Sunn Leyna 2........Rajeev-Aamna....Sharim-Visaal FF

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys, I already read many RA fanfictions, many SK fanfics but never read SV fanfic...so for this time I wanted to do something differant, so this is the first time ever Sharim-Visaal fanfic!!!
I personnally loved them as I love SK, they were both superb!!
So dont worry I'm personnally lucky that even by living in Paris I have the CD of the serial...but I know some of you are not as lucky as me, and couldnt even Watch it on TV so I have a resume of what happen in the serial before, I know it wont be like if you watch it but it will work I hope
So charcters intro:

Afzal:

He is the step fathger of Sharim, but he loves him as his own son...He was in love with A girl called Sabia, they were about to get marrie'd when wedding day she escape with a rich guy...
He would be died this time if his sister, Sharim's mom havent comforted him...
So when she and her husband dies, he promised himself to nevere let Sharim feel the absence of a father...and he keep himself busy in his bro in-law's businnes to which he is verry attached..

Sharim:


He lost his both parents in a car accident when he was kid, he lives with his mamoun who he consider as his father, he is full of life, really kind of sweet guy, he love to enjoy with friends but he easy get angry and anxious about something when he is attached to it, He has many GF till...
He is successor of his family's businees empire

Danial:

Father of Visaal and husband of Sabia...Danial is A verry arrogant rich guy...we dont know why he is so much arrogant he never talk softy with his wife and his daughter..he beat them when he want and stay all his time in businnes, he is so much rich but always want more...he consider himself the best and never cared about others...till...

Sabia:


Mother of Visaal and wife of Danial, she belive to a middle class family who live in Pakistan...but when her father decide her to get married to Afzal...a guy who cant walk properly and poor this time, she decide to escape with a rich guy who she thinked can give her a&ll the hapinees she deserve but she soon get aware to the fact that she was wrong because maybe Afzal was poor but he loved her so even if he wouldnt have food for himself he would heve find out for her...but Danial can give everything which is buy of money but what he cant give to her is the love she need...After that she adjusted herself to her new life...his dad died because of the sadma, her mom become mad, and her sister's life is ruined...

Visaal:


She grow up seeing her parents fighting, and her mom beating by her dad...to escape to all this she aslo lives most with friends, usually go out of town...she become a gal with attitude, heartless because she never knew the meaning of love till...
She is a proffessional photographer that's the second reason why she is usually out of town

Nani:

She is the mother of both Sabia and Madia, she become mad after her daughter escape and her husband's death...but today too she has an hope inside her heart that her daughter would come back someday, and she is really anxious about little things like to be alone in the house, to not lock the door...

Madia:

She is Sabia's little sister, after all what happen her dad make her married to someone old as him, but soon her dad and this person died...she was pregnant that time...all the responsabilities of her mother and her daughter were on her shoulders...she leave her dad's house because she wasnt able to pay the rent of and she buy a little 3 room house in a poor street...now she try and lives happily but inside her heart she is really tired of her life...and hate her sister for that

Rubab:


She is the daughter of Madia...she is really nice person at heart and does her best to comfort and help her mother...She has a best friend, Rani who is also their neighbour and she is really close to her, she is shearching for a job till in 2 first episods of serial she found in Afzal's compagny which is internationnal so she work in Pakistan and dont need to go Malaysia till...

Mamoun:

Its the neighbour of Madia, he is really irresponsible, father of Rani, he lost his wife, bro and sisiter in law years ago but he never showed the pain of that and sometimes he is funny when he dont understand the english of youngs and all...He is in love with the mother of Mec's best friend

Rani:

She is the best friend of Rubab and the only daughter of Mamoun, she loves mec secretly and think that like her and his marriage get arranged at their birth...so she dont have to worry but she is behenji type in her mind and dont know what zamana is today...

Mec(Mehmood):

he lost his parents young, he lives with his mamoun but still call him mamoun and is really rese'rved and he loves Rubab...

Shani(garage boy):

He lost his father young and was against to that his mom re-marry with mamoun but finally agreed...he is a kid...but has mind of somone of 30 years...he is really mature...

Shani's mom:

She is a good mother who cares a lot for her son, and she is in love with mamoun

Visaal's friends(who some are Sharim's GF)


Imraan:

Sharim's friend, he has important role in story because he always supported Sharim and had helped him to make Visaal fall in love with him...and in the story they first exanged their identity

I think that's all for characters

Story:
first Sharim sees Visaal in a business party, he think about her all the night but Imraan told him that she is his business rivals's daughter, but Sharim doesn't listened him he meets Visaal in a disco and give her Imraan's identity, Visaal who know that this boy is not Imraan but Sharim start to goes out with him not letting him concentrate on a important project, The presentation day she call him aur natak kar rahi thi rone ka and she sayd to him "agar tum nahin aye to pata nahin kya ho jaye gha, mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai"...Sharim was worried for her so he don't goes at the presentation and goes were she has told him to meet but she goes at presentation and winn while Sharim was very worried and scared waiting for her. Phir some days later after his dad comfort him and tell him that "you must get your love, meri tarra maat karna" as he loved sabia but she married Danial, Visaal also start missing him and getting attached to him, They both goes for a "before marriage honeymoon" in Lankhavi, Visaal apologises to him, He forget her and expresses his love for her she sayd i'm with you hum yeh jang tor ke rahe ghein...and a lot of romance scene, Then after reaching home Visaal come to know that Danial has beating her mom, and Sharim come to know by his dad about the whole story: Afzal and Sabia were about to get married but at the wedding day she escape from there with denial, Sharim sayd that the lady whom he loves his Sabia's daughter, Afzal agree with the marriage
Then while Sharim was on a project with Mec, Visaal has tried to told her parents that se loves Sharim, but her mom slap her and her dad sayd that bohot bura hoga agar you goes meet him the next time, again Danial blackmail the manager and get the project from Sharim, he was very hurt by this as mec and him worked very hard for this project, he calls Visaal but she didn't pick up because her dad sees the number and glares at her he also tol her(dil karta hai usko aur uske baap ko goli mar doun), so visaal didn't pick it up, When Visaal was alone he again call her he was very angry and sayd I want to meet you now, Visaal goes, Sharim told her that you again cheated me you just pretend to be in love with me for having the project Visaal try to explain him but he not wanted to listen her so she hugs him from his back, When she comes home her papa was again beat up her mom that why do you let visaal meet this guy, Visaal stop him and tell him that she loves Sharim and She will marry him, her dad got more angry and says that if you goes and meet Sharim again I will divorce your mom, Sabia Visaal ke age haat jorti hai ke forgot sharim, Visaal sayd to her dad that ok I will never meet him again, later she broke down and tell her mom that she spoil her life by her own hands, she stop going out eating...she just lock herself in her room the whole day
Sharim feels again cheated and start drinking and saying very deeply things that we can feel his pain, one night he was very drunks and falls on the ground hurting himself, Visaal who was sleeping awake with a jerk, feels something wrong so she clls him but he didn't pick it up because he was sleepin or lying in unconscious, Visaal not relived cry all the night. His dad seeing this arranged his marriage with Rubab, without telling it to Sharim, he told her that she is Visaal's cousin and a good employee in my company she comes there for some day you take care of her, Sharim goes busy with Rubab who was falling in love with him. One day Visaal has high fever so she imangines Sharim there and tell him"main tumhare beghair marr jaounghi plz mujhe yahain se le chalo" while she was talking alone as Sharim is in her ming her papa comes there she sayd "Sharim ko kuch maat karna" uska naam sunte hi he get angry and start again his "job" but her mom come at the right time and stop him later while her mom dad were in office Visaal try to commit suicide by cutting her nerves, The doctor says I cant do anything she is calling for some Sharim only he can save her. Sharim got to know he misunderstand her goes there but his dad stop him and tell him that he must wedd Rubab, Rubab comes to know about all this and tells Afzal that I will not marry Sharim "Main aapni hi behen ka khoun nahi kar sakti". Sharim goes hospital and save her Afzal and Danial arranged their marriage and the day before the wedding Sharim comes by the window in Visaal's room they were chating Rubab also join them but she was a bit schocked that Sharim comes from the window and secratily meet Visaal.
The end here
Other story is that Rani and Mec finally get married, as mamoun adn Shani's mom, and one times when Afzal had gone pak, he promised Nani that he will bring Sabia to her soon
Sabia get to know by Afzal the condition of her sis

Sharim-Visaal:
























Sharim-Mec

Sharim-Rubab



Rubab-Mec

So i am continuing from here next time...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting start..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Imane!
Finally you have posted the character intro of the FF..I really loved it specially Sharim and Visaal!. You know..I have heard so much about Sunn Leyna via India-forums but never gotten the opportunity to see it but luckily I have seen some episodes in Youtube, the characters are extremely refreshing, realistic but yet very interesting! No wonder , Rajeev has an amazing script sense as far as his movies were concerned be it Shaitaan, Left Right Left, Table no 21 etc. I'm sure for those who havent seen Sunn Leyna..people will have the opportunity to know about their jodi and their journey through this FF so thank you so much!!..I'm really looking forward to read the upcoming parts of the SL..and off course Visaal-Sharim! ..Please do continue soon dear and PM me!😊Wishing this FF all the very best , I'm sure this will be also a rocking one!
Edited by VishakaGal12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u are posting the original story of Sunna LeyNa...
have seen the show online...
nice story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

interesting start..😊

Thank u dear....
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: VishakaGal12

Hey Imane! Hey sweety!

Finally you have posted the character intro of the FF.yeah finally i dont have others things to do it's holidays n i'm becoming bore.I really loved it specially Sharim and Visaal!.Thanks for loving it dear You know..I have heard so much about Sunn Leyna via India-forums but never gotten the opportunity to see it but luckily I have seen some episodes in Youtube, yes but u live in india, I think u can find out the cd, I have it even In France so I dont think india is more far away of pak that Paris😉 the characters are extremely refreshing, realistic but yet very interesting! No wonder , Rajeev has an amazing script sense as far as his movies were concerned be it Shaitaan, Left Right Left, Table no 21 etc. Yes he is da best for sure... I'm sure for those who havent seen Sunn Leyna..people will have the opportunity to know about their jodi and their journey through this FF Well I hope that I can do this deal. so thank you so much!!.Your most welcome dear.I'm really looking forward to read the upcoming parts of the SL..and off course Visaal-Sharim! Glad you liked ..Please do continue soon dear and PM me!😊 cont soon I donno when but I'm having positive responses for now and I'll surely pm u Wishing this FF all the very best , I'm sure this will be also a rocking one! Thank u so much dear!!!you are surely really supportive wht yours comments

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi readers!! thanks very much for ur lovely comments i ll post the 1st part as soon as possible but conseil de classe is coming and 3rd trimestre look really hard this year but i started a new FF and i ll manage between collge n this FF my parents garde plaaning also change so i will do my best to post the next part this wednesday...but if i couldnt then it will in two weeks...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting .reading your description i want to watch the show

i m pleasantly surprised to know rajeev n amna did another show together .

could you tell me number of epi's in the show , did the show had happy ending.

so i will try to find it online..

i m interested to read to take on story too. do continue



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Originally posted by: manveerrox

interesting .reading your description i want to watch the show

i m pleasantly surprised to know rajeev n amna did another show together .

could you tell me number of epi's in the show , did the show had happy ending.

so i will try to find it online..

i m interested to read to take on story too. do continue




thanks very much yes it has happy ending...actually in the serial they both were bf, gf...i think u can find some episodes on YouTube by writing sunn leynna episode 1...rajeev enter in the second episode n Aamna later because her character was out of town.there is only 31 episodes..im really happy to have a new reader Thanks n Welcome to my FF
Edited by Imanezara - 11 years ago
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Hey guys!! as I promised tody is wednesday so Im writng the part...

Sunn Leyna 2: Part 1:

The last few days were full of emotions...the fear...the wainting n most ..the happinees...
Sharim and Visaal finaally got married today...
It was 11pm and all the family were in Afzal House...all were sitting in the hall...Sharim(wearing the wedding kurta he had wear in Kth(white one)) and sitting quitely on the sofa..beside Visaal...He was quiet but we could easily see happinees on his face...same with Visaal(wearing the same wedding dress as in KTH)
Afzal: bohot maza aya yaar really...
Danial: haan it's has been long time I didnt enjoyed this much..
Rubab: uncle, abhi to kal ki party rehti hai..
Sabia: haan kal humari compagnies ka murger jo hai...
Imran: acha to I think aab main chalta houn...
Visaal: are nahi tum behto...why so early going?
Sharim: eerrm...Visaal jane do naa...we both have load of things to do...
Visaal(blushing): Sharim!!! how can you...
Sharim: oh please! I know honey that you are just waiting for that...
Rubab: yeh tum new hubby-wife me kya chal raha hai hume bhi sunao...
Sharim erm...woh...actually main Visaal se keh raha tha ke...
Rubab: ke...??
Visaal: keh woh kal ki party ke arrangement ke liye..erm..flowers..haan flowers kaisse lagwaye
all laugh
Afzal: chalo hum bhi inhe akela chor hi dete hai...Sharim betta Visaal ke saath tum upar jao aur usse apna room dekhwao..
Sharim get up and extend his hand for Visaal
Sharim(naughtly): to chalein..

Visaal put her hand in his and says
Visaal(cutely): okay...
they both were walking hand in hand like perfect couple...
All were so happy to see them like that
Afzal: hhmmhumm aisse nahi...
Sharim turn to look at his dad
Sharim: aisse nahi matlab??
Afzal: you have to carry your new wedded wife to her new room
Sharim apne baalon me haat pherta hai to hide his shyness
Visaal was suprised
He then look at Visaal who was looking at him "what are you waiting for"
Sharim come towards her and slowly carry her up in his arms
Visaal proudly put her arms arround his neck and he walk upstairs...
Danial: kitne ache lagte hai dono saath me
Sabia: haan...main bohot khush houn ke meri beti ko uska pyaar mil gaya...
Rubab: they are just made for each other...acha uncle(talking to Afzal) main aab se Sabia anty ke ghar shift ho jati houn...iss tara main unke saath zaid waqt guzar sakoun ghi lautne se pehle
Afazal: sure betta...as you wish..
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Upstairs:
Visaal is sitting on the bed...
Sharim's green room is fully decorate with flowers...
He sit beside her after closing the door..

Sharim(with so much love): Visaal..
She look up in his eyes..

and they both just look into their eyes for a while then Sharim finally speak
Sharim(with love): I'm so happy that today my dream come true...first I was alone it seemed impossible but then Imran was with me...phir most important you...mujhe tumhara saath mila...papa ka saath...lekin phir main again alone ho gaya..mujhe laga tha you cheated me but...but when I come to know that you just tried to kill yourself for me...I was feeling so guilty...it was my fault...I doubted on you I'm sorry...
Visaal put her finger on his lips...her touch just eloctrocite Sharim...
Visaal: It was not your fault..forgot all that okay...and let's think it was your vengence on me because I cheated you before...so now hisab barabar...
He kiss her finger which make her shiver...she remove her finger
Sharim: okay but I'm still angry on you...
Visaal(cutely like a baby): whyyy?
Sharim: because you tried to kill me...
Visaal: no...what are you talking about Sharim??
Sharim: by trying to cuicide...do you realise if something happenend to you how could I'll live...I cant live without you I'll die...sure yeh sochke that you are no more because of me...because I doubted on you...
Visaal: common it's our wedding night and you are saying such things...I knowed you wont let anything happen to me...
Sharim: hhmm wedding nigh ke liye itni jaldi...kya baat hai?? (she blush)...okay but promise me one thing: that you never ever do this again
Visaal(take his hand in hers): promise...okay now I would like to change...
Sharim: sure I'll help you...
Visaal(smiling): Sharim... I mean where is the washroom...
Sharim: I didnt knew you were this point idiot...there is two doors in this room first from where we come and second??
Visaal: very funny...okay I just come in a while...
She start to go when Sharim says
Sharim: do you want any help??
Visaal turn and say smiling sarcasltly

Visaal: no thanks I'll manage
Sharim(acting like her): okay...if you change your mind I'm free

10mins later she come out wearing a white pyjamas and her hair open...without any jewellry
Sharim was amazied by her beaty he just thought in his mind "she is an angel...no she is my angel"...and he smile
He come towards her
But she says
Visaal: go to change before...and hurry
Sharim: sure babes..
Sharim also come out wering red pyjama
Visaal smile seeing him...
Sharim come and says
Sharim: I love you sweetheart
Visaal: me too
and then at the verry good suprise for Sharim she kiss him on lips...
He look at her
Sharim: hhmm did you practised dear?
Visaal(fed up): shut up!!! jab dekho blahblah...dont you know what you have to do
Sharim: If you insist
He kiss her passionately
Visaal kiss him back and they both fall on bed still kissing each other
She was on top of him and start to unbotten his up
they separate their lips
Sharim roll which make him top of her and pull down her tee-shirt at shoulders and kiss her neck and shoulders...she moan with pleasure...ubbing her hand on his back...exploring his back with her soft hand
Sharim remove off her tee-shirt andkiss her alll over the neck and shoulders Visaal was moaning feeling his lips on her body...he continue to explore her body...he comes to her tummy and kiss her...she moan his name...he kiss her navel...and htne he put the bedsheet over them both...
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Sunrises fall on Malaysia which wake Sharim up
He first get scared to find Visaal so close to him hugging him her head on his cheast
but then he remember and smile he kiss her forhead and rubs his hands on her bare arms feeling her soft and creamy skin...she hides her face more into his bare cheast and he feel her lips n his skin and smile...
He whispers to her
Sharim(with load of love): jaanu wont u wake up...
Visaal: humhun(no)
He hugg her more close to himself feeling her bare skin on his...
She then open her eyes at this feeling and look at him sweetly...
Sharim too look into her eyes...
Sharim: did you have good night
Visaal: yeah...(she yawn cutely)...the best one
Sharim: okay me too...but did I did something wrong?
Visaal: what?
Sharim: I mean sorry if I hurt you you know it was our both first time so I dont...emm hope I didnt...
Visaal: please dont start again...you can never ever hurt me...I know you are saying it for me...but jaanu you didnt do anything wrong and I just loved last night...trust me
Visaal: I love you Sharim!!
Sharim: I love you so much Visaal!!
they both hugs and then there a knock on the door
Sharim: who the hell...ufff...please sweety go naa...
Visaal: but I'm not wearing anything
Sharim: please...
Visaal get up and wear his clothes as she was in hurry...which look too large for her she was looking cute thought Sharim
She open the door
A maid: mam Sir is calling for you both downstairs for breakfast
Visaal: sure we'll be there in half an hour after getting ready okay
The maid: okay mam
Sharim(from the bed): and dont come again to disturb us in morning again!!!
The maid goes head down...
Visaal: you shoudnt have yelled at her like that
Sharim: hhmm you're looking cchoo cute honey
She notice she is wearing his clothes...
Visaal oh! emm sorry I'll just come after taking a shower
Sharim: okay
some time later Visaal come out(in towel)
Sharim couldnt resist
he pick up her and on the bed but Visaal says
Visaal(yelling): what is this leave me and go to take a shower!!!
Sharim(making puppy face): okay...but check the wadrobe there is something for you...
Saying this h rush into washroom and Visaal is suprised to find a wrapped gift
She smile and oppen it...
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here is the first part leave comments guys!!!


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