My Journey Of Dance and Love-KR TS*Completed*

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hey everyone!😛 i'm back with a new work...this is a TS-three shot...and its my first hit to a TS...this story has got a lot of POVs' so confuse mat hojana!😆
i hope u all will like it...plz read further:
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DANCE- my only passion...its not only my passion but infact my career...

when i dance i feel like i'm on the top of the world...when i dance i feel like the world is all

mine...when i dance i feel every minute of my life is beautiful!

and that's what i am feeling even now, while am dancing...

i spinned to the rhythm of the song which was playing...i twirled around and finally

ended my dance with a split...

THUDDD came a sound...

It was him again...my DAD!

he just almost broke the door of my room in which i was dancing...

Dad- kria!!! how many times should i warn you to stop this dance!

i told you that dance is not gonna give anything to you in life!

kr- dad but i love dancing and i can never stop dancing!

dad- u have to stop it kria! Dance can never make your life successful!

and its worthless dancing ...so u better stop this non sense and start

preparing for your engineering exams!

kr- but dad...

thuddd...he again almost broke the door by closing it...

KRIA's POV-

ummm...

This is my life...

I love dancing but my dad dont like me dance! i dont know why but he thinks that life cant be

successful by making dance as your career...infact he hates me seeing dancing!

he always tries to make me feel that dance is nothing!!! i totally deny with this...

i mean dancing is my life yaar..to stop dancing is like..is like to stop living!

ummm...Dad wants me to do my engineering now...he just wants to see me as an engineer

which he thinks that it makes life worthy...but why cant dance be someone's career?

just then..

i got a call from my friend Meghna...

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meg- hey kria ..wassup?

kr- nothing much yaar...kya hua? phone kyu kia?

meg- well, tujhe pata hai there's DID auditions from 15th march!

tum usme participate toh kar rahi ho na?

kr- what? mujhe toh kuch nai pata tha iske baare mein...

bt anyways meghna...dad mujhe allow nai karenge! toh auditions dene ka kya faida?

chodo...

meg- dude tum paagal ho gayi ho..i mean u dance so well...tujhe auditions toh deni hi

chahiye! if u give ur auditions nd agar tum select ho jaati toh i'm sure your dad will accept your dance...kria u have this only chance left with you to prove your dad that dance can be your career! kria go for it...!!!

kr- par meghna agar dad accept nai karenge toh?

meg- kria give it a try...he will accept it..u dont worry about it...ab bas auditions keliye practice kar...

kr- yeah...i think i must agree with you...mein auditions keliye practice karti hoon...bye yaar!

meg- bye...

kr-i think this is my only chance to prove dad wrong...

universe ji...plz sab accha ho!

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REYAANSH MANSION:

utho bhai ...utho!

re- yaar, nisha...mujhe sone de!

nis- nai bhai aap plz utho...mujhe aapse kuch batana hai

re- baad mein batao na!

nis- dance ke baare mein baat karni hai

re- DANCE?

i got up to know that what my 15 year old sis nisha have to tell me about dance?

nis- haan bhai dance...bhai aapko pata hai there's DID auditions starting from

15th March! u know na?

re- nai...i dint know about that...

nis- aapko kahan kuch pata hoga! kaddu!

re- dekh chudail...mujhe kaddu mat bula! tu toh har waqt computer aur tv ke saamne bait thi rehti ho so you must be knowing all this na! padhai ke baare mein kuch puchunga toh u will be like a duffer!

nis- shut up bhai...accha tell are u not gonna participate in the auditions???

re- mein aur part nai lunga? paagal u know that how much i love dancing and to stop

dancing is like...is like to stop living!

nis- yeah bhai...toh auditions ke liye be prepared...u have only 10 more days! and she goes out of rey's room...simultaneously rey sets off to practice for the auditions.

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15th March...

KRIA'S HOUSE

Kria's POV

universe ji plz sab accha ho...meine mom aur dad ko bhi kuch nai bataya...aaj plz mere saath dena!

the door bell rang and my mom had gone to open the door...i peeped from my room to see who it was...and found meghna there...

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mom- arey meghna beti tum...aao andar...

meg- aunty woh meri sister ki birthday party kal hai..so i wanted to call kria for helping me out with the arrangements...can I?

mom- haan zaroor...bas tu bata when will kria be able to come back to home?

meg- she'll be coming within 5pm in the evening...so can i take her now?

kria's mom agrees to it...she calls kria and tells her to help meghna for the party...

kria was confused first but she tried to cover it up.

she agreed to go with meghna...

IN MEGHNA'S CAR-

kr- meghna yeh kya ho raha tha? party and all?

meg- arey aaj tere auditions hai na...so auditions dena keliye yeh sab karna pada...there's no party...it was just that u could give your auditions..agar aunty ko asli reason pata chal gaya toh she wouldn't have sent you...so yeh plan karni padi...

kr- thanks a lot meghna*hugs* chalo ab chalte hai...

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IN REY'S HOUSE-

nis- bhai accha se auditions dena...

rey- haan chudail ..i'll give my best today...tum chinta mat karo...

nis- bhai u have to get selected...i'm so tensed for u...i hope all goes well today...

rey- nishhh...chinta mat kar yaar..u know ur bro will roak it na?

nis- haan...all the best...and ab chalo ur getting late for the auditions...

rey- okay...thanks nishhh!

and he moves...

IN AUDITION ROOM 😆

REY's POV-

It was 10 am aur auditions will be starting from 11am...

all the contestants were so tensed ...some were constantly keeping practicing dance and some kept chanting prayers...

and there was 1 girl who kept chanting something unique...i was a bit far from her so i couldn't exactly hear what she was telling...

after a while her friend got a call and she went away...so i thought i'll talk to her...

i said her a HI...but she didnt reply instead she was busy chanting something like "universe ji"

i kept wondering wat "universe ji" is?

i again said a HI louder...

she finally came back to senses and replied HI...

and i led our convo further...

i- hey i'm reyaansh...u can call me rey

girl- hey...

i-ummm ur name?

she hesitatingly told KRIA...

i thought why is she hesitating to tell her name...

KRIA's POV-

i was tensed for my performance and i had nothing to do but just to chant

univere ji! and there was meghna with me ...but suddenly she got a call and she

had to leave excusing for an urgent work...i continued with my chants...

after a few seconds i heard someone telling a HI to me..but i was just chanting prayers to universe ji...he again said hi...and this time i cudn't omit him...so i told a hi...

i was hesitating..its cuz i was tensed about my auditions

i was scared of dad...and this guy is trying to talk to me...huh

he again asked my name and i replied-

i- KRIA

re- nice name...so how did u come up here...in DID auditions?

he asked again and this time i directly looked into his eyes and i felt as if i knew this guy from ages...

i didnt feel that he is a stranger...so i continued the conversation

i- umm, my friend had suggested me to take part in the auditions so thought i'll give it a try ..u?

re- well, i love dancing and anything related to dance i wont stepback so i'm participating in this too...

i was totally comfortable in speaking with him...we had some chit chats and i really enjoyed talking with him...

i had even shared him about dad...he told that his parents encourage his dance..

how i wish my parents too encouraged my dancing...HUHHH!!

i found rey a smart and a cool guy...he was extremely kind hearted and he supported me after telling about dad...

he advised me to never stop dancing...

and he was handsome too...arghh wat am i talking...so yeah

we kept talking and we knew a lot about each other...

and finally one of the crew members called out my name-

crew- KRIA GHAI?

i- yeah..its me

i stood up fom my place...

crew- its ur turn next to give ur auditions...be ready

i- okay...

i turned at rey...

re- dont worry kria...everything will go well...

i know you will "ROAK" it!

i- ROAK?

re- yeah, thats my style of saying 'ROCK'..😉

i- oh thanks rey...

i said and went to the entrance from where the stage begins...i last time prayed to universe ji..wishing all to be alright and i got upon the stage...

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huhhh...finally wrote the first part!

now guyz tell me how is this TS?

it's my first ever TS...plz do comment on this and tell me whether i'll post up the next part too or not? plz hit the like tab and leave ur valuable comments!😊

-Reshma

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Index:

Part 1 : Above

Part 2 : Pg 3

Part 3: Pg 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres..

haye meri pyaari reshu..

ye kya tha..??? joh bhi tha superb tha..

loved it totally..

aww kriya dad against dance...

aww kriyaansh on DID audition haye maar gyi me..

they both will roak it...:*

haye awsum awsum awsumm..

nd yaa u will too roak it..

ab jaldi next wala update karo..plzz
Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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leshh🤣
finally i am unreshingg🤣
awesome update
totally loved it
hayee krias dad against dancee poor kriyaa
hayee they are going to did audition awesomee
krias dad wants kria to become enginnerr huh
and rey uske behen ko chudail bolta haii lol
finally kr met thank god normal tha
no fight loll
they bth in did they both will rock it like arsha😉
and next update mein unke performance hogee yaay
jaldii update kariyooo aur mujhe pm karooo
and the this update is awesomeee
Edited by ramya.reddy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey!! Dis is really good!!!
Kriya k mom kya kam thi ki uske dad ko bhi dance against kar diya!!!
Aur engineering karani hai usko!!!
Karao karo...phir ye hongi dancing engineer!!!
Uski frnd is grt!!!
DID ke auditions k liye party ka bahana bana k le gai!!!

Aur rey!!! Apni sis ko chudail bolta hai!!! Lolzz!!!
Par chudail behen ki vajah se hi to DID aur kriya ko apni life mein laa paya hai!!!
Thnx bol usko!!!
Chalo first meet shanti se widout ny drama ho gai!!!
N most imp widout ny fyt ho gai!!! 😆 😆
Nw its kriya's turn for d performance!!!
So uska aur rey ka performance nxt update mein hoga!!!
Excited for d dance of both!!!
Thnx for pm!!!
Aur i knw k aaj hi diya hai...bt still jaldi karna!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Reshu i love u jaan...
Amaxing concept...abi zyada nai kahungi..bt seriously..its hell awesome...
Nd m gonna stalk it..so update fast
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written!! 👏
loved it resh 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res will read it soon resh
unres

ur beginning was really good

its just simple and sweet
great job resh
Edited by nature-beauty - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres!!!!
yaaayyy finally m commenting!!!
haayyyeee my sweety I just loved ur new concept!!!!
its amaazing!!!
starting hi kria ke POV se Kia...and I loved it!!!!
aisa lag raha tha Wo starting 3-4 lines abt dance mein bol rahi hun!!! Same POV!!! :* I love u!!!!
kria's dad does it supports dance baap re...
argghhh I don't understand y ppl have such kinda a thinking...
usse engineer banake he wil spoil kria's life...
but Kria ki frnd meghana!!! DID ke auditions!! Supporting kria!!! Wooowww
rey ki sis!!! Chhhooo cute!!!
rey dance ke naam par uth gaya!!! ^_^
and jab rey NE dialogue Mara for nisha mereko laga Wo mere liye hai!!! :p
I felt so connected to these people!!!
and den DID ke din KR miling!!! Haayayyyeee
unki meet sooo cute tha!!!
rey finding kria weird!! Hehheheee :p
and den dono ek dusre ke saath itne mix up ho Gaye!!!
sooo nice!!! Loved it!!!
ab waiting for the next part!!!!jaldi update karna sweety!!!
Edited by arsha_simran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Reshu... [:)]

Love ur new concept.

Kriya ki dad hate dancing.

Nd use engineer banana chahata hai.

Usko to apnai beti ki talent ko encourage karna chahiye tha.

Poor kriya...

Lekin uski pas ek goog frnd hai na"meghna"

I love her character...

DID auditions...

Sunte hi main gayi arshaland[:P]

Rey ke lie stop dancing=stop living

Apne sis ko chudail bulaata hai...kaddu [:x]

Bcz of nishhh audition mein to pahooncha.

Aur kriyaansh ka metting.

Kriya ki universe ji...

Agar isi tarah bulaati to ek din universe ji zaroor neeche aa jaayega...

Thank god is bar no kriyaansh fighting...

And no love at first sight.

Lagta hai Kriya and rey se kriyaansh banne mein toda time lagega.

Pyaar ko dheere dheere hone do.

Totally loved it.

Continue soon nd pm karna mat bhoolna dear...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazinggg start😉
KR in DID😊
Kriya's parents r not happy wit her dancing
D KR convo was cuteee😊
continue soon😊

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