ARHI OS : YOU HAVE CHANGED *Poem by Vandana on Pg 17* - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

She was his wife beautiful & sexy
Desire & passion they felt mutually
In awe of his good looks was she
And to look handsome his ability
Despite him working like crazy
And at office getting tired daily

In a mood for love was her Arnavji
She too tired to enjoy unfortunately
With his cheeks he got naughty
And marked her so possessively
Forever greedy for her was he
Although tonight was not meant to be

Wrapped in his arms, she slept blissfully
Leaving him wanting more & insatiably
His disappointment made her feel guilty
A plan to appease him she thought instantly
A perfect ambience she created magical
Dressed in white she waited seductively

Mesmerised by her avatar was he surely
In front of him in a dress his wife a beauty
Surpassing his expectations most definitely
Little did she know he had conned her easily
His act in the morning to gain her sympathy
Was preplanned with care very cunningly

All was fair in love he declared smirkingly
But not to be outdone was smart Khushi
A plan she too thought so carefully
Something that was right up his alley
Luring him to the bathroom enticingly
Her hands on him he felt excitedly

But soon he was shocked unexpectedly
Trapped by his loving wife so witty
Punishment for teasing her shamelessly
Shaving his stubble so very pokey
All fairs in love she declared proudly
The joke was now on her sexy hubby

Aayat I hope you like this poem and it justifies this funny witty and brilliant story ...


I didn't like it I loved it!!
I've told you this before and I'm going to repeat it - You've a talent.
I feel honored that you wrote a poem for my OS.
You covered every little nuance and every incident be it her thoughts about her husband or what Arnav wanted. You have a way with words in such a rhythmic manner. Your words sing a story so beautifully.



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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Khushi believed Arnav when he said 'you are changed Khushi' and planned a surprise for him 😉 His trick worked then but later, he is trapped by KKGSR 😆

Beautiful OS Aayat 👏

I don't like Arnav with thick stubble too, he looks awesome in Diwali episodes 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
aahh!!...i was blushing fully reading it!!...😳
loved it...naughty arshi!!...❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
I am humbled and honoured with this gesture..I truly am...you have left me stunned and rendered me speechless...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Wow that was a lovely OS...Very cute and romantic 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Too cute!!
Its the first work of yours that I have just read and must say it was really good.
Planning to go through other stories too..
Loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
The poem..it was so sweet:)
the entire story in the poem..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Amazing OS 👏👏
Loved it 😛

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