, emotions and her love for him to perfection. Yeah...from personal experience I know that you dont realize someone/something's worth until you're about to lose them/it or if you've already lost them/it...so again...jsut one of my personal experiences in the story..like many others...I guess its my way of adding my touch to the story...

Love the way Khushi went and hugged him and stopped him from leaving, there conversation was so sweet and adorable. Yeah...but now I feel like that scene lost its effect for me since I remembered that the scene had happened in IPK...

I absolutely loved, loved, loved, loved, loved the update, Thank you thank you thank you!😳

I think you have excelled at your writing skills in this update as the update was written to perfection and exceptionally well,Even though I say so myself, I notice my growth as a write throughout my FFs too! Like they say...practice makes perfect, right?😉

The update was a brilliant read,

Thanks for the PM,

P.S. You forgot the tissue warning, it's okay as I already had tissues with me as I'm not feeling well and don't worry the tears were sad tears but soon turned into happy tears at the end. I did forget the tissue warning! Oh wells...just to make up for it...I have TWO warnings in the next updates...lol...I think you'll like them both.😛

Edited by love_iqbal_khan - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnjuRish

happy dance ...sorry sweets tooo much works comments have bben late or nocomments i guess for the other FF ,Forgive me yaar bas one more month pls pls

Happy dance into the next update too.😉 and no worries hun...no need to ask for forgiveness, come on! You take out precious time to read the story and that's enough for me.😳

Originally posted by: LadyR

Tears galore, the kids are trying to act so strong but deep down when a connection has been made on so many levels, how do you let go. The twins look up-to Arnav so much, one can only imagine , hopefully their immense joy upon knowing he is their Father, the missing link to their family chain. Not taking away from Khusi at all, she has done an absolutely amazing job raising them.

It takes a lot of immense coourage which Khushi does not lack at all, to take a leap of faith and move forward, but on occasion one simply knows, why not grab the moment for what it is, my heart was at bursting point till Khushi went and grabbed Arnav's arm.

Their steps closer to happiness means our steps to this amazing story are ending...

Happy tears galore for the next update.😉 I forgot the tissue warning that I usually put up...lol...and you're right...their connection with Arnav runs deeper than they realize and its part of the reason why its particularly difficult for them to let him go so easily...they dont have that same kind of bond with Angad, whom they've known for years! But yes, when they do find out that Arnav is their dad...that bond is only going to get stronger...and like you said...it wont take anything away from Khushi but Arnav will be added in as the missing link in the chain...😳 I agree...the uncertainty of the future will always be there...because the future is always uncertain...the present isnt...you have the facts in front of you but even so...most people worry too much about what might happen in the future rather than focusing on what they need right at that moment...

And yeah...its an unfortunate relationship but every step ArHi take towards their happily ever after, we take a step towards the end.

Originally posted by: -Farwa_Ibrahim-

Chapter 43

Not only Khushi even I m sooo happy that he spent the night sith her in her bedroom on his own making a decision himself. So he wake up the kids n came back to hug her ahsin thats a double development means he didn't want her to feel empty when she aould wake up so he came back not to leave the empty space. Now when he was sleeping with the girl of nightmare the cure of his nightmare how could he had one. Awreee the kids sorry was so cute n adorable I just loved it totally. Aweee the kitchen scene was sooo cute loved it both r at so much ease now. oh he is all healed now I m sad... he will leave the house... Waooo so he is going to agaim ask her what will b her reply really loved the update.

yeap...he's finally becoming bold and making his own decisions without asking for permission every step of the way...he knows what she needs and wants now and that always helps. as most couples/families would have it...there are certain routines and traditions or habits...and needless to say that Arnav-Khushi have them...Amby-Adi-Arnav have them...and all of them together have fallen into a routine as a family...The children's apology was truly just Arnav's way of teaching them something as a father...Khushi would have forgiven them without all that but he, speaking from experience, wanted to teach them that sometimes you have to work for forgiveness..😳

Originally posted by: -Farwa_Ibrahim-

chapter 44
This chapter gave me mix feeling I wa frustrated at the start though I can't blame khushi for anything then I got sad ery sad tht Arnav is going then I got angry why is khushi not stopping him n y is he not saying he doesn't want to go bjt Katie I love u for da end really. . loved it

I know...Khushi's turmoil may have seemed frustrating and odd considering that she's fine with sharing the bed and kisses with him but she had trouble wrapping her head around the possibility of a future...but all of that was just her being overwhelmed with her feelings and denying them/fighting them...when she admitted what she felt, everything fell in place, right?😉

Originally posted by: --MISHTEE--

CAUGHT UP WITH D STORY

READ IT IN ONE GO

IT WAS AWESOME

PLS UPDATE SOON

Thank you so much Mishtee!😳

Originally posted by: srahs

Awww superb update
Finally she's able to find answer to her queries

Yeap! Finally she had reached out and grabbed her happiness!😉

Edited by love_iqbal_khan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Gotta give u a bow Katie, that was one surreal yet scintillating update. The teasing glint in Arnav's voice when he asked her if the kiss cheered her up was so cute. I couldn't control the grin which became permanently plastered on my face throughout this update.
When Arshi entered their room to console the kids. The way Amber was crying and Aditya was rocking her was a really genuine and concerned act. It conveyed a lot of feelings and emotions. These kids symbolize the general bond in siblings. Willing to be the pillar of support through thick and thin. Even though Amber is the more stern and Aditya was the more jovial one, I liked the play of emotions and character swap. It fit perfectly.

The way Aditya jumped up and down when Arnav said he was staying and said sheepishly that he wanted to cry really made me happy. Initially in ur last update, I remember complaining to u that Aditya does not really share a strong bond with their buddy. The kiss Amber gave their parents was sweet. I like this Anjali and Aman, they know when to not disturb a family unlike the ipkknd wala Anjali and Aman who were hell bent on disturbing the rabba ve's. Lol.

I really like the garden scene. The way Khushi was subtly hinting a kiss and taking slow steps to showing him what she wanted was hilarious. N finally when he took the lead, it was cute how she followed his actions. I had to let out a deep breathe when she groaned at the button not coming off. Initially I thought she would bolt at the first instance of sex or any further intimacy but she has truly put the past behind. I remember when they had their first kiss, I demanded another passion filled kiss. This stood up and went past my expectations. 😳

Them sleeping together brings so much peace. It always reminds me of that scene when Khushi sleeps in her taekwondo poses in ipkknd. Although this Khushi is slightly more ladylike in sleeping mannerisms. Lol. When he said I love u, it is good she decided to open up her heart when he proposed. He sweet dreams was tooo sweet. Awww I love this Arnav.

N lastly Daddy???? The kids know??? Well we would know in the next update. I am guessing they found some wedding photo or something long time ago but decided not to confront their parents about it and continued the Buddy relationship. Although that leaves me stumped...would five year old kids share that amount of thoughtfulness...I would doubt not. I am sure my assumption is wrong as that scenes really too intellect for two small kids. But this is Arshi's kids we are talking about where anything and everything is possible. Two more weeks for ur next update. Long wait but u would make it worthwhile. Hopefully it passes by fast. I kinda like this cliffhanger. Leaves a lot of guesses.
Edited by Arnav1Khushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
love d update
nd dis cliffhanger
is not tat scary u know 😊
pls update soon 😊
Edited by --MISHTEE-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG!!! How...Who???!!! Daddy?

Katie you really are evil..! how cud u do this to us? i have a zillion questions in my head...who found out? was it Amby or Adi? i thk it ws amby...hw did they find out? did khushi tell thm or did they accidently overhear sme convo betn ..dunno anjali-aman or angad-kripa? or ws it sme photo? what?? this cliffhanger s driving me insane...
its the worst cliffhanger ever..

i have felt d need even before to learn to read minds but today i desperately wish i cud read urs..its so unfair katie...

plz plz update b n b nxt n postpone AY n KAS..i love those stories too..ibut this has d worst cliffhanger today..

okay i am sorry or d whining..gettin bck to d current update..it ws fantastic as usual..

you have described d changing dynamics in d couples relationship really well..

my favourite scene widout a doubt has been adi holdi his sister while she cried...its on top 5 list of fantastic scenes written by katie...

once again you r truly amazin...you weave a magic thru ur words...


gotta go nw

jules

PS: i am supposed to b studyin hard for my upcomin exams..n nw i am gona b driftin into d B N B world more often than normal thks to this cliffhanger...
Edited by jules25 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yipee Arnav stayed back and the kids are happy also
That was brave of Khushi to ask him to stay back
Poor Arnav living dual lives and jobs
That must be tough

Daddy? Where did that come from?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update! 😃Loved it! Cliffhanger..

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