Ragna FF - My World - Part 4 UPDATED

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi everyone. I am a Ragna addict, who survive on daily dosage of Raghav/Ragna scenes / FF. I am usually a silent reader in this forum, well this is the only show I watch apart from Ye Hai Mohabbatein, but I just had an idea for a FF so wanted to give it a shot. Please do share your comments and criticism.



So here goes...

It was finally here...his marriage to the one person he loved the most in the whole world...no that wasn't true...she wasn't the just the person he loved the most in the world, she was his world.

Raghav looked at himself in the mirror, wondering how a single person could completely change his life. He used to be a very patient man. Afterall he had waited years to get his revenge against the Kapoor's, but now he had learnt that he couldn't even wait a moment.

He grew more and more impatient as he waited for the muharat. How much longer would it take for him to see her again. He could hardly spend a second not looking at her and because of all the rasam's he wasn't allowed to go meet her. He personally didn't care about the rasam's or what others might think of him for breaking it, but he knew that they were important to her and therefore had tried to stay away. But now it was more than he could handle. He had to see her.

He slowly sneaked out of his room and stealthily made way to the room which she was to be using. He made sure that no one spotted him, lest they make him turn away. At last he reached her room and fortunately it wasn't locked. He slowly opened it and peered inside. At first he didn't see anyone in the room and was dejected. But then he saw Paakhi's reflection in a mirror. She was standing in front of a full length mirror doing touch ups to her make up. She looked completely different in her bridal attire. She almost looked like a bridal doll, elegant yet innocent. He felt a wave of guilt as he thought about the numerous times he had planned to use her in order to bring down the Kapoor's. And yet he owed all his happiness to her.

He looked behind him, to see if anyone had seen him and then stepped into the room. He was just about to close the door behind him, when...
(P - Paakhi and R - Raghav)

P - "Raghav , what are you doing here?" Great. He was hoping that she wouldn't notice him, but no such luck.

R - "Woh mein..."

P - "No, this is not right. You are not supposed to see the bride before the wedding."

R - "Look Paakhi, I just..."

P - "A no is a no, you have to leave right now."

R - "But Paakhi..."

P - "NO" Saying this she started pushing him outside.

R - "But I just wanted to..." He turned to look back at her, only to have the door closed on his face.


So that was the first part. So how is the start, please do share your comments 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intresting..lukin forward to read more..
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Nice start...I wonder how ragna r gonna get married..
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Lovely start
I hope RagNa are getting married...
I can't wait to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Did i misread it in my sleep!!!! Did u mention pakhi as bride?????? My heart jst skipped a bit make ur update fast...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArshiR

Did i misread it in my sleep!!!! Did u mention pakhi as bride?????? My heart jst skipped a bit make ur update fast...


Omg I had the same rxn I double checked to c I didn't read wrong HAHAHAHHA🤣
but it doesn't matter as u should write whatever makes you happy...and we all just love reading stories! update soon! very sweet&interesting
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make it fast getting heart attack😉 nice one interesting
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Originally posted by: yellowpurse


Omg I had the same rxn I double checked to c I didn't read wrong HAHAHAHHA🤣
but it doesn't matter as u should write whatever makes you happy...and we all just love reading stories! update soon! very sweet&interesting


yeah she shuld rite wat she luvs my reaction was due to sleep well mentionin Rakhi cn raise sm eyebrws bt lets take it in a positive way...as long as the stry is gud nt to worry at all m so waitin for the nxt update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting, Please continue soon !
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intersting
update soon

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