Originally posted by: P4rveen12
Sorry for the late comment as I was doing a happy dance for the past 5 days, lol. lol...well...I hope you've rested well because I'm sure that after the next update you'll be doing that happy dance again...(after you throw a chappal at me, of course)
Thank you so much for dedicating this beautiful update to me, it means so much.You deserve more than that for the kind of support you've shown me 🤗
I absolutely loved the update, it was amazing, brilliant, superb, fantastic and simply beautiful yet very emotional. Thank you so much hun!
Awww love the fact Khushi loved the sound of the laughter between Arnav and the kids,Who wouldn't love Arnav's laughter's sound?? I know I love it. 😆
So Khushi looking at the mangalsutra remembered Arnav's words from the night before and she started to have doubts and was scared to have another heart break.Yeap..she's still got her demons to fight...
Arnav noticed Khushi being quiet and decided to question her but love the way he did not pressurise her and khushi's kiss was so unexpected but so beautiful, tender and I think it was more for assurance, comfort and trust. I agree...besides...given that she always gives him the space, I thought it was only fair for him to leave her alone until she decided to talk about it...and arent you glad he didn't interfere and that she admitted she's in love with him on her own?😉
It was so sad when Arnav told the kids he was leaving, ambers reaction bought a tear to my eye.Imagine how attached she will be to him once she finds out that he's her dad...😃
The emotional goodbyes and hugs were sad, especially when he hugged Khushi as they were both trying to be strong. I know I kinda went ott there and he wasn't leaving the country or anything but it involved kids whose reactions are always exaggerated and a woman in love...lol..
I love the fact you included this part in the update with Arnav leaving as it made Khushi realise what Arnav means to her and you wrote and expressed her feelings, emotions and her love for him to perfection. Yeah...from personal experience I know that you dont realize someone/something's worth until you're about to lose them/it or if you've already lost them/it...so again...jsut one of my personal experiences in the story..like many others...I guess its my way of adding my touch to the story...
Love the way Khushi went and hugged him and stopped him from leaving, there conversation was so sweet and adorable. Yeah...but now I feel like that scene lost its effect for me since I remembered that the scene had happened in IPK...
I absolutely loved, loved, loved, loved, loved the update, Thank you thank you thank you!😳
I think you have excelled at your writing skills in this update as the update was written to perfection and exceptionally well,Even though I say so myself, I notice my growth as a write throughout my FFs too! Like they say...practice makes perfect, right?😉
The update was a brilliant read,
Thanks for the PM,
P.S. You forgot the tissue warning, it's okay as I already had tissues with me as I'm not feeling well and don't worry the tears were sad tears but soon turned into happy tears at the end. I did forget the tissue warning! Oh wells...just to make up for it...I have TWO warnings in the next updates...lol...I think you'll like them both.😛
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